issue155 只有8天了，请提意见，急！

colonel2007UID: 2309573

题目：ISSUE155 - "Contemporary society offers so many ways of learning that reading books is no longer very important."

Contemporary society with fast technological development can offer many different ways of acquiring information and knowledge. Televisions, the Internet and countless other media forms widely spread and covered almost every family in society. The speaker asserts that these means of browsing information seems to be also a suitable way of learning knowledge and therefore maybe a substitute for books. On the contrary, I definitely don't agree with such a statement and believe that books can never fade out in human society.  

Admittedly, televisions and the Internet are the most powerful tools for containing and delivering huge amount of information including knowledge. Plenty of information do not necessarily ensure a proper way of learning. People usually learn what they are interested in from the information on TV or the Internet with ease. However, is learning information equal to learning knowledge? The answer is definitely not. To some degree, television broadcasting is a commercial business. they are supported by sponsors who want to earn more money. At the same time, audiences are more likely to prefer entertainment program than knowledge based program, thus TVs shows far more entertainment program than the later one. So there is little chance for people who want to fulfill their mind with knowledge by watching TV.

As to the Internet, besides the similar problems to TVs, information on the Internet fail to be well organized and are messed up. People often suffered great inconvenience while looking for the useful information they need. Another setback of the Internet is that because of lack of supervising, some negative or unhealthy contents which may poison the mind of young people can be accessed on the Internet. So the Internet is not a proper way of learning knowledge either.

When turning our attention to books, we can find that they conquer the flaws of televisions and the Internet mentioned above completely and are still important to learning. On the one hand, almost every book is written about an definite issue. These make you not only find the book you are interested in easily by a glance at the title but also learn a relative whole image of the knowledge. This advantage to TVs and the Internet also prevents young people from the unhealthy contents. On the other hand, being different from the audiences of TV accepting information passively, readers can select the most useful part of a book to meet their knowledge gap effectively.

To sum up, although rapid technological development does offer many great options of acquiring information, according to the flaws of them, they can not become the substitute of book. These new tools and traditional books can serve as a better mean of learning together!

[ 本帖最后由 colonel2007 于 2007-4-1 19:49 编辑 ]

colonel2007UID: 2309573

自己顶，帮改改吧！

lucia16UID: 2262189

题目：ISSUE155 - "Contemporary society offers so many ways of learning that reading books is no longer very important."

Contemporary society with fast technological development can offer many diferent ways of acquiring information and knowledge. Televisions, the Internet and countless other media forms widely spspread and coverd almost every family in society. The speaker aserts that these means of browsing information seems to be also a suitable way of learning knowledge and therefore maybe a substitue for books. On the contrary, I definitely don't  agree with such a statement and believe that books can never fade out in human society.  

Admittedly, televisions and the Internet are the most powerful tools for containning and delivering huge amount of information including knownledge. Plenty of information do not necessarily ensure a proper way of learning. People usually learn what they are interested in from the information on TV or the Internet with ease. However, is learning information eaqual to learning knowledge? The answer is definetely not. To some degree, television broadcasting is a commercial buissness, they are supported by sponsors who want to earn more money. At the same time, audiences are more likely to prefer entertainment program than knowledge based program, thus TVs shows far more entertainment program than the later one. So there is little chance for people who want to fufill their mind with knowledge by watching TV. （这段有点混乱，看主题句像是让步，但后面又出现反驳？一段里不应该出现2个思想）

As to the Internet, besides the similar probloms to TVs, informations on the Internet fail to be well organized and are messed up. People often sufferd great inconvenience while looking for the useful information they need. Another setback of the Internet is that because of lack of supervising, some negative or unhealthy contents which may poision the mind of young people can be accessed on the Internet. So the Internet is not a proper way of learning knowledge either. （这个只可以作为一个具体的例子，最好提炼出更合适的TS）

When turning our attention to books, we can find that they conquer the flaws of televisions and the Internet mentioned above completely and are still important to learning . On the one hand,  almost every book is written about an definite issue. These make you not only find the book you are interested in easily by a glance at the title but also learn a raletive whole image of the knowledge. This advantage to TVs and the Internet also prevents young people from the unhealthy contents.(because wether or.....) On the other hand, being different from the audiences of TV accepting information passively, readers can select the most useful part of a book to meet their knowledge gap effectively.

To sum up, although rapid technological developent do offer many great options of accquring informations, according to the flaws of them, they can not become the subsitues of book. These new tools and traditinal books can serve as a better mean of learning together!
总的来说，文章的结构还是存在一定的问题的
我第1段和2，3 段是不协调的，可以干脆把第一段改写成关于internet的段落，直接说它的不足，与后面两段形成并列，看上去会思路清晰点
还有文字方面的错误太多了，建议用word检查一下，再放上来改
加油！！！

colonel2007UID: 2309573

谢谢！！现在头脑比较乱，呵呵
还有哪位好心人，请多提意见

colonel2007UID: 2309573

文字错误已基本清楚