issue131 arts reveal hidden ideas?[自由女神小组第10次作业]

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这个题目实在是不会写，参考了好多文章才写了这么点。大家帮我猛拍，谢谢！！

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131."The arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal me otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society."
agree
1. the music reveal the ideas and impulses of a society (examples:the balladry reveal the ideas and impulses in the ancient society)
2. the literature also reveal the ideas and impulses of a society (examples:the literature in Revival of Learning
Period reveal many ideas and impluses in the former period)
3. we should make full use of the arts to find the otherwise hidden ideas and impluses of a society .

Since antiquity, people spend all their lives in pursuing the good all over the world. As The issue said, during the period the human develops, the art reveal the hidden ideas and impulse of a society. I surely agree on it. Art attract the attention of the public and approbation of the society by means of depicting the feeling and attitudes of the individuals in the society. Art is considered to derive from the real life and it is higher than the reality in life. With some imaginative it takes, art has done a lot impulses of a society.

Firstly, it is easy to find that the music reveal the ideas and impulses of a society. It shows people’s truly spirit. Music just like human’s another mouth, from the music, we can taste the affection of the composer to the society from the rhythm of the music. As the balladry is popular during the whole society, we can get the people’s hope and the things people look forward to. The ninth symphony, written by Beethoven, the great composer in German, tells us the “Evenness and Freedom” which influence the most composers in Bourgeois Revolution in France.

Not only form the music, from the literatures we can also get the hidden ideas and impulses of a society from the literatures too. For a instance, “the Century Creation”, a painting from Michelangelo, a great artist in Renaissance, tell us the subject that “the arousal of the human being and the longing for liberation mankind”. As the time many works can reveal the inner conflict and thought of the low class, the art painted by the Michelangelo expressed the impulses and the hidden ideas exactly.

We can not forget the reading literature, which surely let us know the experience of the society. A hundred years ago, there was a writer call Xueqin Cao in china had wrote a book named “Hong Lou Meng”, which described the degenerate of feudality and predicted the bane of the feudality. On considering the hidden ideas of the literature, we can have a thorough understanding in the conflict of a society.

Overall, we can regard the art as a window when we look out the society. It can reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society.

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131."The arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal me otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society."
agree
1. the music reveal the ideas and impulses of a society (examples:the balladry reveal the ideas and impulses in the ancient society)
2. the literature also reveal the ideas and impulses of a society (examples:the literature in Revival of Learning
Period reveal many ideas and impluses in the former period)
3. we should make full use of the arts to find the otherwise hidden ideas and impluses of a society .

Since antiquity, people spend all their lives in pursuing the good all over the world. As The issue said, during the period (when) the human develops, the art reveal the hidden ideas and impulse of a society. I surely agree on(with) it. Art attract the attention of the public and approbation of the society by means of depicting the feeling and attitudes of the individuals in the society. Art is considered to derive from the real life and it is higher than the reality in life. With some imaginative it takes, art has done a lot impulses of a society(开头有些长了,不用说后面这么多,表明观点就好了).

Firstly, it is easy to find that the music reveals the ideas and impulses of a society. It shows people’s truly spirits. Music just like human’s another mouth, and from the music, we can taste the affection(expression比较好,因为后面用到to 了) of the composer to the society from the rhythm(这个词用的很好) of the music. As the balladry(例子不错) is popular during the whole society, we can get the people’s hope and the things people look forward to. The ninth symphony, written by Beethoven, the great composer in German, tells us the “Evenness and Freedom” which influence the most composers in Bourgeois Revolution in France.

Not only form the music, but also from the literatures we can also get the hidden ideas and impulses of a society from the literatures too. For an instance, “the Century Creation”, a painting from Michelangelo, a great artist in Renaissance, tell us the subject that “the arousal of the human being and the longing for liberation mankind”. As the time many works can reveal the inner conflict and thought of the low class, the art painted by the Michelangelo expressed the impulses and the hidden ideas exactly.

We can not forget the reading literature, which surely let us know the experience of the society. A hundred years ago, there was a writer call Xueqin Cao(中国的例子老美还是看不懂滴) in china had wrote a book named “Hong Lou Meng”, which described the degenerate of feudality and predicted the bane of the feudality. On considering the hidden ideas of the literature, we can have a thorough understanding in the conflict of a society.

Overall, we can regard the art as a window when(from where) we look out the society. It can reveals the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society(不要仅仅重复主题,最好有所改变).

总结:
优点:
1.观点明确,行文流畅
2.一些例子很新颖,Michelangelo的例子

缺点:
1.中国的例子少举,因为老美不懂我们文化
2.结尾在升华一下,开头有些长

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