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发表于 2007-8-21 02:11:10 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
GB writing 1 in IELTS2
Dear Sir,
I am one passenger who took the flight from Shanghai, China to New York on Oct. 11. Unfortunately, my suitcase did not come out after this flight. As soon as I noticed it, I explained and left my contact information to Mr. Hook who was in charge at the Luggage Claim office.  But till now, I have not received any news.

This is a small black suitcase, about 40cm*50cm, marked “EH” on its left side. It contains two books, one coat and an evening dress. This dress is made for a very important ceremony, which will be held in two day. I am anxious to find it. Could you please push its searching for me?

My claim number is SO596, the flight number is UT567.

Please feel free to call me by my mobile phone if you have any question. The number is 13900000. Your soonest feedback is highly appreciated.

Yours sincerely,

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发表于 2007-8-21 02:14:12 |只看该作者

小作文,道歉信,自己写的,大家指教啦

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Dear Jane,
What a wonderful news that you decide to come here for one week holiday. It must be ages since we have seen each other. I wish I could see your smiling face at that time.
But it is regretted I am not be here for a business trip. A big case is waiting in HongKong, quite profitable. But the purchaser is tough. As a result, I am to be sent, as a key technology support, with my Asian Sales Manager to bargain with him, hoping everything is in order. I am really very sorry but I have no choice.
I just talked with Mary, our classmate, she is available during that period. And she likes to be helpful during your stay.  Or I can share all my time with you if you can postpone your schedule to next month.  
Give me your feedback as soon as possible, so that Mary & I can arrange a welcome party.
Yours,

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发表于 2007-8-21 02:15:56 |只看该作者

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Dear John,
What a wonderful news that you decide to come here for one week holiday. It must be ages since we have seen each other. I wish I could see your smiling face at that time.
But it is regretted I can not pick you up from the airport because of a big meeting in that afternoon. I have to be present, as a key technology support, with my Asian Sales Manager to bargain with our client, hoping everything is in order.
I am really very sorry but I have no choice.
But Mary, my wife, is available during that period. And she likes to be helpful. Because she has not met you before, could you please offer me one your photo for her to distinguish you from the crowd easily?   
Waiting for your feedback as soon as possible. If you have any question, please feel free to call me.
Yours,

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Dear John,
What a wonderful time we shared this week. It is regretted that you have to leave now.
However, I am sorry I can not drive you to the airport because of a big meeting in that afternoon. I have to be present, as a key technology support, with my Asian Sales Manager to bargain with our client, hoping everything is in order.
I am really very sorry but I have no choice.
But Mary, my wife, is available during that period. And she likes to be helpful.
Could you please tell me your flight time so that we can arrange, ensuring to arrive at the airport in time.
And what your plan in tomorrow night? If you are free, let have a dinner to say goodbye at my home.
Waiting for your feedback as soon as possible. If you have any question, please feel free to call me.
Yours,

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发表于 2007-8-21 02:18:12 |只看该作者

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Dear Mr. Darcy,
It is my great honor to receive your offer as an assistant accountant. I am so pleased to work with you in such a well-credit company. Due to your letter, I should be on board on next Monday.
However, I am afraid I can not start on time for a problem.
My former colleague, Ms. White, was ill yesterday. She is the right person to fill in my position. Due to her doctor’s words, she has to take an operation and stay in bed for one week. Others are also overloaded. Consequently, my former employer can not find a suitable substitute in such short time. I hope I can be helpful to him, considering the long-term relationship and support from my former boss in my past years. At the time, I cherish the opportunity to work for you.
It is highly appreciated if you can allow me to postpone one week until Ms. White is healed.
Waiting for your feedback as soon as possible. If you have any question, please feel free to call me.
Yours sincerely,

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发表于 2007-8-21 02:19:41 |只看该作者

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不能按时上课
Dear Mr. Darcy,
Thanks you for your great tutorship, I feel I play the violin much netter than before.  however I am writing this letter to you to apologize that I am afraid I can not take the course on next Monday.
My former colleague, Ms. White, was ill yesterday. Due to her doctor’s words, she has to take an operation and stay in bed for one week. But she was planned to go to Hongkong for an important meeting. Consequently, my employer can not find a suitable substitute except me in such short time. At the same time, I cherish this opportunity to show my ability.
It is highly appreciated if you can allow me to postpone our class by one week until I am back from Hongkong
Waiting for your feedback as soon as possible. If you have any question, please feel free to call me.
Yours sincerely,

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发表于 2007-8-21 02:20:46 |只看该作者

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Dear Mr. Darcy,
Thanks you for your great tutorship, I feel I play the violin much netter than before.  however I am writing this letter to you to apologize that I am afraid I can not continue the course.
My colleague, Ms. White, was ill yesterday. Due to her doctor’s words, she has to take an operation and stay in bed for one month. But she was planned to go to Hongkong as an important executive from next Monday. Consequently, my employer can not find a suitable substitute except me in such short time. At the same time, I cherish this opportunity to show my ability. I hope this trip will benefit my promotion in profession career.
It is highly appreciated if you can allow me to quit this class and refund my tuition.
Waiting for your feedback as soon as possible. If you have any question, please feel free to call me.
Yours sincerely,

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发表于 2007-8-21 02:21:50 |只看该作者

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Dear John,
What a wonderful news that you decide to come here for one week holiday. It must be ages since we have seen each other. I wish I could see your smiling face at that time.
But it is regretted I can not meet you at 7pm tomorrow night in Red Restaurant. I have to be present, as a key technology support, with my Asian Sales Manager to bargain with our client, hoping everything is in order.
I am really very sorry but I have no choice.
But in this weekend I am available. Are you free at that time? If yes, come to my home, I would like to offer you a family feast. It will be more delicious and warm than restaurant’s product, I promise.   
Waiting for your feedback as soon as possible, so that I can make some arrangement. If you have any question, please feel free to call me.

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发表于 2007-8-21 02:22:51 |只看该作者

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Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform and apologize to you that I can not return my books in time.
What I borrowed is named “Asian History” in the library on Monday in last month, which is due on the first day of next week. That book helps me a lot in my essay for Chinese Revolution. Because of this fantastic but difficult topic, I went to China, collecting information locally by interviewing native residents and referring Chinese libraries. I planned to come back this weekend. Out of my expectation, I was not permitted to leave, because of a new terrible epidemic, 禽流感,  unless my blood test is negative. This test will take me two more weeks. I have no choice but to stay here.
Consequently, could you give me an extension of two weeks?
And it is highly appreciated if you can waive any overdue fines that may be charged, considering this particular situation.
Yours sincerely,

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损坏书
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform and apologize to you that I can not return my books.
What I borrowed is named “Asian History” in the library on Monday in last month, which is due on the first day of next week. That book helps me a lot in my essay for Chinese Revolution. Out of my expectation, this book was missed/ damaged by water in the trip.
I am really very sorry for this accident. This book is 1980s’ edition. Thus it is only about $1.4, which was a great amount before inflation. I am sure $1.4 is not enough for my carelessness.
Consequently, could you tell how much is the fine? Or could I buy a new edition, you can appoint the edition, as a compensation?
Looking forward to your soon feedback. If you have any question, please feel free to call me.
Yours sincerely,

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发表于 2007-8-21 02:24:29 |只看该作者

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损坏物品在旅店/宿舍
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform and apologize to you that my little son has broken your telephone.
I live in Rom 506 on the second floor, checking in yesterday. I should say your hotel is comfortable and service is warm.
However, my son is just 5 years old, be curious about everything around him. At last night, he was watching TV at first. When I took a bathe last night, I leaved him alone. Obviously his eyes were caught by phone as a interesting toy. Unfortunately, he threw it to the ground by accident.
I am really very sorry for your lost. I am not sure how much it costs. Consequently, could you tell how much is the fine? Or could I buy a new telephone, you can appoint the type, as a compensation for my carelessness?
Looking forward to your soon feedback. If you have any question, please feel free to call me.
Yours sincerely,

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发表于 2007-8-21 02:26:15 |只看该作者

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Dear Jane,
What a wonderful news that you will get a college certificate. Sincere congratulation to your great achievement. I still remember your crying face when you were a little baby. I wish I could see your smiling face at that wonderful time.
But it is regretted I am not be here for a business trip. A big case is waiting in HongKong, quite profitable. But the purchaser is tough. As a result, I am to be sent, as a key technology support, with my Asian Sales Manager to bargain with him, hoping everything is in order. I am really very sorry but I have no choice.
However, my wife, Mary, is available. She will be present on time. And she has promised me to take photos for you. I wish I can share your glory when I watch those photos.
Please transfer my warm regards to your families.
Yours,

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发表于 2007-8-21 02:27:29 |只看该作者

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Dear Mr. Smith,
Thanks for your support and cooperation during the past 12 months. I did enjoy the time we shared.
It is regrettable but I have to leave your company because of the long distance between office and my home. I have to spend more than 3 hours on the way. I wish I could spend more time on my personal life.
I plan to leave in two weeks, hope you can find a fill-in & transfer all my business in time.
Because I still keep 5 days as overwork compensation & annual leave, I will take them all in the following weeks if those holidays can not be paid by cash as compensation.
My business & duty are described in detail as attached.
Sorry for any inconvenience might be brought to you for my leaving. Thanks again for your warm help & advices in past.
Your understanding & soon feedback are highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,

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发表于 2007-8-21 02:28:38 |只看该作者

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My dear colleagues,
Thanks for your support and cooperation during the past 12 months. I did enjoy the time we shared.
It is regrettable but I have to leave your company because of the long distance between office and my home. I have to spend more than 3 hours on the way. I wish I could spend more time on my personal life.
I will leave in two weeks. All my business and documents will be transferred to a new employee, Mr. White. It is appreciated if you continue your great work and support Mr. White to overcome any problems might be brought by my absence.
If you have any question about my former business, please feel free to call me, my number remains same.
Please bear in mind, we are still good friends thanks to the wonderful time we enjoyed. You are welcomed to take a drink when you are free.
Good Luck & keep in touch.

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发表于 2007-8-21 02:29:41 |只看该作者

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Dear Ms. White,
I am writing this letter to apologize to your for my dog.
My dog, Bobby, seemed to be ruttish in past weeks. I am really sorry I did not deal with it in time, bringing great troubles to my warm neighbor, because I was absent for a business trip. Sorry for the inconvenience and troubles brought to you in the past weeks. Thanks for your frank words. Otherwise, I will do more noise pollution without notice. I got insomnia before, so I know what is your feeling and troubles completely. Please accept my sincere apology.
I will take Bobby to a veterinary surgeon for an operation tomorrow. Furthermore, I will take your advice to buy a mouth cover for accident. I am sure it will not make noise to break your sleep again.
If you still have any question, please feel free to tell me.
Yours sincerely,

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