求助几道改错

michellechinUID: 2301188

1. In 1932, the London Philharmonic Orchestra, which was founded by Sir Thomas Beecham, debuted in Queen's Hall,it was intended to be a counterpart to the orchestras of Vienna and Berlin.
  k& [. X5 E) c6 F- m(A) Hall, it was intended to be
+ d7 w; S+ }6 u) N# K(B) Hall with the intention fo becoming
7 @+ P6 v3 i, {1 y0 U2 a! x7 m(C) Hall and it was intended to be
+ J4 m/ A" \; R1 Z% v, t" `! d(D) Hall, but it was intended to be
6 }0 p- t  N' \: e# _(E) Hall; it was intended to be
. O* J) Z0 _9 f* @+ D/ A
为什么选E而不选C?
* Q! I1 G9 c8 h+ n2 U2 e4 Q
) H; \* _7 G, N2. One should try to avoid breaking rules, not only because doing so is wrong, but also because you do not know whether you will be caught.

答案是A. 不是说一句句子里有2个或以上YOU就正确吗，那这句后面已经有了2个YOU,前面用个ONE有什么错误？

3. The prosecutor argued that anger and a desire for vindication were not  sufficient enough reasons to justify the crime.

C错，是否改成 sufficiently enough?

4. The amount of air pressure on an object is determined by the surface area of the object to which the pressure is applied.
+ g! P6 N0 Z( m, E' j# x
C 为什么错？

6 l/ K* C- p" k. B2 }- G
$ u) K& \4 n) q- n1 H谢谢你看完了所有的题目，感谢你的帮助^_^

solv6868UID: 2244156

1) and前面不加逗号的话要考虑平行结构的问题(and后面必须跟的是一个地点搭配Queen's Hall )。E选项里的;起到直接代替", and"的作用

solv6868UID: 2244156

2) 主语一致。把one改成you

2 _  X1 \+ G1 I: b' a- E3)词语重叠。sufficient和enough意义相同，删掉一个即可(建议保留sufficient)
' \" l1 }1 C: j6 m
4)本人才疏学浅，实在看不出来为什么错

michellechinUID: 2301188

3Q very much!(though it had been a long time to reply to you``sorry! i had no access to internet)