ISSUE95 高强度第二小组第一周第一次作业交改贴

DemoUID: 2331967

先把改的pt传上来
700+字数... |||
让我太惭愧了.. 再去凑点自己的350+.. sigh

附件又改成完整的了~~ ^_^

However, concerning the second contention, the speaker fails to recognize the fact that cooperation and competition both are required, and thus exist, in the concept of teamwork; after all, these two effects are not mutually exclusive. Members of a team would no doubt cooperate—that is what makes them a team; and this would help them to build mutual trust and thus increase their working efficiency. Meanwhile, they would compete with each other to make themselves competent as members, to gain respect from their teammates, and to make the team stronger. Especially, regarding the source of motivation, competition, rather than cooperation, plays a more pivotal role. The sense of competition is implanted in human nature to outshine his peers; this instinct has been exerting its marvelous effort throughout the human history. [这里需要例证] Then, it is the sense of competition that helps people get rid of some born defects such as laziness, and it serves as the impetus and fountain of power to endure difficulties and overcome any obstacles along the with, with or without his teammates.

... 刚发现.. 为什么我的作业下载次数那么多.. 写得又不好.. |||


[ 本帖最后由 Demo 于 2007-6-19 12:08 编辑 ]

铂UID: 2215888

谢谢Demo的修改哈 不过很多你批改出来的逻辑问题在我看来是我们思维方式的不同
下来和你详细讨论一下 呵呵:handshake

DemoUID: 2331967

恩.. issue修改是有这个问题.. 经常拿不准.. sorry 啦

OB叔UID: 188695

pt 你给大家最好说一下，统一在论坛里发帖，然后将链接在这个帖子里汇总

这样以后便于搜索原文，否则都是在附件了的话，以后就不好弄了

DemoUID: 2331967

MS是专门要求全部用文档 便于各人整理和保存..

futuremanUID: 2327059

对不起IRIS，给你改过了，晚了些，SORRY

futuremanUID: 2327059

我们的规则好像特别些，不过搜索能搜到附件的是吗？

futuremanUID: 2327059

蓝色标注是什么意思？

futuremanUID: 2327059

看作文是三维的字体有前后深度，几天都晕乎乎
作文改的很慢，必须全小三字体反色加粗才能看清，怎么办

yaoqian0424UID: 2323517

占个座，看看有没有机会跟上部队，我是8月6考，几天没上网，小组就呼呼上阵了

铂UID: 2215888

demo的才改完 不好意思

DemoUID: 2331967

辛苦～