issue130 WORDS: 398 TIME: 0:45:00 DATE: 2007-1-31

king888UID: 2285811

• TOPIC: ISSUE130 - "How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."
  

WORDS: 398          TIME: 0:45:00          DATE: 2007-1-31

Among people not only in the Unite State but also in the other countries all over the world the discussion of the high controversial issue that how to socialize the children and the benefit of it has come into vogue during the last decade. Does the socialized children really can destiny of society? Judgment should be dispersed before giving the conclusion. In my point of my view, both positive and negative aspects are elicited by socializing children. And the essential of the education is not only to raise children's sociality.

The destiny of society is determined not only the children's sociality but also many other things such as children’s interest in the art, music and litterateur. Not the technologies improvement and the well-provided laws but also the great works of the artists and musicians are the source of society's developing. Our lives would not be always under the large burden with the only purpose that preparing for the next step, but we should savor the experience of live and learn that the art will bring about much more developing of society. Without Van Gogh, we will not enjoy the great painting of the representative of impressionism; without Shakespeare, we would not realize the disordinary ambition will .So, we should provide children not only sociality but also psychological emotions.

How do we increase our children through our current education system to provide the need discussed above? I think the teachers fail to provide our children a core curriculum which would lead us to the great ocean of truth. However, nowadays we are seemingly in a huge supermarket, picking up pearls and rubbish at random, but we do not recognize what we have picked can take effective benefit for us growing up as a really nutriment. Some of the fault is ourselves--we don't know what we need actually, but I think as the backup of the education, the teachers should provide a more core curriculum integrated literature, art, sociality and other relative course.

All in all, it's very likely that not all the people will reach the same point shared with me, but the significant potential aspect that realizing the essential of the education and the source of the society's destiny is actually contribution at first. As the backup of the nation, the government should look for a bit more balance between the children's interest and the need of the society.

dallenlinUID: 2247050

The destiny of society is determined not only the children's sociality but also many other things such as children’s interest in the art, music and litterateur. Not(only) the technologies improvement and (or)the well-provided laws but also the great works of the artists and musicians are the source of society's developing. Our lives would not be always under the large burden with the only purpose that preparing for the next step, but we should savor the experience of live and learn(learning) that the art will bring about much more developing of society. Without Van Gogh, we will not enjoy the great painting of the representative of impressionism; without Shakespeare, we would not realize the disordinary ambition will .So, we should provide children not only sociality but also psychological emotions.

How do we increase our children through our current education system to provide the need discussed above? I think the teachers fail to provide our children a core curriculum which would lead us to the great ocean of truth. However, nowadays we are seemingly in a huge supermarket, picking up pearls and rubbish at random, but we do not recognize what we have picked can take effective benefit for us growing up as a really nutriment. Some of the fault is ourselves--we don't know what we need actually, but I think(可以删掉） as the backup of the education, the teachers should provide a more core curriculum integrated literature, art, sociality and other relative course.

All in all, it's very likely that not all the people will reach the same point shared with me, but the significant potential aspect that realizing the essential of the education and the source of the society's destiny is actually contribution at first. As the backup of the nation, the government should look for a bit more balance between the children's interest and the need of the society.

　　进步得好快！！

tongwawawUID: 2176887

Among people not only in the Unite State but also in the other countries all over the world the discussion of the high controversial issue that how to socialize the children and the benefit of it has come into vogue during the last decade. Does the socialized children really can (加determine) destiny of society? Judgment should be dispersed before giving the conclusion. In my point of my view, both positive and negative aspects are elicited by socializing children. And the essential(应该是名词形式吧) of the education is not only to raise(develop) children's sociality.

The destiny of society is determined not only the children's sociality but also many other things such as children’s interest in the art, music and litterateur. Not the technologies improvement and the well-provided laws but also the great works of the artists and musicians are the source of society's developing. Our lives would not be always under the large burden with the only purpose that preparing for the next step, but we should savor the experience of live and learn that the art will bring about much more developing (development) of society. Without Van Gogh, we will not enjoy the great painting of the representative of impressionism; without Shakespeare, we would not realize the disordinary(extraordinary) ambition will .So, we should provide children not only sociality but also psychological emotions.

How do we increase our children through our current education system to provide the need discussed above? I think the teachers fail to provide our children a core curriculum which would lead us to the great ocean of truth. However, nowadays we are seemingly in a huge supermarket, picking up pearls and rubbish at random, but we do not recognize what we have picked can take (make) effective benefit for us growing up as a really nutriment. Some of the fault is ourselves--we don't know what we need actually, but I think as the backup of the education, the teachers should provide a more core curriculum integrated literature, art, sociality and other relative course.
没有例子,感觉有些空洞啊

All in all, it's very likely that not all the people will reach the same point shared with me, but the significant potential aspect that realizing the essential of the education and the source of the society's destiny is actually contribution at first. As the backup of the nation, the government should look for a bit more balance between the children's interest and the need of the society.