issue144 critics and artists, 艺术超高频，考前冲刺，留链互拍

alex_leeUID：2227596

TOPIC: ISSUE144 - "It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value."

*a person who evaluates works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc.
WORDS: 538          TIME: 0:36:47          DATE: 2007-3-8

Artists and critics are just like twins. They are often talked about by us together. In my point of view, there's no doubt that it's the artists that create great art works containing lasting values; however, to convey these values to the society, critics play a crucial role.

For artists, the purpose of arts is to express their private views of our society. Without the talents, efforts and the very special individual experiences of artists, there's no way for us to appreciate their great art works. Only when Beethoven integrated his unmatchable talents on music with the tragedy in his life that he became deaf when he was in the middle age, the immortal symphonies, Hero and Fate were created. Except Van Gogh who having the special feeling of light, shapes, colors, and the nature of life on himself together, no others could produce one of the  most exciting paintings 'Sunflower'. Without artists, arts die.

However, artists themselves alone can not give the society something of lasting values. The lasting values contained in those great art works are the deeper feelings about the world, not the appearances. Only when these deeper meaning are understood by the publics, the lasting values in these art works are fully realized in the society. Nevertheless, commons who lack of essential knowledge usually can not appreciate the higher meaning behind the appearances of these art works. They are more often fascinated in the special combination of light, colors and motions of art works and ignore the deeper meaning artists want to convey. For instance, when asked why they like Van Gogh's 'sunflower', it's quite possible that most respondents would say because this painting is beautiful.

Therefore, there must be someone bridging the gap between the artists and the publics and convey the society the lasting values in art works. Such persons can only be critics. Critics always have abundant knowledge in the fields of art and history. They know both how deep thoughts are interpreted in art works and the individual experiences of artists. These make critics have the potential to feel what the artists feel when they do their great works, understand what the artists want to record and then convey these ideas to the publics. In the eyes of an untrained viewer, the immortal painting, 'sunflower' is just beautiful. Nevertheless, if we hear the explanation of it's deep meaning from some critics, we can get closer to Van Gogh's heart and feel the same admiration of the strength of life that he had when he drawn this painting. Without critics, the society can not really
appreciate the lasting values in great art works.

In addition, even for artists themselves, communication with some critics is also beneficial and gives them better preparation for creating great works with long lasting values. From the critics, artists can get feedback opinion about both the weakness and merits in their works. Such information prompts the artists make some modification of both their skills and their thoughts and is essential for their maturation.

In sum, artists create something of long lasting values and critics convey these values to the publics. With the efforts from both the artists and critics, the spirits of our humans make a progress.

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荧惑UID：2280559

Artists and critics are just like twins. （精彩）They are often talked about by us（有点多余） together. In my point of view（还是有点多余）, there's no doubt that it's the artists that create great art works containing lasting values; however, to convey these values to the society, critics play a crucial role.
--很简洁的开头，观点一目了然，学习~

For artists, the purpose of arts is to express their private views of our society. Without the talents, efforts and the very special individual experiences of artists, there's no way for us to appreciate their great art works. Only when Beethoven integrated his unmatchable talents on music with the tragedy in his life that he became deaf when he was in the middle age, the immortal symphonies, Hero and Fate were created. Except Van Gogh who having the special feeling of light, shapes, colors, and the nature of life on himself together, no others could produce one of the  most exciting paintings 'Sunflower'. Without artists, arts die.--再多分析两句，就结构上不是很完整
－－第一段说明是艺术家创造价值，例子８错（虽然有点普遍）

However, artists themselves alone can not give（pass是不是更好） the society something of lasting values. The lasting values contained in those great art works are the deeper feelings about the world, not the appearances（同义的重复，有点多余）. Only when these deeper meaning are understood by the publics, the lasting values in these art works are fully realized in the society. Nevertheless, commons who lack of essential knowledge usually can not appreciate the higher meaning behind the appearances of these art works. They are more often fascinated in the special combination of light, colors and motions of art works and ignore the deeper meaning artists want to convey. For instance, when asked why they like Van Gogh's 'sunflower', it's quite possible that most respondents would say because this painting is beautiful.
－－这段说明艺术家创造的价值不能直接的被社会接受，思路清晰。


Therefore, there must be someone bridging the gap between the artists and the publics and convey the society the lasting values in art works. Such persons can only be critics. Critics always have abundant knowledge in the fields of art and history. They know both how deep thoughts are interpreted in art works and the individual experiences of artists. These make critics have the potential to feel what the artists feel when they do their great works, understand what the artists want to record and then convey these ideas to the publics. In the eyes of an untrained viewer, the immortal painting, 'sunflower' is just beautiful. Nevertheless, if we hear the explanation of it's deep meaning from some critics, we can get closer to Van Gogh's heart and feel the same admiration of the strength of life that he had when he drawn this painting. Without critics, the society can not really appreciate the lasting values in great art works.
－－承接上段，说明C的作用。好～学习～有些语言可以简化一下，显得有点罗嗦如第一，二句可以放在一些吧（第二段也有一些）

In addition, even for artists themselves, communication with some critics is also beneficial and gives them better preparation for creating great works with long lasting values. From the critics, artists can get feedback opinion about both the weakness and merits in their works. Such information prompts the artists make some modification of both their skills and their thoughts and is essential for their maturation.
--补充说明C的作用，好！

In sum, artists create something of long lasting values and critics convey these values to the publics. With the efforts from both the artists and critics, the spirits of our humans make a progress.

--很精彩的文章，思路很流畅，文笔很优美，只在论证中Reasoning多了点，Example少了点~

christine-sevenUID：2132371

Artists and critics are just like twins. They are often talked about by us together. In my point of view, there's no doubt that it's the artists that create great art works containing lasting values; however, to convey (in conveying) these values to the society, critics play a crucial role.

For artists, the purpose of arts is to express their private views of our society. Without the talents, efforts and the very special individual experiences of artists, there's no way for us to appreciate their great art works (“没有艺术家的才华，勤奋以及独特生活经验，我们也无法欣赏到伟大的艺术作品”，楼主是这个意思吧，但是你的英文意思好像不匹配哦). Only when Beethoven integrated his unmatchable talents on music with the tragedy in his life that he became deaf when he was in the middle age(不用加这个时间啦，感觉好像还会生活在别的时代似的), the immortal symphonies, Hero and Fate were created （only结构的后半句是倒装哦，不要忘记！）. Except Van Gogh who having the special feeling of light, shapes, colors, and the nature of life on himself together, no others could produce one of the  most exciting paintings 'Sunflower'. （except用得有点问题，导致意思不是很明白）Without artists, arts die. （这句好帅。楼主非常善用短句）

However, artists themselves alone can not give the society something of lasting values. The lasting values contained in those great art works are the deeper feelings about the world, not the appearances (不要加这句吧). Only when these deeper meaning are understood by the publics, the lasting values in these art works are fully realized in the society. Nevertheless, commons who lack of （不要of）essential knowledge usually can not appreciate the higher meaning behind the appearances of these art works. They are more often fascinated in the special combination of light, colors and motions of art works and ignore the deeper meaning artists want to convey. For instance, when asked why they like Van Gogh's 'sunflower', it's quite possible that most respondents would say because this painting is beautiful. （这句论证得不是很充分，应该直接说他们不能说出喜欢的理由。人家说美没错啊，并不一定是不理解。）

Therefore, there must be someone bridging the gap between the artists and the publics and convey the society the lasting values in art works. Such persons （people）can only be critics. Critics always have abundant knowledge in the fields of art and history. They know both how deep thoughts are interpreted in art works and the individual experiences of artists (and 是平衡结构，前一半是how怎么怎么，后面也要用个小短分句). These make critics have the potential to feel what the artists feel when they do their great works, understand what the artists want to record and then convey these ideas to the publics. In the eyes of an untrained viewer, the immortal painting, 'sunflower' is just beautiful （还是刚才的问题哟）. Nevertheless, if we hear the explanation of it's deep meaning from some critics, we can get closer to Van Gogh's heart and feel the same admiration of the strength of life that he had when he drawn this painting. Without critics, the society can not really appreciate the lasting values in great art works.

In addition, even for artists themselves, communication with some critics is also beneficial and gives them better preparation for creating great works with long lasting values. From the critics, artists can get feedback opinion about both the weakness and merits in their works. Such information prompts the artists make some modification of both their skills and their thoughts and is essential for their maturation.

In sum, artists create something of long lasting values and critics convey these values to the publics. With the efforts from both the artists and critics, the spirits of our humans make a progress.

楼主的文章很不错啊！可惜时间来不及了，我修炼不到了恩！多谢你的指点哦！

nyly814UID：2223919

写得很好呀，羡慕呀！我还有五天就要考了，还写得很烂，着急呀。有空也帮忙看看我的，可以吗？谢谢了
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Artists and critics are just like twins. They are often talked about by us together. In my point of view, there's no doubt（undoubtedly,） that it's the artists that create great art works containing lasting values; however, to convey these values to the society, critics play a crucial role.

For artists, the purpose of arts is to express their private views of our society. Without the talents, efforts and the very special individual experiences of artists, there's no way for us to appreciate their great art works.(wonderful) Only when Beethoven integrated his unmatchable talents on music with the tragedy in his life that he became deaf when he was in the middle age, the immortal symphonies, Hero and Fate were created.(Wonderful as is the meaning what you want to express, I think, but there are some improper expression.) Except Van Gogh who having the special feeling of light, shapes, colors, and the nature of life on himself together, no others could produce one of the  most exciting paintings 'Sunflower'. Without artists, arts die.(wonderful, brief and powerful)

However, artists themselves alone can not give the society something of lasting values. The lasting values contained in those great art works are the deeper feelings about the world, not the appearances. Only when these deeper meaning are understood by the publics, the lasting values in these art works are fully realized in the society. Nevertheless, commons who lack of essential knowledge usually can not appreciate the higher meaning behind the appearances of these art works. They are more often fascinated in the special combination of light, colors and motions of art works and ignore the deeper meaning artists want to convey. For instance, when asked why they like Van Gogh's 'sunflower', it's quite possible that most respondents would say because this painting is beautiful. (This paragraph is one of the best ones that I have seen)

Therefore, there must be someone bridging the gap between the artists and the publics and conveying the society the lasting values in art works. Such persons can only be critics. Critics always have abundant knowledge in the fields of art and history. They know both how deep thoughts are interpreted in art works and the individual experiences of artists. These make critics have the potential to feel what the artists feel when they do their great works, understand what the artists want to record and then convey these ideas to the publics. In the eyes of an untrained viewer, the immortal painting, 'sunflower' is just beautiful. Nevertheless, if we hear the explanation of it's deep meaning from some critics, we can get closer to Van Gogh's heart and feel the same admiration of the strength of life that he had when he drawn this painting. Without critics, the society can not really appreciate the lasting values in great art works.

In addition, even for artists themselves, communication with some critics is also beneficial and gives them better preparation for creating great works with long lasting values. From the critics, artists can get feedback opinion about both the weakness and merits in their works. Such information prompts the artists make some modification of both their skills and their thoughts and is essential for their maturation.

In sum, artists create something of long lasting values and critics convey these values to the publics. With the efforts from both the artists and critics, the spirits of our humans make a progress.