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发表于 2007-6-14 11:09:37 |只看该作者

希望各位批评指正,月底就要考托福了!!!

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发表于 2007-6-14 11:39:18 |只看该作者

(第2,3篇)希望各位批评指正!!!

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发表于 2007-6-14 21:38:34 |只看该作者
:funk: 第一次发作文... 不好意思地```

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发表于 2007-6-15 23:22:25 |只看该作者

thank you guys...

1各月后考  以下是刚写的一篇  希望能帮忙改一下 还有 希望能提供些关于#80的思路 谢谢!:)

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=685799&extra=page%3D1

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发表于 2007-6-16 23:44:48 |只看该作者
先道个谢,又要麻烦各位gter了
7,7考,作文求改
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/thread-686371-1-1.html

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发表于 2007-6-19 14:47:46 |只看该作者

这是个好地方呀~~作文

只兜不售

给大家现现丑

给个面子

来点意见 好不

谢啦https://bbs.gter.net/thread-688065-1-1.html
6.19


我这样的作文都敢上传,
大家千万要好意思 发表意见啊.

批评就好~~



https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=689006&extra=page%3D1  

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发表于 2007-6-20 15:20:10 |只看该作者

下一个看看。

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发表于 2007-6-20 17:24:28 |只看该作者
第一次写作文, 请帮忙修改,非常谢谢

http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=689097&extra=page%3D1

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发表于 2007-6-20 22:50:39 |只看该作者
根据6.16机井写的作文,不知能否及格,麻烦多提意见

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-689300-1-1.html

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发表于 2007-6-21 08:45:47 |只看该作者

roomates assigned by school or chosen by students

College students come from different places. When they admit, they have to find a place to live. University dormitory is an idea option for freshman due to easy access to classrooms. However, there is a debate on who determine the roommates: by school or by students. To my knowledge, students’ determining their roommates has more advantages.

Students are tenants of a dormitory. They may live there for one year or more time. If they have good roommates they will fell happy, just like we hope a good neighborhood. Since roommates are easily affected in many ways. Everyone desires a nice guy that can go well along with them.

If students choose their roommates, they will find someone they feel good. If the roommates are determined by school, their campus life will mostly depend on luck. I see some guys fighting each other in a dormitory. They are not suitable to live together. If the roommates are friends, I dare say fighting won't happen.

However, for many freshmen, choosing a roommate may not be as easy as sophomore or senior. It is very likely the freshmen don't know each other. So the school makes the decision who lives with who. However this policy does not apply to sophomore. Many American universities give senior students options to choose their roommates.

Drawing a strict line that only school has the right to assign room and roommates, actually rules out the possibility for those who really know each other. If I was a policy maker, I would give an option for freshman too. For those who have no idea about others, who make the decision makes no difference. For the acquaints, the difference is obvious.

If I was a student, I would like to choose my roommates by me, no matter I was a freshman or sophomore.


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发表于 2007-6-21 11:57:12 |只看该作者

我的文章

中立观点的文章,不知道有没有说清楚。这样写可以吗?
可以得多少分啊?谢谢高人指点!
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-689598-1-1.html

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发表于 2007-6-22 23:02:48 |只看该作者
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-677020-1-1.html

现在还能不能加分哦..赚点积分:)

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发表于 2007-6-25 09:36:58 |只看该作者
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-691674-1-1.html

请大家帮帮忙,改改巴。

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发表于 2007-6-26 00:29:57 |只看该作者

Automobiles improve people's morden life: pros and cons

Just opposite to the prevailing point of view, I support the automobiles with strong evidence.

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