Issue4 [OB小组]_第3次作业_研究领域要引入外来经验才能有巨大发展

ldongxpUID: 2311083

The speaker asserts that significant advances in all fields of study need outsiders bring their expertise to that field of study. I agree with the speaker. Important breakthroughs in some field always require knowledge and technologies in other fields. Illustrating examples of this involve chemistry, economy and computer science.

First, consider the discovering elements in chemistry. Many significant discoveries, which have vital influence on the realm of chemistry, were ascribed to using of physical technologies and theories. Alkali metals were discovered because batteries were invented and used in chemistry experiments. The discovery of elements Rb. and Cs. was owed to the technique in realm of optics. The radioactive elements were detected under the guidance of the radioactivity theory. Yet, before these physical technologies and theories were used, these new elements could hardly be discovered by traditional approaches in chemistry.

Another example illustrating that significant breakthrough need knowledge from other field of study involves the realm of economy. John Nash, the renowned Mathematician and Nobel Prize winner in Economic Sciences, had introduced knowledge of game theory to economy, which helped him develop an equilibrium concept for non-cooperative games that later came to be called Nash equilibrium and win the Nobel Prize. Suppose that John Nash had not used his mathematic knowledge in economy, the new theory would not be developed and a significant advancement in economy would not exist. Besides John Nash, there are many Nobel Prize winners won their honor for introducing knowledge in some field to another field.

An even more striking example of how expertise in various fields is required to advance knowledge involves the area of computer science. In the realm of computer science, to solve problems rapidly we need increasingly keen tools-computers which can compute increasingly faster. These powerful computers are designed by mechanical, electronical and computer engineers and special materials which can be used to make faster CPU require the advancement in material science. Furthermore, complicated problems need to be described with mathematical model to facilitate computer to solve them. Mathematicians create those models for the problems and design effective arithmetic with the help of computer programmers. Even psychologists are needed to help design more comfortable human interfaces such as mouse with new shape and scientifically designed keyboards.

In sum，since the sciences are related and to advance our knowledge in any one field we must understand the interplay among them all and make full use of knowledge in other fields.

ldongxpUID: 2311083

字数啊，多数例子都是自己写的，一共才400……大家给点意见吧

OB叔UID: 188695

先占座，我还没写呢 呵呵

xiao8686UID: 2266881

我是新加入的，呵呵，issue4是我写的第一篇，前面的等过几天补上来吧，这几天做实验比较忙。

先占个座，等下来拍...

ps：这是我的issue4 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-703020-1-1.html

The speaker asserts thatsignificant advances in all fields of study need outsiders bring theirexpertise to that field of study. I agree with the speaker. Importantbreakthroughs in some field always require knowledge and technologiesin other fields. Illustrating examples of this involve chemistry,economy and computer science.
第一段蛮清楚的。最后一句话感觉有一些别扭，there are many illustrating examples involved in chemistry,economy and computer science.好一些。

First, consider thediscovering elements in chemistry. Many significant discoveries, whichhave vital influence on the realm of chemistry, were ascribed to usingof physical technologies and theories. Alkali metals were discoveredbecause batteries were invented and used in chemistry experiments. Thediscovery of elements Rb. and Cs. was owed to the technique in realm ofoptics. The radioactive elements were detected under the guidance ofthe radioactivity theory. Yet, before these physical technologies andtheories were used, these new elements could hardly be discovered bytraditional approaches in chemistry.
这一段感觉写的不错。但是要是还可以多一个例子就比较充分了。或者把例子再展开一些。

Another exampleillustrating that significant breakthrough need knowledge from otherfield of study involves the realm of economy. John Nash, the renownedMathematician and Nobel Prize winner in EconomicSciences, had introduced knowledge of game theory to economy, whichhelped him develop an equilibrium concept for non-cooperative gamesthat later came to be called Nash equilibrium and win the Nobel Prize.Suppose that John Nash had not used his mathematic knowledge ineconomy, the new theory would not be developed and a significantadvancement in economy would not exist. Besides John Nash, there aremany Nobel Prize winners won their honor for introducing knowledge insome field to another field.
觉得最后一句话写了但是没有展开，还不如写一句总结这一段的话。比如this example strongly support the view blah blah blah.....

An even more strikingexample of how expertise in various fields is required to advanceknowledge involves the area of computer science. In the realm ofcomputer science, to solve problems rapidly we need increasingly keentools-computers which can compute increasingly faster. These powerfulcomputers are designed by mechanical, electronical and computerengineers and special materials which can be used to make faster CPUrequire the advancement in material science. Furthermore, complicatedproblems need to be described with mathematical model to facilitatecomputer to solve them. Mathematicians create those models for theproblems and design effective arithmetic with the help of computerprogrammers. Even psychologists are needed to help design morecomfortable human interfaces such as mouse with new shape andscientifically designed keyboards.
complicatedproblems need to be described with mathematical model to facilitatecomputer to solve them 这句话有点别扭。其他的都很好

In sum，sincethe sciences are related and to advance our knowledge in any one fieldwe must understand the interplay among them all and make full use ofknowledge in other fields.

我觉得没有什么太多可挑剔的，从三个方面说了，结构很清楚，语言也不错。但是要是每一段的开头或者结尾都能点一下题逻辑就会更清楚了。


[ 本帖最后由 xiao8686 于 2007-7-15 20:04 编辑 ]

zhongyuwunjUID: 2244717

The speaker asserts that significant advances in all fields of study need outsiders bring their expertise to that field of study. I agree with the speaker. Important breakthroughs in some field always require knowledge and technologiesin（？？） other fields. Illustrating examples of this involve in chemistry, economy and computer science.

First, consider the discovering elements in chemistry. Many significant discoveries, which have vital influence on the realm of chemistry, were ascribed to using of physical technologies and theories. Alkali metals were discovered because batteries were invented and used in chemistry experiments. The discovery of elements Rb. and Cs. was owed to the technique in realm of optics. The radioactive elements were detected under the guidance of the radioactivity theory. Yet, before these physical technologies and theories were used, these new elements could hardly be discovered by traditional approaches in chemistry.(嘻嘻，这段我也见过，百宝箱的对吧，很贴切呢)

Another example illustrating that significant breakthrough need knowledge from other field of study involves the realm of economy. John Nash, the renowned Mathematician and Nobel Prize winner in Economic Science, had introduced knowledge of game theory to economy, which helped him develop an equilibrium concept for non-cooperative games that later came to be called Nash equilibrium and win the Nobel Prize. Suppose that John Nash had not used his mathematic knowledge in economy, the new theory would not be developed and a significant advancement in economy would not exist. Besides John Nash, there are many Nobel Prize winners won their honor for introducing knowledge in some field to another field.

An even more striking example of how expertise in various fields is required to advance knowledge involves the area of computer science. In the realm of computer science, to solve problems rapidly we need increasingly keen tools-computers which can compute increasingly faster. These powerful computers are designed by mechanical, electronic , computer engineering and special materials which can be used to make faster CPU require the advancement in material science. Furthermore, complicated problems need to be described with mathematical model to facilitate computer to solve them. Mathematicians create those models for the problems and design effective arithmetic with the help of computer programs. Even psychologists are needed to help design more comfortable human interfaces such as mouse with new shape and scientifically designed keyboards.（难道咱俩的资源库一样？看来得慎用了）

In sum，since the sciences are related and to advance our knowledge in any one field we must understand the interplay among them all and make full use of knowledge in other fields
论证的很精彩！

[ 本帖最后由 zhongyuwunj 于 2007-7-16 21:30 编辑 ]

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The speaker asserts that significant advances in all fields of study need outsiders bring their expertise to that field of study. I agree with the speaker. Important breakthroughs in some field always require knowledge and technologies in other fields. Illustrating examples of this involve chemistry, economy and computer science.

First, consider the discovering elements in chemistry. Many significant discoveries, which have vital influence on the realm of chemistry, were ascribed to using of physical technologies and theories. Alkali metals were discovered because batteries were invented and used in chemistry experiments. The discovery of elements Rb. and Cs. was owed to the technique in realm of optics. The radioactive elements were detected under the guidance of the radioactivity theory. Yet, before these physical technologies and theories were used, these new elements could hardly be discovered by traditional approaches in chemistry.

Another example illustrating that significant breakthrough need knowledge from other field of study involves the realm of economy. John Nash, the renowned Mathematician and Nobel Prize winner in Economic Sciences, had introduced knowledge of game theory to economy, which helped him develop an equilibrium concept for non-cooperative games that later came to be called Nash equilibrium and win the Nobel Prize. Suppose that John Nash had not used his mathematic knowledge in economy, the new theory would not be developed and a significant advancement in economy would not exist. Besides John Nash, there are many Nobel Prize winners won their honor for introducing knowledge in some field to another field.

An even more striking example of how expertise in various fields is required to advance knowledge involves the area of computer science. In the realm of computer science, to solve problems rapidly we need increasingly keen tools-computers which can compute increasingly faster. These powerful computers are designed by mechanical, electronical and computer engineers and special materials which can be used to make faster CPU require the advancement in material science. Furthermore, complicated problems need to be described with mathematical model to facilitate computer to solve them. Mathematicians create those models for the problems and design effective arithmetic with the help of computer programmers. Even psychologists are needed to help design more comfortable human interfaces such as mouse with new shape and scientifically designed keyboards.

In sum，since the sciences are related and to advance our knowledge in any one field we must understand the interplay among them all and make full use of knowledge in other fields.

例子、语言都挺好，正文三段内部点一点题，及加强三段间的的关系就更好了。