剑6作文求拍

SHENSHI316UID: 2464966

剑6TEST1 TASK 2

Today ,the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold .
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nothing receive more praise and disuse than power of advertising , especially in when sum of

youths are always impulsed to buy something due to advertisement regardless of quality of

goods ,so those who pay much attention to the market give the argument that we should focus on

the development of advertisement instead of that of products . In my opinion , nothing is further

from the truth than this point .

Indeed , goods are likely to be sold at once because of charming advertisement ,however one day

consumers will throw it away as if that machines even can’t work . Suppose the razor electrocute

the owner , or the dialysis machine fail to make it in the university courses , I guess they won’t

bring them home once more whatever how glorious the advertisement seems to be .

On the contrary , few people possess the goods without powerful advertising ,but the customers

will introduce it to their relatives and friends as long as the goods deserve owning .

Simply put ,products agency should spare no effort to improve the quality ,at the same

time advertisement need care ,because both are indispensable on the sales in the updating society .

这是我先前贴的两篇文章
我希望虽然我的作文写得还是不怎么好，但是至少一直是进步的
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-856924-1-1.html
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-863744-1-1.html

耽误大家时间了，谢谢！！！！
希望不吝赐教！

SHENSHI316UID: 2464966

哦。。。。俺还知道俺这篇文章俺字数不够。。。。
俺默默地在墙角划圈圈

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建议楼主自己先做修改，把缺少的部分继续补上~~~

自己首先要先对自己负责哦:)

SHENSHI316UID: 2464966

谢谢
俺先做下修改
然后打上WORD一算。。。才发现字数少了
俺改进