issue83 [kb9.11] 第11次作业

prophetluoUID: 2240098

The wilderness areas in a country, amysterious place has aroused immense interesting to nowadays people when theliving space is sinking years by years, has brought enormous contradiction tothe government. Many people hold on an opinion that those wilderness areasshould be taken great advantage due to the population bulge, while othersinsist that those place should be protected in order to keep their natural state. In my perspective, I'dprefer to protect the wilderness areas which is in good condition and will notdo harm to human beings, however if it has a huge tendency to become a desertor any place which will compromise the ecosystem of that region, I stronglysuggest to eradicate those cancer of Earth.

In wilderness area in good condition shouldbe protected. We , human living on Earth has brought great suffer to thehabitats of other animals which has disappeared and are about to disappear onEarth. To protect those habitats of animals is to the keep the diversity ofEarth, which is the foundation of ecosystem, thus as a member of ecosystem inbiology angle, human beings will not exist if the diversity of ecosystem vanishbecause of the destructions of human civilization. Yet, a considerable amountof people do not cognize how serious the lose of species is, for example, ifthere do exist pest A whose amount is under the control of bird B in awilderness areas what is unknown to human, then the exposition of thatwilderness area destroys the habitat of bird B which disappear as soon as thehuman activities involve in. In the end, those pest which lost their naturalenemy turn to their spear to human civilization and bring unheard epidemic tohuman being , which may kill or even extinguish human society. So it is unwiseto extent our power to those mysterious and unknown places. Nevertheless,proper researches to wilderness areas should not be prevented, due to the situationof the example above. In that case, to protect those areas has a significantmeaning for researchers of biology and ecology because it keep the originationand evolution of life in those places.

However, if wilderness areas' conditionturn to bad, the power of human civilization should involve in. It is notcatholicity but fatuous to indulge a child with bad habits and it is not mercybut stupid to leave those bad condition wilderness areas dying. For example,after a long-term research of a certain area whose living condition of all thecreatures turns to bad due to the climate changes in the last century, and evenworse, the researchers point that those places will become desert if anymeasure is not taken. Not until the scientists and sociologists who areconcerning that area and intend to change bad condition by using some technologicalmethods win the support from government who consider that the intervention ofhuman civilization to wilderness areas may cause unpredictable troubles tohuman being, that place will change into desert and  will not reverse to keep original state.Sustained efforts should be made  toprevent  that kind of tragedy happen innowadays world and a never surrender attitude should be keep in order toameliorate the bad condition of those wilderness areas which has already diedand prevent those areas from corroding the nearby areas.

To sum up, the wilderness areas just likeindividuals in the human society, if one who is in good manner should be sentour best regards, but if one who is notorious should be blamed without mercy,the areas with good condition should be protected while the one who is dyingshould be heal immediately. But only appeal form the scientist and sociologistsis not sufficient, more help should be sought from the law which can restrict humanbeings desires.

phoenixlwUID: 2382912

The wilderness areas in a country, amysterious place has aroused immense interesting to nowadays people when theliving space is sinking years by years, has brought enormous contradiction tothe government. Many people hold on an opinion that those wilderness areasshould be taken great advantage due to the population bulge, while othersinsist that those place should be protected in order to keep their natural state. In my perspective, I'dprefer to protect the wilderness areas which is in good condition and will notdo harm to human beings, however if it has a huge tendency to become a desertor any place which will compromise the ecosystem of that region, I stronglysuggest to eradicate those cancer of Earth. 开头矛盾性展开得挺好

In wilderness area in good condition shouldbe protected. We , human living on Earth has brought great suffer to thehabitats of other animals which has disappeared and are about to disappear onEarth. To protect those habitats of animals is to the keep the diversity ofEarth, which is the foundation of ecosystem, thus as a member of ecosystem inbiology angle, human beings will not exist if the diversity of ecosystem vanishbecause of the destructions of human civilization. Yet, a considerable amountof people do not cognize how serious the lose(loss) of species is, for example, ifthere do exist pest A whose amount is under the control of bird B in awilderness areas what is unknown to human, then the exposition of thatwilderness area destroys the habitat of bird B which disappear as soon as thehuman activities involve in. In the end, those pest which lost their naturalenemy turn to their spear to human civilization and bring unheard epidemic tohuman being , which may kill or even extinguish(感觉过了点呵呵,用harm就行了吧) human society. So it is unwiseto extent our power to those mysterious and unknown places. Nevertheless,proper researches to wilderness areas should not be prevented, due to the situationof the example above. In that case, to protect those areas has a significantmeaning for researchers of biology and ecology because it keep the originationand evolution of life in those places.

However,even if wilderness areas' conditionturn to bad, the power of human civilization should still involve in. It is notcatholicity but fatuous to indulge a child with bad habits and it is not mercybut stupid to leave those bad condition wilderness areas dying(比喻很好). For example,after a long-term research of a certain area whose living condition of all thecreatures turns to bad due to the climate changes in the last century, and evenworse, the researchers point that those places will become desert if anymeasure is not taken. Not until the scientists and sociologists who areconcerning that area and intend to change bad condition by using some technologicalmethods win the support from government who consider that the intervention ofhuman civilization to wilderness areas may cause unpredictable troubles tohuman being, that place will change into desert and  will not reverse to keep original state.Sustained efforts should be made  toprevent  that kind of tragedy happen innowadays world and a never surrender attitude should be keep(kept) in order toameliorate the bad condition of those wilderness areas which has already diedand prevent those areas from corroding the nearby areas.

To sum up, the wilderness areas just likeindividuals in the human society, if one who is in good manner should be sentour best regards, but if one who is notorious should be blamed without mercy,(这改为分号)the areas with good condition should be protected while the one who is dyingshould be heal immediately. But only appeal form the scientist and sociologistsis not sufficient, more help should be sought from the law which can restrict humanbeings desires.

总得来说挺好,用词也不错,特别是比喻值得借鉴.两段对比型展开,逻辑上也没问题.
但注意一点, 打字一定要多打空格...  - -|||