issue103

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ISSUE103 - "The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives."
1 Admittedly, 研究历史不是那么profitable
2 Without question, those historic issues with obvious relevance to our daily lives benefit us greatly.
3 It is hard to determine whether certain historic events are relevant to our lives. From my standpoint of view, all the historic events have more or less contribution to our society even some of them are subtle.

The speaker claims that only when the study of history is relevant to our daily lives, it has value. As far as I am concerned I agree that the historic events relevant to our daily lives are very important. However, we cannot ignore the significance of those ones which seem to be not so close to us.

Admittedly, in our modern times, everything in the world is material-oriented and people's standards for values take on some practical and utilitarian characteristics. Unlike the fields of science and technology where once something original and useful is created, it may bring large fortunate to human beings the study of history seems to be not so profitable. So, people in our society often pay little attention to study history. However, throughout the recorded history, most people will agree that modern human beings are standing on the shoulders of our predecessors by the means of reading their books, utilizing their methods or inheriting their spirits. Therefore, whether the relevance to our daily lives is obvious or not we must pay enough attention to the study of history.

Without question, those historic issues with obvious relevance to our daily lives benefit us greatly. Our human history is an integrated book filled with all kinds of examples and illustrations. Retrospect from our history many great inventors are famous due to their contribution to our society. For those inventors, on the process of inventing they usually reflect some valuable characters such as diligence, persistence and innovation which are important for one to go to success. We can set those great men as our examples and encourage ourselves when we encounter difficulties. Moreover, studying history can help us repeat no mistakes which our ancestors had made. When exploring the world, our predecessors might use some inappropriate methods trying to get their aim then failed due to their limited development level. Under this condition, modern scientists usually realize the limitation of our ancestors and improve those research techniques to conduct their research. So by studying the wrong methods and thoughts of our ancestors we can avoid repeating the same mistakes and save our time.

It is hard to determine whether certain historic events are relevant to our lives. From my standpoint of view, all the historic events have more or less contribution to our society even some of them are subtle. As for those historic issues which seem to be far away from us and not so relevant to our daily lives, they still have profound significance to us. For instance, the cause of the twice War World has nothing to do with our current lives, but there are still many historians to pursue that. Because if we can find out the origin and cause of the wars, we are likely to deal with the conflicts between countries and individuals well and keep our society in a stable situation. Therefore, studying historic events which have not evident relevance to us also has its inner importance.

All in all, from history, a host of knowledge and experience can serve as guideline of today’s actions. The study of study is indispensable to the development of our society. No matter the relationship with us is we should not ignore the significance of it.

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issue103


ISSUE103 - "The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives."
1 Admittedly, 研究历史不是那么profitable
2 Without question, those historic issues with obvious relevance to our daily lives benefit us greatly.
3 It is hard to determine whether certain historic events are relevant to our lives. From my standpoint of view, all the historic events have more or less contribution to our society even some of them are subtle.

The speaker claims that only when the study of history is relevant to our daily lives, it has value. As far as I am concerned I agree that the historic events relevant to our daily lives are very important. However, we cannot ignore the significance of those ones which seem to be not so close to us.

Admittedly, in our modern times, everything in the world is material-oriented and people's standards for values take on some practical and utilitarian characteristics. Unlike the fields of science and technology where once something original and useful is created, it may bring large fortunate to human beings the study of history seems to be not so profitable. So, people in our society often pay little attention to study history. However, throughout the recorded history, most people will agree that modern human beings are standing on the shoulders of our predecessors by the means of reading their books, utilizing their methods or inheriting their spirits. Therefore, whether the relevance to our daily lives is obvious or not we must pay enough attention to the study of history.（这个题目让我们讨论的是，只研究历史中跟我们生活相关的，因此，我们是在研究历史是有用的前提下，来讨论历史话题中的实用与不实用的，所以说历史不那么有利可图，有点跑题，呵呵，我是这么认为的。这段不如说历史给我们带来的好处）

Without question, those historic issues with obvious relevance to our daily lives benefit us greatly. Our human history is an integrated book filled with all kinds of examples and illustrations. Retrospect from our history many great inventors are famous due to their contribution to our society. For those inventors, on the process of inventing they usually reflect some valuable characters such as diligence, persistence and innovation which are important for one（us比较好）to go to success. We can set those great men as our examples and encourage ourselves when we encounter difficulties. Moreover, studying history can help us repeat no mistakes which our ancestors had made. When exploring the world, our predecessors might use some inappropriate methods trying to get their aim then failed due to their limited development level. Under this condition, modern scientists usually realize the limitation of our ancestors and improve those research techniques to conduct their research. So by studying the wrong methods and thoughts of our ancestors we can avoid repeating the same mistakes and save our time.

It is hard to determine whether certain historic events are relevant to our lives. From my standpoint of view, all the historic events have more or less contribution to our society even some of them are subtle.（前面这两句有些矛盾哦，前面说历史是否跟我们的生活有关很难确定，后面又说我认为每个历史事件都和我们的生活或多或少相关，不如直接说第二句） As for those historic issues which seem to be far away from us and not so relevant to our daily lives, they still have profound significance to us. For instance, the cause of the twice War World has nothing to do with our current lives（前面说很多古老的历史，现在举的是二战的例子，二次世界大战应该离我们不远，而且也不象你说的，跟我们现在的生活毫不相干，至少那些2战老兵很多人还健在）, but there are still many historians to（who）pursue that. Because if we can find out the origin and cause of the wars, we are likely to deal with the conflicts between countries and individuals well and keep our society in a stable situation. Therefore, studying historic events which have not evident relevance to us also has its inner importance.

All in all, from history, a host of knowledge and experience can serve as guideline of today’s actions. The study of study（history） is indispensable to the development of our society. No matter (what)the relationship with us is we should not ignore the significance of it.


总结：结构清晰，开头结尾扣题，简洁
希望能多举些例子，因为历史话题最不缺乏的就是例子，而且例子要贴切。

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