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Argument 2
The following appeared in a letter sent by a committee of homeowners from the Deerhaven Acres to all homeowners in Deerhaven Acres.
"Seven years ago, homeowners in nearby Brookville community adopted a set of restrictions on how the community's yards should be landscaped and what colors the exteriors of homes should be painted. Since then, average property values have tripled in Brookville. In order to raise property values in Deerhaven Acres, we should adopt our own set of restrictions on landscaping and housepainting."
Word : 415 Time :50min
提纲:
Para 1 . “废话”
Para 2 . 指出调查数据过时,人们的喜好可能会改变,而且过去有效的方法现在不一定有效
Para 3 . 指出导致Brookville资产增值的因素很多,不一定就是those restrictions,需要排除
Para 4 . 指出两个社区不一定有相似之处
Para 5 . 结论
In this letter of the committee of homeowners, the author claim that in order to raise property values in Deerhaven Acres, all the homeowners should adopt their own set of restrictions landscaping and housepainting. For supporting his argument he give a example that the nearby Brookville tripled their property values after restricting the landscape of community’s yards and colors of homes’ exteriors. However, I suspect that the author give the reliable information to draw the conclusion.
First, what the author cites in the passage may be outdated information which happened seven years ago. People in the modern society usually advocate the individuality, while this kind of restrictions may not be accepted by public. Moreover, even this kind of restrictions could really benefit people for certain reasons in that time, it is still possible that the condition has changed in the seven-year time, so the old manners can not directly use today without any investigation. Therefore, unless the author can prove that the condition today is absolutely the same as that of seven years ago, I can not believe his conclusion.
Secondly, the author only say that Brookville increased its property after adopting those restrictions, but fail to explain how the restrictions influence the raise. Without a direct correlation between property raising and the restrictions, we can suspect that there are other factors to cause the result. For example, it is possible that Brookville’s industry thrived after adopting the restrictions, or the community developed the tourism depending on its beautiful scenery, even the local people found a big oil field in their community. In short, I can not be convinced that Deerhaven can benefit from those restrictions without more detail evidences.
Thirdly, even the true reason of Brookville’s property raising is those restrictions, it does not means that the measure can be effective in Deerhaven. The author does not provide us the comparison between the two communities. If Deerhaven does not have any similarity with Brookville, we can not risk adopting the same restrictions. It is quite possible that those landscape and house color’s restrictions would look terrible in Deerhaven while are suitable in Brookville, because of their different natural and social environment.
In conclusion, the author do not give us adequate evidence to support his conclusion. If he want to persuade all the homeowners to adopt those restrictions, he need provide more information about the factors of property raise and the comparison between two community, and a investigation of people’s appetite today is also helpful. |
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