谁能帮忙看看这段话这么写有没有错?

syavlehUID: 2303752

A vehement debate has stirred up over the issues of lying, cheating and murdering nevertheless the general comments on these issues are negative.  For me, I still believe all of the three can be either harmful or appropriate based on different situations, as there is no such an absolute wrong or right thing in the world.  It is widely acknowledged that both of lying and cheating are two kinds of behaviors that are reckless and can reflect one’s dishonesty, but they are not all bad when we have to enhance or maintain a relationship between our friends and associates or express our gratitude to an unwanted gift, either of these is always regarded as politeness instead of deceits.  Furthermore, there isn’t such a person, as far as I have known, who had never told a lie throughout his or her life.  On the other hand, murder sometimes can be good as well especially when we put a criminal to execution for justice.  It is a retribution for those who killed someone beyond laws to die; otherwise the world would be a chaotic place that we cannot imagine.

[ 本帖最后由 syavleh 于 2007-5-20 08:34 编辑 ]

syavlehUID: 2303752

啊啊啊啊.难道没有人愿意帮忙吗??:funk:

no_commentUID: 117770

字实在太小，看不清:)

syavlehUID: 2303752

啊?不会吧,在我这个电脑上看得很大啊!
那我把字体改大一点.
请帮忙看看有没有什么语法错误,行么?
谢谢!!!!!!!!!:handshake

no_commentUID: 117770

A vehement debate has been stirred up overthe issues of lying, cheating and murdering nevertheless the generalcomments on these issues are negative.  For me, I still believe all ofthe three can be either harmful or appropriate under different circumstances, as there is no such a thing that's absolutely right or wrong  in theworld.  It is widely acknowledged that both of lying and cheating are reckless behaviors that can reflect one’sdishonesty, but they are not all bad when we have to enhance ormaintain a relationship between our friends and associates or to expressour gratitude for an unwanted gift. They are usualy regardedas politeness instead of deceits.  Furthermore, there isn’t such aperson, as far as I know, who has never told a single lie throughout hisor her entire life.  Similarly, murder sometimes can be good as well,especially when we execute a criminal for justice.  It is a penalty for those who illegally took away other people's lives to be executed, otherwisethe world would be a chaos beyond imagination.

no_commentUID: 117770

There is no stroke lines available, so I used underscores and Italics to indicate a deletion. Some of the changes are only for decoration but others are for grammar and readability. Everyone has their own writing style. You may not like mine:)

I think the biggest problem here is your understanding of the terms "cheating" and "murdering". You are generalizing the concepts of the two terms to make your statement stand, which isn't very convincing to me.

syavlehUID: 2303752

I know that, 'cause when talking about murdering, we always mean the illegal killing of someone.
But the aforesaid example was given by my teacher..an American woman..I don't know if they also see murder as something else.
Anyhow, Thanks for your help!!

wxylwyUID: 2341120

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