9月ibt第11次作业——optoAz

optoAzUID: 2313070

7.28第十一次作业（请于7.28晚22：30之前交,在7.29晚22:00前完成批改）
写作：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the
time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer
一看题目，大概九成九的人都会写赞同这个观点吧。。那好，反其道行之，让看够了这种观点的判卷老师休息下眼睛好了。。

diffficult time 和future的valuable exp. 根本没有直接联系
理由1：太diffcult容易让人丧失信心和兴趣，导致没有future的发展
2：valuable的lesson是通过学习总结智慧得出，而不是单纯的hardtime.
让步，有的人说hardtime确实可以激励人，反驳那只是少数特殊人，
总结，这俩东西根本没关系。

With the development of society, there is a public debate that whether all value lessons for the future always seems hard at the time or not. Many people hold that valueble lessons cannot be obtained easily, so it should passed a difficult time. But in my view, there is little connection bewteen today's hardtime and tomorrow's valuable lessons.

First of all, when faced some difficult time, a normal person may not transform it into good lessons. Instand, hardtime in today may distory a person's furture interest, or sometimes make people loss the self-confidence. There is a example, a child lived near by me was very clever, so his mother want him learn to play the piano and hire a best teacher in the area for him. It is really not a easy thing for a five years child to play it. So at the very beginning, he began to crying and refuse to have the piano lessons, and as the lessons became heavier, he totally hate the piano and have no confidence to himself. Frome the instance above, we can easily see that difficult experiances at the time can not always convert to a useful lessons.

In addition, everyone knows that valuable lessons which lead to succeed can come from wisdom, conclusion, and also sometimes, hard working. Difficult experiances is only one part of the key to successful future. Without thinking and carefully conclusion of the loss, how can a people achieve the final goal only because he or she have a hard time? Let's take some scientist for instance. Proffeser Yang, a good learned old teacher in our colloge, devoted his whole life to the research of quantum mechanics, but have nothing achievement to come out. Of cause he has a really difficult experiences during his reaserch, but this kind of hard time never takes him a valuable lessons at any future. This example also shows that difficult experiences cannot lead to succceed in future.

However, I can foresee some opposing voices, those people would not hesitate to retort me that some famaous people such as Bill Gates, learned most from his hard time and finally get the success in future. I can admit that is ture, but there is only one Bill Gates in the whole world, most of the people are normal and cannot ture the hardtime into experiences in future. So I will still reinforce my standpoint that there's little connection bewteen the difficult experiances in time and the valuables lessions in future.

optoAzUID: 2313070

这几天出差。。作文写得实在是很烂。。。
想避开大多数人写的角度，可不知道会不会有点跑题。。。
况且这台机器上没有word.拼写检查都没办法，，呃，估计错误一把一把的。。

今儿，赶了饭局再晕晕的跑回来写东西，逻辑混乱语言失范
在陌生的城市，伸出手去，什么都握不住只有湿漉漉的回忆。
想起xdf老师曾经讲过作文口语的一个万能段子，I just wanna make my life difference.
嗯，似乎就是这么简单。

口语传不上来，明儿我再想想办法吧，谢谢修改俺作文的MM了～鞠躬。。

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With the development of society, there is a public debate that whether all value lessons for the future always seems hard at the time or not. Many people hold that valueble(valuable) lessons cannot be obtained easily, so it should passed a difficult time. But in my view, there is little connection bewteen(between) today's hardtime and tomorrow's valuable lessons.

First of all, when faced some difficult time, a normal person may not transform it into good lessons. Instand(Instead), hardtime in today may distory(destroy) a person's furture(future) interest, or sometimes make people loss the self-confidence. There is a(an) example, a child lived near by me was very clever, so his mother want him learn to play the piano and hire a(the) best teacher in the(my) area for him. It is really not a(an) easy thing for a five years child to play it. So at the very beginning, he began to crying and refuse(ed) to have the piano lessons, and as the lessons became heavier, he totally hate the piano and have no confidence to himself. Frome(?) the instance above, we can easily see that difficult experiances(experiences) at the time can not always convert to a(an) useful lessons.

In addition, everyone knows that valuable lessons which lead to succeed can come from wisdom, conclusion(?), and also sometimes, hard working. Difficult experiances(experiences) is(are) only one part of the key to successful future. Without thinking and carefully conclusion of the loss, how can a people(person) achieve the final goal only because he or she have a hard time? Let's take some scientist(s) for instance. Proffeser(Professor) Yang, a good learned old teacher in our colloge(college), devoted his whole life to the research of quantum mechanics, but have(has) nothing achievement to come out. Of cause he has a really difficult experiences during his reaserch, but this kind of hard time never takes him a valuable lessons at any future. This example also shows that difficult experiences cannot lead to succceed(success) in future.

However, I can foresee some opposing voices, those people would not hesitate to retort me that some famaous(famous) people such as Bill Gates, learned most from his hard time and finally get the success in future. I can admit that is ture, but there is only one Bill Gates in the whole world, most of the people are normal and cannot ture(turn) the hardtime into experiences in future. So I will still reinforce my standpoint that there's little connection bewteen(between) the difficult experiances(experiences) in time and the valuables(valuable) lessions in future.