Issue160 【CSMY作文互改小组】第九次作业 有拍必回

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Issue160 [总频64]
"The most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives. Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little."
对于一位强有力的领导者来说，最关键的能力就是要对一些原则和目标坚定不移。任何领导如果很频繁的、很轻易的为大众意志而转移的话，他将会一事无成。

观点 有保留的支持
提纲
1、坚定的原则和目标可以为领导者赢得信任和支持，使民众或员工清楚的明白国家和团队需要实现的具体目标，并增加这种认同感
2、恪守原则和目标能给事业带来发展新的机遇，举海尔的例子
3、很多原则和目标源于民众，领导者要学会选择顺应民意的原则和目标，这样更容易获得领导生涯的成功,罗斯福的例子

It is no escaping the fact that leaders play a vital role in the daily routine of certain realms. Does effective leadership require that a leader consistently follow his or her principles and objectives? I fundamentally agree with the speaker with the notion that leaders' strict commitment to the principles and objectives is quite responsible for inspiring his or her staff as well as facilitating the development of the enterprise. However, the speaker overlooks that popular opinions consist with leader's principles and objectives quite often. Leaders should also yield to popular will while adhering to their own principles.

To begin with, stubborn commitment to one's principles and objectives could serve an effective leader's interest in earning trust from his or her staff, which would raise credibility upon the decision towards enterprise. It is very important for an effective leader to build up a leading image, in that his or her staff always expect their leader to be endowed with ambition, wisdom, and capability. People want a leader who can lead them to a triumph. Conversely, was the leader not steadfastly committed to the principles and objectives, the staff might doubt whether the leader has made causal and unreasonable decision to make the team into troubles he or she would not abide by. Furthermore, by definite expressing the attitude toward the principles and objectives, the staff would understand the team's ultimate goals more clearly. For that matter, every member in the team will consider the enterprise a seamless whole to attain the achievement. In short, it is the commitment to principles and objectives that helps the leaders win their prestige as well as makes members embracing a wish for a better enterprise work more vigorously and more efficiently.

Moreover, the development of enterprise hinges on the principles and objectives which the leader consistently follows. Facing such a rapid progress of society, the leader should show great foresight and decisive action, which guides the march of enterprise. Once the leader is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion, the enterprise might miss the god-given opportunity for development. Take Rumin Zhang, the CEO of Haier Group, for example. Ever since the time of Haier's foundation, Zhang had considered about seeking to exploit the overseas market. Some people thought it was too hasty to do that, provided the international competition and diverse culture might bring enormous challenge which might result in the downfall of Haier Company. Nevertheless, Zhang strictly adhered to his objectives, learning experience from foreign companies and at the same time managing Haier assiduously. And now, Haier has become the third largest white goods manufacturer in the world. Had Zhang advocating exploitation for global market yet been persuaded by close advisors that domestic market would suffice Haier's survival, no doubt the company would have still maintained the initial scale. In a word, stubborn adherence to principles and objectives creates chances for the development of enterprise.

However, it is also essential for an effective leader to consider and examine popular opinions. Admittedly, sometimes shifts in popular opinions prevent leaders from decisive action which would irrevocably shake the leader's confidence in the principles and objectives they strictly follow. Just like a sailing ship in the sea which deviates from the usual path due to frequent winds and waves would not reach its destination. Yet, timely considering popular opinions could help the leader keep the pace of social advancement and cope with diverse situations. Furthermore, leaders' principles and objectives are not always mutually exclusive with popular opinions; actually the principles and objectives of almost all the successful leaders emerge from popular opinions. Wise leaders should devote themselves to principles and objectives catering to public, which would raise possibility for their future success. In this view of point, Franklin Roosevelt is a good example. At the bottom of the Great Depression, a quarter of the labor force was unemployed, the economy in collapse, and the nation in despair. Government should give the public confidence and the citizens also wish to see a fortitudinous government. With his proven leadership experience and intention to revitalize American economy, Roosevelt created the New Deal which consisted with the popular desirability and contributed to later recovery of the economy. Undoubtedly, to be an effective leader, one must also keep in touch with popular opinions.

In sum, the speaker's assertion is not without merit that it is quite important for an effective leader to follow particular principles and objectives. But at same time, we can not reach an extreme conclusion that never should leaders consider popular opinions. Wise leaders would devote themselves to principles and objective catering to popular will.




[ 本帖最后由 siyuanding 于 2007-2-1 17:12 编辑 ]

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It is no escaping the fact that leaders play a vital role in the daily routine of certain realms. Does effective leadership require that a leader consistently follow his or her principles and objectives? I fundamentally agree with the speaker with the notion that leaders' strict commitment to the principles and objectives is quite responsible for inspiring his or her staff s as well as facilitating the development of the enterprise. However, the speaker overlooks that popular opinions consist with leader's principles and objectives quite often 这句话不是一个句子，你要表示的应该是有时大众观点与领导的原则和目标不一样吧. Leaders should also yield to popular will while adhering to their own principles.

To begin with, stubborn commitment to one's principles and objectives could serve an effective leader's interest in earning trust from his or her staff, which would raise credibility upon the decision towards enterprise. It is very important for an effective leader to build up a leading image, in that his or her staffs always expect their leader to be endowed with ambition, wisdom, and capability. People want a expect such a leader who can lead them to a triumph. Conversely, wasis the leader not steadfastly committed to the principles and objectives, the staff might doubt whether the leader has made causal and unreasonable decision to make the team into troubles he or she would not abide by怀疑后面应该说正面的话吧，应该说doubt whether the leader is able to make right decision to induct them to success. Furthermore, by definite expressing the attitude toward the principles and objectives, the staff would understand the team's ultimate goals more clearly. For that matter, every member in the team will consider the enterprise a seamless whole to attain the achievement. In short, it is the commitment to principles and objectives that helps the leaders win their prestige as well as makes members embracing a wish for a better enterprise work more vigorously and more efficiently. 你很多用it is 开头的句子，可尝试用动名词开头

Moreover, the development of enterprise hinges on the principles and objectives which the leader consistently follows. Facing such a rapid progress of society, the leader should show great foresight and decisive action, which guides the march of enterprise. Once the leader is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion, the enterprise might miss the god-given opportunity for development. Take Rumin Zhang, the CEO of Haier Group, for example. Ever since the time of Haier's foundation Since Haier was found in 多少年我不记得了, Zhang had considered about seeking to  exploit the overseas marketZhang has committed himself to exploiting overseas market. Some people thought it was too hasty venturesome to do that, provided the international competition and diverse culture might bring enormous challenge which might result in the downfall of Haier Company because changeful international competition and diverse culture might result in the downfall of Hiaer Company. Nevertheless, Zhang strictly adhered to his objectives, learning experience from foreign companies and at the same time managing Haier assiduously 可否把三个动词并列. And now, Haier has become the third largest white goods manufacturer in the world. Had Zhang advocating exploitation for global market yet been persuaded by close advisors that domestic market would suffice Haier's survival 这句拗口，不知表达什么意思，是否应改为if Zhang’s opinon is not accepted that exploiting global market , no doubt the company would have still maintained the initial scale. In a word, stubborn adherence to principles and objectives creates chances for the development of enterprise. 感觉刻意去构造长句，反而不能让人一目了然你的意思

However, it is also essential for an effective leader to consider and examine popular opinions. Admittedly, sometimes shifts in popular opinions prevent leaders from decisive action which would irrevocably shake the leader's confidence in the principles and objectives they strictly follow. Just like a sailing ship in the sea which deviates from the usual path due to frequent winds and waves would not reach its destination. Yet, timely considering popular opinions could help the leader keep the pace of social advancement and cope with diverse situations. Furthermore, leaders' principles and objectives are not always mutually exclusive with popular opinions; actually the principles and objectives of almost all the successful leaders emerge from popular opinions. Wise leaders should devote themselves to principles and objectives catering to public, which would raise possibility for their future success. In this view of point, Franklin Roosevelt is a good example. At the bottom of the Great Depression, a quarter of the labor force was unemployed, the economy in collapse, and the nation in despair. Government should give the public confidence and the citizens also wish to see a fortitudinous government. With his proven leadership experience and intention to revitalize American economy, Roosevelt created the New Deal which consisted with the popular desirability and contributed to later recovery of the economy. Undoubtedly, to be an effective leader, one must also keep in touch with popular opinions.

In sum, the speaker's assertion is not without merit not without merit什么意思，你是想用否定之否定句型吗？ that it is quite important for an effective leader to follow particular principles and objectives. But at same time, we can not reach an extreme conclusion that never should leaders consider popular opinions. Wise leaders would devote themselves to principles and objective catering to popular will.
不知你是否限时，如果限时的话，能写700多字，并达到这种水平，难能可贵

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It is no escaping the fact [There is no espcape from the fact that更好]that leaders play a vital role in the dailyroutine of certain realms. Does effective leadership requires that aleader consistently follow his or her principles and objectives? Ifundamentally agree with the speaker with the notion that leaders'strict commitment to the principles and objectives is quite responsiblefor inspiring his or her staffs as well asfacilitating the development of the enterprise. However, the speakeroverlooks that popular opinions consist with leader's principles andobjectives quite often 这句话不是一个句子，你要表示的应该是有时大众观点与领导的原则和目标不一样吧. Leaders should also yield to popular will while adhering to their own principles.

However, the speakermust overlook the fact that the popular opinions consisting withleaders' principles and objectives is not so often that leaders, atsome time, should yield to the popular will while adhering to their ownpeinciples. 你想表达的应该是这样的吧？

To begin with, stubborn [stubborn 顽固的, 不听话的, 执拗的, 棘手的， 一般带有贬义] commitment to one's principles and objectivescould serve as an effective leader's interest [这个interest表示兴趣还是？] in earning trust from his orher staff, which would raise credibility upon the decision towardsenterprise. It is very important for an effective leader to build up aleading image, in that his or her staffs always expect their leader to be endowed with ambition, wisdom, and capability. People want a expect such a leader who can lead them to a triumph [lead sb to triumph]. Conversely, wasisthe leader not steadfastly committed to the principles and objectives,the staff might doubt whether the leader has made causal andunreasonable decision to make the team into troubles he or she wouldnot abide by怀疑后面应该说正面的话吧，应该说doubt whether the leader is able to make right decision to induct them to success.Furthermore, by definitely expressing the attitude toward the principlesand objectives, the staff would understand the team's ultimate goalsmore clearly. For that matter, every member in the team will considerthe enterprise a seamless whole to attain the achievement. In short, itis the commitment to principles and objectives that help the leaderswin their prestige as well as make members embracing a wish for abetter enterprise work more vigorously and more efficiently. 你很多用it is 开头的句子，可尝试用动名词开头

Moreover, the development of enterprise hinges on the principles andobjectives which the leader consistently follows. Facing such a rapidprogress of society, the leader should show great foresight anddecisive action, which guide the march of enterprise. Once the leaderis quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinions, theenterprise might miss the god-given opportunity for development. TakeRumin Zhang, the CEO of Haier Group, for example. Ever since the timeof Haier's foundation Since Haier was found in 多少年我不记得了, Zhang had considered about seeking to  exploit the overseas marketZhang has committed himself to exploiting overseas market. Some people thought it was too hasty venturesome todo that, provided the international competition and diverse culturemight bring enormous challenge which might result in the downfall ofHaier Company because changeful international competition and diverse culture might result in the downfall of Hiaer Company.Nevertheless, Zhang strictly adhered to his objectives, learningexperience from foreign companies and at the same time managing Haierassiduously 可否把三个动词并列. And now, Haier hasbecome the third largest white goods manufacturer in the world. HadZhang advocating exploitation for global market yet been persuaded byclose advisors that domestic market would suffice Haier's survival 这句拗口，不知表达什么意思，是否应改为if Zhang’s opinon is not accepted that exploiting global market ,no doubt the company would have still maintained the initial scale. Ina word, stubborn adherence to principles and objectives creates chancesfor the development of enterprise. 感觉刻意去构造长句，反而不能让人一目了然你的意思


However, it is also essential for an effective leader to consider andexamine popular opinions. Admittedly, sometimes shifts in popularopinions prevent leaders from decisive action which would irrevocablyshake the leader's confidence in the principles and objectives theystrictly follow. Just like a sailing ship in the sea which deviatesfrom the usual path due to frequent winds and waves would not reach itsdestination. Yet, timely considering popular opinions could help theleader keep the pace of social advancement and cope with diversesituations. Furthermore, leaders' principles and objectives are notalways mutually exclusive with popular opinions; actually theprinciples and objectives of almost all the successful leaders emergefrom popular opinions. Wise leaders should devote themselves toprinciples and objectives catering to public, which would raisepossibility for their future success. In this view of point[in this point of view], FranklinRoosevelt is a good example. At the bottom of the Great Depression, aquarter of the labor force was unemployed, the economy in collapse, andthe nation in despair. Government should give the public confidence andthe citizens also wish to see a fortitudinous government. With hisproven leadership experience and intention to revitalize Americaneconomy, Roosevelt created the New Deal which consisted with thepopular desirability and contributed to later recovery of the economy.Undoubtedly, to be an effective leader, one must also keep in touchwith popular opinions.

In sum, the speaker's assertion is not without merit not without merit什么意思，你是想用否定之否定句型吗？that it is quite important for an effective leader to follow particularprinciples and objectives. But at same time, we can not reach anextreme conclusion that never should leaders consider popular opinions.Wise leaders would devote themselves to principles and objectivecatering to popular will.
不知你是否限时，如果限时的话，能写700多字，并达到这种水平，难能可贵