Issue11 【0706G－LOVEAW小组】第六次作业

welcomebsUID: 2235250

TOPIC: ISSUE11 - "All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems."
WORDS: 594          TIME: 0:45:00          DATE: 2007-2-19


Is it necessary to establish a global university in order to solve the world's most persistent social problems? I agree with the speaker's claim that this action cans actually building a well-formed climate for scientists to have more communication, which will contribute a lot to the technology's development. However, we cannot ignore the obstacles that will impede our process to accomplish this great project; many factors will also demonstrate the suggestion's flaws.

The implicit rationale behind the speaker's statement seems to be that the rapid pace of the globalization force our to turn more help from our coworkers or other researches from different fields, for the results that the problems we confront are more complex and intricate than our ancestor faced in the past. To build a global university will attract many talent professors or students to join in the scientific discoveries, especially each nation which participate the program can offer enough found to support these outstanding individual a comfortable living level or perfect research situation. The program sounds inspiring and will enthusiastic scientist well to devote them intellect to the process of the high intensity of the research.

Despite the merits of the speaker's claim, there are two compelling arguments against the speaker's assertion that this project is necessary. Turning first to the problems that staffs and students will face to the different cultures and backgrounds. The great program will be not easy to take in to the practice as it portray. The diversity of the culture will impede the participant's communication. Conflict will occur inevitably as a result of the different religion beliefs or people's education level. People who has not enough toleration with others will find it is impossible for him to drip more in his special realm ,regardless that he indeed meet different perspectives that will really advance his research. Politic may play a important role in the global university's establishment, to some extent, will damage the democracy of the university's normal education. Since nation will endow more money on the program will take excess require to solve the problems that their nation is facing rather than other pressing matters.

Turing next to the situation that we have several famous university in the world now and they really take much contribution in the human being's history of the scientific development, such as Harvard, Yale, Cambridge, and so forth. These universities open their valuable resource to all of the world. And more and more international students have been attracted to study in their campus for their long historical reputation, wonderful appliances, and large scholarship. These famous universities can appeal much endowment from their sponsors because of their outstanding research fruition. So it seems to us that these universities can play the same part as we hope on the global university, after all, to build a new and so great university may take expense of large time and we cannot assert its bright future.

In the final analysis, the issue claims to build a global university needs us a second thought. Though the thought can offer us to communicate with different outstanding professors or students and will broaden our view. But we cannot ignore the possibility of the great project, since the obstacles in the way of taking it to practice are so much, we are forced to considerate other factors that will have influence on the program. And the same time, we are happy to find that many universities have played the same role that the global university does which can also give us alternative choice to solve such persistent problems.

[ 本帖最后由 welcomebs 于 2007-2-19 21:27 编辑 ]

katrinajjUID: 2242021

Is it necessary to establish a global university in order to solve the world's most persistent social problems? I agree with the speaker's claim that this action cans[can] actually building[build] a well-formed climate for scientists to have more communication, which will contribute a lot to the technology's development. However, we cannot ignore the obstacles that will impede our process to accomplish this great project; many factors will also demonstrate the suggestion's flaws.

The implicit rationale behind the speaker's statement seems to be that the rapid pace of the globalization force our to turn more help from our coworkers or other researches from different fields, for the results[reason] that the problems we confront are more complex and intricate than our ancestor faced in the past. To build a global university will attract many talent professors or students to join in the scientific discoveries, especially each nation which participate[+in] the program can offer enough found[fund] to support these outstanding individual a comfortable living level or perfect research situation. The program sounds inspiring and will enthusiastic[这个是形容词啊] scientist well to devote them intellect to the process of the high intensity of the research.

Despite the merits of the speaker's claim, there are two compelling arguments against the speaker's assertion that this project is necessary. Turning first to the problems that staffs and students will face to the different cultures and backgrounds. The great program will be not easy to take in to the practice as it portray. The diversity of the culture will impede the participant's communication. Conflict will occur inevitably as a result of the different religion beliefs or people's education level. People who has not enough toleration with others will find it is impossible for him to drip more in his special realm ,regardless that he indeed meet different perspectives that will really advance his research. Politic may play a[an] important role in the global university's establishment, to some extent, will damage the democracy of the university's normal education. Since nation will endow more money on the program will take[???] excess require to solve the problems that their nation is facing rather than other pressing matters.[这句话的谓语好混乱啊]

Turing next to the situation that we have several famous university[universities] in the world now and they really take much contribution in the human being's history of the scientific development, such as Harvard, Yale, Cambridge, and so forth. These universities open their valuable resource to all of[over] the world. And more and more international students have been attracted to study in their campus for their long historical reputation, wonderful appliances, and large scholarship. These famous universities can appeal much endowment from their sponsors because of their outstanding research fruition. So it seems to us that these universities can play the same part as we hope on the global university, after all, to build a new and so great university may take expense of large time and we cannot assert its bright future.

In the final analysis, the issue claims to build a global university needs us a second thought. Though the thought can offer us to communicate with different outstanding professors or students and will broaden our view. But we cannot ignore the possibility of the great project, since the obstacles in the way of taking it to practice are so much, we are forced to considerate other factors that will have influence on the program. And the same time, we are happy to find that many universities have played the same role that the global university does which can also give us alternative choice to solve such persistent problems.

PS:可能写得有点急,有一些语法错误.
观点和大家的差不多,还算清晰~~就是深度不够~~
语言方面有些句子不太通顺.希望LZ再改改~~~

njuliuyangUID: 2300567

Is it necessary to establish a global university in order to solve the world's most persistent social problems? I agree with the speaker's claim that this action cans actually building a well-formed climate for scientists to have more communication, which will contribute a lot to the technology's development. However, we cannot ignore the obstacles that will impede our process to accomplish this great project; many factors will also demonstrate the suggestion's flaws.
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思路清晰，结构严谨，各段较好地支撑了TS，不过可能写得较急，所以语法错漏较多，望以后注意。