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提纲:
①政治确实影响着人们。从历史上看,美国废除了奴隶制,彻底给了黑人自由,实现了人权平等。两次世界大战,北欧小国瑞士都始终保持政治上的中立,免除战火,而让其国民始终过着幸福的生活。现在的美国总统大选,备受关注.
②这种影响不一定是unfortunate。 如国家加强法制建设,惩治犯罪就会带来全社会的安全。保证人们的安全,正常的学习,生活,工作。国家加强文化建设、对教育的关注,资金的注入 ,就会提高教育质量,降低教育收费,促进全民的教育,让每个人都在年轻的时候学好,为自己将来工作、服务社会打下基础。
③因此领导者在做出决定的时候应当小心,因为他的某一个小小的决定将影响许多人,比如近代中国邓小平发起的经济改革,引起市场经济,让中国经济实现了巨大的进步。
正文:
The speaker asserts that political decisions and activities affect all aspects of people’s lives. It has merit from a normative standpoint, and I agree in so far as.
Firstly, from the view of history, political decisions and activities had a profound influence on the lives of people in different countries. In American history, when the president Linken announced the abolition of slavery, the blacks finally received the freedom, which was a great milestone in the development of America. That means the blacks could freely choose the working places, the kinds of work and so on. Besides, the measure of liberating slavers also significantly impelled the progress of liberation activities in the Latin American countries. Furthermore, as is well known, the two world wars in the 20th century had an extremely profound influence on the people of all over the world. The previous peaceful lives were suddenly disturbed, the agriculture and industry production were compulsorily stopped and the school education also had to change according to the policies of the war. Simultaneously, people in Swiss luckily avoided the negative influences caused by the two world wars, since its government kept neutrality during the two world wars.
Secondly, with more and more put emphasis on the development of social democracy, the relationship between polities and ordinary people becomes closer. For example, the election of American president, which gives more free rights to civil for participating the political activities, have attracted millions of Americans and even more and more people from all over the world to focus it nearly every four years. Another important example, which describes the intimate relationship between political activities and people’s lives, is about Iraq. As we known, it is apparent that the present miserable situations in Iraq are caused by its unstable political activities and decisions.
However, not all the influence brought by the political activities and decisions are unfortunate. For example, the constructions of the legal system are benefit to the social security. As the more complete and proper legal systems are made, the ratio of committing crime will gradually decline, and then there is more guarantee that people can work and study under a relative safe environment. Besides, the constructions of culture also have a positive and active influence on society. For instance, to some extent, taking more measures of improving education will make a great progress of the comprehensive quality of people.
Finally, it should be prudent for a leader to make a political decision or policy, since they have an important influence on all aspects of people’s lives. For example, Deng Xiaoping, the great leader of China, made a significant policy on the opening and reform, which has greatly improved the economy power and peoples’ living standards.
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