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Issue 8
"It is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public."

I agree with the assertion about that withholding information from the public, sometimes, is necessary, and even desirable for political leaders. But the leaders also need take on thing into mind -- that is not all of the time should they conceal the fact from the public.

In the first place, political information, as we known, includes some significant secrets which will affect the public safety even national security if they are disclosing to the public. For example, the best strategies to arrest ticklish enemy is stealthily scout them and grasp the opportunity to capture them all that is what we said “enemy in bright while we in clandestinely（敌明我暗 我不会说）”. If the tailing plain was leaked to the public, how do the police carry the program out when enemy have savvied it?

In addition to political strategies or national classified information, political leaders consider the possible public panic may be raised buy public some harmful activity such as terrorist fix a bomb in a restaurant or elsewhere, so publicizing the terrorists’ behavior to the people who live in the restaurant is unwise and the efficient way is to evacuate the masses by other excuses and pretenses.

However, there are some things must be transparent to the citizen, otherwise the result of obturating everything from the fellows possible lead to corruption and tyranny. An employable leader will open the guidelines and the strategies to the fellows when they come to the development of the city or improvement of the quality of daily life, especially the strategies of the financial investment which come from taxes of citizens. It is necessary for political leaders that acquaint themselves with each fund on account and open to appointed department or public so as to minimize the defalcation and response for people.

Also, blank some information, for example SARS happened in China and the birds’ flu in Thailand may dangers the security of citizens’ life. Both of them should be well-controlled before they spread to a broad bond if the leaders make a correct decision at that moment that publicizing the truly condition to citizens to enhance their watchfulness to avoid the rate of infection. The result of the miss decision is that: people and birds incessant died for direct or indirect affection of the disease, and the trend not controlled till the information was publicized to the masses.

To conclusion, when the withholding information as to the national secrets or something which will cause public panic if were publicized, conceal these news is necessary and desirable, but when it related to the certain epidemic disease, the leaders’ movies and ideas, the information need to declare to people for avoiding more harmful to citizen or deceiving to public buy some leaders.

[ 本帖最后由 rixiaohan 于 2007-2-13 09:44 编辑 ]

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I agree with the assertion about that withholding information from the public, sometimes, is necessary, and even desirable for political leaders. But the leaders also need take on thing into mind -- that is not all of the time不同情况考虑不同？嗯，明白，理解，可是用time好么？最重要的是没有说出来什么情况该说某种condition? should they conceal the fact from the public.
In the first place, political information, as we known, includes some significant secrets which will affect the public safety even national security if they are disclosing to the public. For example, the best strategies to arrest ticklish enemy is stealthily scout them and grasp the opportunity to capture them all that is what we said “enemy in bright while we in clandestinely（敌明我暗 我不会说）”. If the tailing plain was leaked to the public, how do the police carry the program out when enemy have savvied it? 晕，抓特务亚，这个害怕走漏风声，才不告诉群众？虽然我理解，但是理解上还是有断层的public里包含间谍？还是public管不住自己的嘴，总得说清楚了吧。public safety？national security？看不出来呀
In addition to political strategies or national classified information, political leaders consider the possible public panic may be raised buy public some harmful activity such as terrorist fix a bomb in a restaurant or elsewhere, so publicizing the terrorists’ behavior to the people 赫赫，这样做可是够狠的 who live in the restaurant is unwise and the efficient wise?way is to evacuate the masses by other excuses and pretenses.这段句子写得。。恩，看意思明白 ，建议改下吧
However, there are some things must be transparent to the citizen,单数？ otherwise the result of obturating everything from the fellows possible lead to corruption and tyranny. An employable leader will open the guidelines and the strategies to the fellows when they come to the development of the city or improvement of the quality of daily life, especially the strategies of the需要the？ financial investment 单数？which come from taxes of citizens. It is necessary for political leaders that acquaint themselves with each fund on account和文章主题木有关系吧 and open to appointed department or public so as to minimize the defalcation and response for people.
Also, blank some information, for example SARS happened in China and the birds’ flu 印象是Birds Fluin Thailand may dangers the security of citizens’ life. Both of them should be well-controlled before they spread to a broad bond if the leaders make a correct decision at that moment that publicizing the truly condition to citizens to enhance their watchfulness to and? avoid the rate of infection. The result of the miss decision is that: people and birds incessant died for direct or indirect affection of the disease, and the trend not controlled till the information was publicized to the masses.还是觉得这样的例子举一个详细的就好了。像这样放在一起不太舒服?好像两种传染病联系很大的样子
To conclusion, when the withholding information as to the national secrets or something which will cause public panic if were publicized, conceal these news is necessary and desirable, but when it related to the certain epidemic disease, the leaders’ movies and ideas, 这些情况只是你举的例子吧，不管是正面的还是反面的都没有把所有的都包含了。所以即便文章是case by case的写法，也看上去不够深入the information need to declare to people for avoiding more harmful to citizen or deceiving to public buy some leaders.小小意见，产生误导概不负责哟。另祝新春快乐！