ISSUE48【Aero小组】第2次作业 BY BIGYAN

bigyanUID: 2382427

440 words
I agree with the argue that not the famous but the group of people whose identities have long been forgotten make the significant event and trends in history possible .Nevertheless, at the same time , we can not ignore the fact that the well-known people effect our lives sometimes .


The most moment impressing everyone in the history are made by one or two famous whose unforgotten character and recorded greatness determine that what they did would be written in the history book. For instance, the Depression in 20th century., with the economics and morale sapping in American, Roosevlt present and hold the New Deal , which helped the notion recover from the financial crisis. Another one ,Lincoln, who rewritten the history ,struggled with big landowners for setting slave free. As my history tutor in our university once said:” Tough age makes great man.” Without the famous , there would be another picture showing in front of us now. Unless focus on the individuals, we fail to study the history successfully.


On the other hand , without the support from the offstage , the famous can not gain the reputation ,let alone made the most significant events and trends in the history .Since industrial revolution ,rapid social and technology change lead to a fact that no one can control any complicate task alone. When Amstronge , as the greatest spacer , made the first step on the moon, many of the scientist watching on the earth should not be forgotten .This illustrate that if not acknowledge the importance of the group , only on the superficial do we explore the history.


Apart from the science ,we still can not overlook the importance of the group , even if we do not realize their value to a event .Just like a superstar in a soccer team ,he or she may posses omnipotence , but without a well teamwork , how much energy he is able to make .The answer is the team will receive a failing .On the other , when a team win a champion ,we should honor not only the MVP but also everyone in the team, including the most ordinary members .


In conclusion , the study of history can not operates with ignoring the interplay between famous and group . To see the history clear, we should realize what the famous did is the most valuable information on his age under the special situation .To see the history comprehensively, we also should concentrate on the group contribution to any event and trends. Moreover, no matter the individual or groups, they have their own unforgotten contribution every moment.      
  
      

[ 本帖最后由 bigyan 于 2007-12-18 21:58 编辑 ]

beetle1986UID: 2431214

440 words
I agree with the argue (arguer or argument) that not the famous but the group of people whose identities have long been forgotten make the significant events and trends in history possible. Nevertheless, at the same time, we cannot ignore the fact that the well-known people affect our lives sometimes.


The most moment impressing everyone in the history are made by one or two famous whose unforgotten character and recorded greatness determine that what they did would be written in the history book. For instance, the Depression in 20th century, with the economics and morale sapping in American, President Roosevelt present and hold the New Deal, which helped the notion recover from the financial crisis. Another one, Lincoln, who rewritten the history, struggled with big landowners for setting slave free. As my history tutor of our university once said:”Tough age makes great man.” Without the famous, there would be another picture showing in front of us now. Unless focus on the individuals, we fail to study the history successfully.


On the other hand, without the support from the offstage, the famous cannot gain the reputation ,let alone made the most significant events and trends in the history(这个地方看不懂) .Since industrial revolution ,rapid social and technology change lead to a fact that no one can control any complicate task alone. When Armstrong , as the greatest spacer , made the first step on the moon, many of the scientist watching on the earth should not be forgotten .This illustrates that if not acknowledge the importance of the group , only on the superficial do we explore the history.


Apart from the science ,we still cannot overlook the importance of the group , even if we do not realize their value to a event .Just like a superstar in a soccer team ,he or she may possess omnipotence , but without a well(good，这里是修饰名词) teamwork , how much energy he is able to make .The answer is the team will receive a failing .On the other(contrast) , when a team win a champion ,we should honor not only the MVP but also everyone in the team, including the most ordinary members .


In conclusion , the study of history cannot operates with ignoring the interplay between famous and group . To see the history clear, we should realize what the famous did is the most valuable information on his age under the special situation .To see the history comprehensively, we also should concentrate on the group contribution to any event and trends. Moreover, no matter the individual or groups, they have their own unforgotten contribution every moment.      
  一是要多看范文，练习写长句，中国英语的味道比较浓。
二是要注意英文写作规范，标点符号和前面一个单词间没有空格的。

武寒UID: 2300087

I agree with the argue that not (only) the famous but (also) the group of people whose identities have long been forgotten make the significant event and trends in history possible. Nevertheless, at the same time, we can not ignore the fact that the well-known people (sometimes) effect our lives sometimes.(这句承接下段的观点)

The most (very) moment impressing everyone in the history are made by one or two famous (,) whose unforgotten character and recorded greatness (这个搭配是什么意思) determine that what they did would be written in the history book. For instance, the Depression in 20th century, with the economics and morale sapping in American, Roosevlt present and hold the New Deal, which helped the notion recover from the financial crisis. Another one, Lincoln, who rewritten (rewrote) the history, struggled with big landowners for setting slaves free. (As) My history tutor in our university once said: “Tough age makes great man.” Without the famous, there would be another picture showing in front of us now. Unless focused on the individuals, we will fail to study the history successfully.举了两个例子说明，学习

On the other hand, without the support from the offstage, the famous can not gain the reputation, let alone made the most significant events and trends in the history .Since industrial revolution, rapid social and technology change lead to a fact that no one can control any complicate task alone. When Armstrong (e), as the greatest spacer, made the first step on the moon, many (of the) scientists watching on the earth should not be forgotten. This illustrates that if not acknowledge(ing) the importance of the group, only on the superficial do we explore the history.

Apart from the science ,we still can not overlook the importance of the group , even if we do not realize their value to a event .Just like a superstar in a soccer team ,he or she may posses omnipotence , but without a well teamwork , how much energy he is able to make .The answer is the team will receive a failing .On the other , when a team win a champion ,we should honor not only the MVP but also everyone in the team, including the most ordinary members .(可以总结一下)

In conclusion, the study of history can not operates (be operated) with ignoring the interplay between famous (few) and (forgotten) group. To see the history clear (clearly), we should realize what the famous did is the most valuable information on his age under the special situation .To see the history comprehensively, we also should concentrate on the group(’s) contribution to any event and trends. Moreover, no matter the individuals or groups, they have their own unforgotten contribution every moment.
正反两方面加假设,来晚了