Issue154 [Victors小组]第七次作业

乳虎UID: 2251211

154"Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators."

提纲：
In this statement, the author holds that education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators, so he or she calls for parents and communities to participate into local schools. Generally speaking, I concede his or her viewpoint.

In the first place, the mission of education lies in cultivating well-round people. Admittedly, school has gift in imparting knowledge and promoting the development of students' intellect. However morality, characteristic etc which turn out to be significant to a well-round people are established in everyday life. So parents who keep tight connection with students contribute more than teachers. Parents can instill the predominant value to students, tell them how to get along well with partners, help them to form healthy interest and so on. Empirical evidence indicates that the majority of the students whose parents spend too little time and energy inculcating them suffer from psychological disease, for example, some students suffer from autism. In that sense, parents should play a role complementary to that of the schools to educate students. .

When it comes to the development of students' intellect, parents play an equally key role. In order to muster the knowledge learned in school well, students should spend some time reviewing them after class. However, students especially junior students are often addicted in video games, TV, etc, which often causes they to fail to spend enough time and energy in study. Parents can supervise students doing homework on time and so on, undoubtedly, that would promote the study of students. In America, the students from orient often experience better in school, at least in part it is because their parents play more emphasis on the study of students. So it is beneficial for parents to communicate with and aid teachers to instruct the students.

Additionally, every student live in certain communities, the culture atmosphere of which moulds the character of them. For example, in a community with a high crime rate, students are more likely to commit violence, drug addiction and so on. On the contrary, it is easer for the students in a community with spiritual uplift to make progress. So communities should provide a favorable environment for students, for instance, communities should eliminate violent crime, prohibit completely the spread of drug, remove prostitution and so on.

To sum up, on the one hand, we can not look down upon the irreplaceable role teachers play in fostering the intellect of students; on the other hand, parents and communities should immerse their effort to instruct students. So the best way out of this issue is to join the effort of school, parents and communities to cultivate well-round students.

solartorchUID: 2244205

In this statement, the author holds that education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators, so he or she calls for parents and communities to participate into local schools. Generally speaking, I concede用concede是不是不大好，concede是那种让步的同意，不情愿的承认，直接agree就好了啊 his or her viewpoint.

In the first place, the mission of education lies in cultivating well-rounded people. Admittedly, school has gift in imparting knowledge and promoting the development of students' intellect. However aspects like morality, characteristic etc which turn out to be significant to a well-rounded people are established in everyday life. So parents who keep tight connection with students contribute more than teachers. Parents can instill the predominant value to students, tell them how to get along well with partners, help them to form healthy interest and so on. Empirical evidence indicates that the majority of the students whose parents spend too little time and energy inculcating them suffer from psychological disease, for example, some students suffer from autism. In that sense, parents should play a role complementary to that of the schools to educate students. .

When it comes to the development of students' intellect, parents play an equally key role. In order to muster master? the knowledge learned in school well, students should spend some time reviewing them after class. However, students especially junior students are often addicted in video games, TV, etc, which often causes they them to fail to spend enough time and energy in study. Parents can supervise students doing homework on time and so on, undoubtedly, that would promote the study of students. In America, the students from orient这里指东方国家？是的话应该用the Orient often experience改成perform比较好 better in school, at least in part it is because their parents play more emphasis on the study of students. So it is beneficial for parents to communicate with and aid teachers to instruct the students.

Additionally, every student live in certain communities, the culture atmosphere of which moulds the character of them. For example, in a community with a high crime rate, students are more likely to commit violence, drug addiction and so on. On the contrary, it is easer for the students in a community with spiritual uplift to make progress. So communities should provide a favorable environment for students, for instance, communities should eliminate violent crime, prohibit completely the spread of drug, remove prostitution and so on. 这边community的定义有待斟酌，按照楼主的理解community=environment.其实community更多是侧重在cluture values, social structure等等, community的介入可以让学生以后更加fit in the society。

To sum up, on the one hand, we can not look down upon the irreplaceable role teachers play in fostering the intellect of students; on the other hand, parents and communities should immerse their effort to instruct students. So the best way out of this issue is to join the effort of school, parents and communities to cultivate well-round students.

觉得楼主写得有点仓促，至于要不要分一段讨论教育的重要性也值得考虑一下，加油