issue83 [OB小组]第5次作业_stonescj

stonescjUID: 2359180

83"Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state, even though these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people."
1.自然环境的保护对人类很重要
2.如果我们保护好生态平衡，就是保护我们自己。举例
3.并非那些偏远的地方就不需要我们保护了

I fundamentally agree with the author's assertion that government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural states, in addition, every civilian should make all efforts to protect, even if these designed regions are usually extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people.

To begin with, taking care of environment and maintaining ecosystem balance is not only to protect the wild creatures but also benefit for contemporary people and offspring. Whereas, with the incredibly rapid speed of development and modernization, human beings are indulge to create an effluent civilization and socialization, nevertheless, contaminations and destruction to the natural environment seems inevitable. The surprising speed of deforestation of Brazil brings on the most severe plight which it has ever confronted and a further measurement is want of prevention from that catastrophe. The eruptible blue algae occurrence of Wuxi, an important city in China, has severe embarrass people's daily life. As it stands, it should take immediate and effective measures to preserve natural environment.

In fact, many countries in the world have realized the necessity and have commencing on protect the wilderness areas. Government of Australia has already preserved several wildness areas in which a large number of rare-numbered species found their paradise. Government of China has established a series of NPAS (natural protecting areas) in many provinces, which aim at protect various facing-extinct creatures such as Tibetan antelope, panda, northeast tiger and so forth. Only in such natural-state areas, rare plants and animals could live freely without being afraid human's disturbance, and then the chain of creatures will keep good itself. Moreover, those actions have a significant meaning to research of biology and ecology, and researchers are likely to continuously dig for the answers of the origination and evolution of creatures.

Admittedly, it is also important for us to pay enough attention on the area that is extremely remote and unaccessible. Actually, howbeit these areas are so devious that human beings' modernization is hard to influence the protection measures, however, it is indispensable for the government to make some support. In 1980s, China has set up several wildness areas to protect pandas in some extinct region. Whereas, each area is separate, and pandas can only choose their mates in an parochial range which cause their descendants generated to be oafish or died. Considering the creatures of the remote areas, incidental relative bills and policies should be enacted for the preservation.

To sum up, comfortable ecological environment is important to every people in the world, human beings should try best to preserve natural surroundings and establish a harmonious relationship with nature and will continuous rely on it.

ldongxpUID: 2311083

I fundamentally agree with the author's assertion that government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural states,[改写下好些] in addition, every civilian should make all efforts to protect, even if these designed regions are usually extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people.

To begin with, taking care of environment and maintaining ecosystem balance is not only to protect the wild creatures but also benefit for contemporary people and offspring. Whereas, with the incredibly rapid speed of development and modernization, human beings are indulge to create an effluent civilization and socialization, nevertheless, contaminations and destruction to the natural environment seems inevitable. The surprising speed of deforestation of Brazil brings on the most severe plight which it has ever confronted and a further measurement is want of prevention from that catastrophe. The eruptible blue algae occurrence of Wuxi, an important city in China, has severely embarrassed people's daily life. As it stands, it should take immediate and effective measures to preserve natural environment. [可以稍稍多点题，显得紧扣题目]

In fact, many countries in the world have realized the necessity and have commencing[？] on protecting the wilderness areas. Government of Australia has already preserved several wildness areas in which a large number of rare-numbered species found their paradise. Government of China has established a series of NPAS (natural protecting areas) [Nature Reserve] in many provinces, which aim at protecting various facing-extinct creatures [endangered species] such as Tibetan antelope, panda, northeast tiger and so forth. Only in such natural-state areas, rare plants and animals could live freely without being afraid of human's disturbance, and then the chain of creatures will keep good itself. Moreover, those actions have a significant meaning to research of biology and ecology, and researchers are likely to continuously dig for the answers of the origination and evolution of creatures. [来个小结]

Admittedly, it is also important for us to pay enough attention on the area that is extremely remote and inaccessible. Actually, howbeit these areas are so devious that human beings' modernization is hard to influence the protection measures, however, it is indispensable for the government to make some support. In 1980s, China has set up several wildness areas to protect pandas in some extinct region [?]. Whereas, each area is separate, and pandas can only choose their mates in an parochial range which cause their descendants generated to be oafish or died. Considering the creatures of the remote areas, incidental relative bills and policies should be enacted for the preservation.

To sum up, comfortable ecological environment is important to every people in the world, human beings should try best to preserve natural surroundings and establish a harmonious relationship with nature and will continuous rely on it.

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感觉还可以扣题更紧些

注意段末小结