求助：系主任的回信，再该怎么办呢？在线等

michellemonUID: 2338447

终于。在网站上作了调查，找了模版，查了老师的资料。我申请的是牛校的整合营销沟通专业。
冒着胆，给系主任写了以下的信：

Dear Professor xxx,

My name is xxx. I am an applicant to the fall 2008 MS program in xxx. I am currently studying in xxx to pursue a MS degree in xxx with an emphasis on marketing. I expect to graduate in May and finish my thesis this summer.

I hope the following updated information will assist you in better understanding my qualifications as a Master candidate in xxx.

1.      Recently I have started writing my Master¡¯s thesis titled, an investigation of how American popular television series influences the Chinese Me Generation¡¯s consumer behavior. Using survey and content analysis methods, I look into the causal relationship between the Westernized consumer behavior of Chinese youth (aged 18 to 30) and the increasing viewership of American popular television series. If you are interested, I am more than happy to send you a copy once it is finished.
2.      I have been assisting Dr. xxx with the researches on the latest development in social network media such as xxx. This task involves extensive reading of the existing literature on the subjects and it also allows me working with professors from both the colleges of computing and information sciences and liberal arts to track and analyze the formation of social network building. I feel that I have already benefited greatly from this assistantship, as it expanded my horizons on the latest technologies for developing social networking, and helped me understand how to fully leverage the technologies for branding and marketing reasons.
3.      My communication research paper on the recent changes of Chinese entertainment media is accepted by the Eastern Communication Association, I will be presenting the research paper at the annual conference of ECA in May, Pittsburgh.
4.      I am also working with my previous employer, xxx, analyzing the global news reports on the company¡¯s Olympic Marketing campaign.

I started working on the above works after I submitted my resume to the online application system. I believe what I am doing will help me to lay a better groundwork for my future study in xxx. Attending the IMC program in xxx, working and learning with the leading scholars in this field is my long-cherished dream. I sincerely hope that you will give my application a favorable consideration and grant me the opportunity to excel in my favorite area.
Attached is my resume for your consideration.
Thank you very much!


Best Regards,
xxx

美国东部时间清晨3点发的。
下午美国中部时间1点左右收到回信：

xxx,
Thanks for your note.
Our admissions department is in the midst of reviewing all applications, and I look forward to reviewing them, including yours, as we move toward announcing our decisions in February.
Your work looks impressive, and I look forward to a more thorough review.
Thanks for your interest.

xxx

看上去没有表态。
我下一步怎么回信呢？
还是再写一封热情洋溢的信给另外一个/两个教授？

苦恼中……
第二次申请了……
真的是梦想要去的学校啊。
大家帮帮忙啊……
小女在这里给大家鞠躬了……

DriverEntryUID: 143979

全是客套话。换个教授套套把。其实名气小的好套一点。名气大的估计收到过太多陶瓷信了。

michellemonUID: 2338447

这个……其他的也很牛……这怎么办呢？
找这个学科的创始人？
有些人不是PhD我想是不是不在评审会上呢？

protection2008UID: 2450712

教授说的套话，而且很短，说明这个基本没戏。套磁就要广泛撒网，10中1就了不起了。另外assistant professor比较好套。

lz的套磁信有很大的问题，建议重写。首先你开头这么多的I，教授就烦了。多一些长句。

michellemonUID: 2338447

谢谢建议。
我这怎么重新写呢？
想了很久的信……
英语不好，还望指点啊……

ailgUID: 2305166

Assistant Professor会有钱么？怕他们没钱，我都没敢联系他们。可是那些大牌的教授好像也都没有钱，怎么回事呢。郁闷。。。

原帖由 protection2008 于 2008-2-1 10:35 发表
教授说的套话，而且很短，说明这个基本没戏。套磁就要广泛撒网，10中1就了不起了。另外assistant professor比较好套。

lz的套磁信有很大的问题，建议重写。首先你开头这么多的I，教授就烦了。多一些长句。

DriverEntryUID: 143979

Assistant Professor会有钱么？
会的。

shineminemUID: 2144849

原帖由 &lt;i&gt;protection2008&lt;/i&gt; 于 2008-2-1 10:35 发表&lt;br /&gt;<br />
教授说的套话，而且很短，说明这个基本没戏。套磁就要广泛撒网，10中1就了不起了。另外assistant professor比较好套。&lt;br /&gt;<br />
&lt;br /&gt;<br />
lz的套磁信有很大的问题，建议重写。首先你开头这么多的I，教授就烦了。多一些长句。

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仔细一看真的耶, 基本上每一句话都是I当主语.

ailgUID: 2305166

呵呵，谢谢司机啊！觉得司机很有学问啊，而且人也比较耐斯啊，赞！:loveliness:

原帖由 DriverEntry 于 2008-2-2 07:04 发表
Assistant Professor会有钱么？
会的。