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126. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? There is nothing that young people can teach older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.  



Personally, I do not agree with this statement. Though the senior citizens are more experienced in many aspects, we, as for the youth, are likely to teach thing they do not have

As for the older people, they got a lot of experiences in a lot of experience which might be so useful in our daily life. They can instruct us in many aspects, for example, in the machine operating, getting well with the colleges, living a healthy life, etc. What will our life be if all the things in operation are made by inexperienced novice? In the other words, without the help of the experienced senior citizens-sure, we can easily imagine the result-everything may at a mass  So the senior people really play an important role in the daily routines.

However, Should that be what statement implies? Is it the truth that youth have nothing to teach the senior people. Definitely, I will say no. Because of the following reasons

Youth are more talented in the new high technology. It is a situation that young people have a better command of the high tech such as Personal Computer, Cell phone, Internet, MP3 and something like these. Out of the date as our senior citizens are, they might be in a loss when dealing with the situations in which these high tech are used. Without doubt, it is the time that youth teach the older people to use or operate these high tech machines. Besides, with the importance of information plays a more and more important role in our society, our senior people also in need of these high techs to make themselves informed of the whole world. For example the changes taken place all over the global, or just some retirement funding policy and so forth. At that time, they need youth to instruct them to get the current information easily and conveniently.

Even if they are equipped with the same skills to operate the high tech machines, the youth should have some advantages in the decision-making and determination of fighting. Experience brings us both advantages as well as disadvantages. In one hand, our senior people are more likely to do the things well. On the other hand, they are usually trapped in the cage of fixed thoughts. In the realm of biz, suppose an experienced manager, who judged the plan put forward by the youth for exploration of the market would be a failure. But with the strong desire to success and proof of himself(herself), he\ she still have a best try. Guess what happened? By working hard and daring to break the convention do the youth succeed, they not only make their career succeed, but also change the way of the conventional ideas. This is the very advantages of the youth. Merits if the older people can get from the immature ideas, along with combining these with experience, they might also succeed.
Shortly, older are much better in the experienced needed fields, almost each field. But, with some exception, the youth might take fully use of their advantages in high-tech and daring to do or hard-working spirits to teach older people.
感觉自己写了有点凌乱了,而且感觉写的很随意,而且,今天竟然没有在限定的时间内完成,诶!
说实话,感觉自己的作文的体系是越来越混乱了!真是的!诶!!!
明天早上自己再好好要修改!!!!多吸收意见
大家给我提宝贵的意见啊!

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