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1  why do you think people attend college or university?
After graduating from high school, students seldom, if they can get a eligible mark in the college entrance exam, go directly into work force. Why? They may say, because others go to university, I have to go too. This response reflects a reason why people attend college or university. But there are more, as follows.
First, for the reason of preparing for career, people are willing, or rather, have to go to college or university. In high school, the knowledge we attained is basic, to some extent, is university preparation. Thus, as everyone knows, a high school degree might not earn you a nice job with satisfied salary. Instead, in university, you are taught some professional skills in doing things, just as design electronic circles, art of management or manipulate engines. Even you do not accept further education like postgraduate program, you would attain more experience in work since you have grasped the basic or key knowledge. People understand this well, so they are less likely to miss the opportunity to attend college or university.
Second, people are willing to have new experience in college or university. People across the country, who are not supposed to meet each other for the sake of geographic distance, come together and became friends. Especially there are international students. They bring their diverse culture and interesting customs, which make the campus full of energy and vigor. People acquire their new experience through daily communication, party or even love affairs. They become more mature in college or university.
Third, college or university is the best place to do scientific research. People learn advanced scientific knowledge in college. what’s more, people will form the habit of thinking logically and acting methodically. The spirit of science is right there in the lab of a college, from the professor and students. People who have strong interests in his/her academic field would like to do research to learn more information of that subject and explore new method or new product and thus contribute to the society.
In conclusion, no matter what reasons for people to attend college or university, for career preparation, new experiences or scientific research, people ought to take full advantages of the opportunity to improve themselves, and that’s the key for life.

[ 本帖最后由 rainyyun 于 2007-7-10 21:28 编辑 ]

kevinliu6883UID: 2338522

Generally it is very good. When you have time, correct those grammar errors.

Yours
Almost all the jobs nowadays in the society could be simply divided into two types according to their working methods: works with hands and works with heads. There is a tremendous require on both of them, so there is not an apparent answer of which is better. However, if I am going to design or begin my career, I really prefer to those jobs with heads.

Modified:
All jobs require physical power and intelligence. Some may need more thinking than physical energy input. Based on this, all jobs fall in two catalogs: works with hands and works with heads. Each kind of work has its prons and cons. In my opinion, I prefer to choose a job that required more intelligence than physical activity.

[ when you mention an object at the first time, you generally don't have to use "the" at very begining.]

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还有两星期就考了，求拍！！

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感谢大家

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请大家帮忙看看，谢谢了！^_^
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第二篇，请大家拍转，谢谢！
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kevinliu6883UID: 2338522

Some young adults like to live with their parents for a long time, some may hope to get an independent life earlier. In my opinion, I prefer to separate from parents and live by myself.

First of all, living by myself warrents me enough free time and more freedom. I like to go to cinema. I don't have to get permission from anybody because I make my decision. I don't receive criticisement just because I come back very late. I can cook. I can stay in bed in the Sunday mornings. When I desire to date, the presence of parents is very embarrensing.

Second, independent life will give me more chance to communicate with other members resonsiblly. This will definitely benefit future life. Independent life means myself take responsibility of everything I committed or singed no matter it is wrong or right. By learning from mistakes I can gain a lot of knowledge and experience.

Third, everyone has a lifespan. Our parents can not accompany us all of our life. As a result, I have to independently live later or earlier. I don't like to passively accept parents' arranged marriage. It would be better to start my own plan earlier. If I am wrong, I will have time to correct it. If I feel the situatoin is too comlicated, I can still ask advice from parents, but I keep the right to make decision by myself.

Living with parents also has some advantages. It is easy and comfortable. For examples, I don't have to worry about familly business because someone is taking care of it. But I lose chance to learn. Compared with independent living, the experience is more important than enjoying comforable life. I like freedom, new experience and concern more on future, therefore I value more on living by myself than on living with family members.