OG上的一些语法题...望牛人指点~~

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这是我做OG所有语法题总结出的问题，黑色字体是自己的答案，红色字体是标准答案，望高手帮忙分析下各题为什么错~~多谢。。。。
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1 Naomi and Charles will represent Ammonton High in the debating contest, their work in this having been excellent this year.
   A.contest; they have done excellent work this year in this
   B.contest, for their work as public speakers has been excellent this year

. X# s( Z7 p. ^* u( w4 v3 G9 j1 s3 B2. Being as she is a gifted storyteller, Linda Goss is an expert at describing people and places.
* g+ [( `* o6 ]% n( I: y/ v   A.Telling stories giftedly
2 ^- m* a, b3 {   B.A gifted storyteller

3.The new system, which uses remote cameras in the catching of speeding motorists, may undermine the police department's authority. No error
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3 S% n" s' \. S- R) u4.Although the politician was initially very sensitive to be criticized by the press, he quickly became more confidenct about responding to reporters' sometimes pointed questions. No error

5.In the opinion of the lecturer, a backgroud in the history of the Middle Ages is not a condition necessary in the enjoyment of medieval literature. No error
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. a  p# j9 S# u1 J6.Driving less frequently is one way to save energy; to turn off all appliances when they are not being used is another. No error
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1 g; L% u  k- }, m; x" Q7.Available through the school's guidance office is a job directory and a list of job referral centers that provide information for students in need of employment. No error
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: }9 \# R" h0 W8.The city of Houston, Texas, is about sixty miles inland, while being the third largest foreign-trade port in the United States.
* C5 L9 S. Q, R- T, f- Z   A.whose location is about sixty miles inland, makes it
- [4 R) J; A6 n   B.Although about sixty miles inland, is

- `5 y4 k* i0 r5 k( c9.In 1850 Jim Backwourth, a Black American explorer, discovered in the mountains of the Sierra Nevada a pass soon becoming an important gateway to California gold-rush country. No error

5 W7 g5 O: q6 D2 m10.Giraffes born with very long necks were able to stay alive when food was scarce and were therefore able to pass this desirable trait on to their offspring
2 H" v3 U7 p4 Z; o9 N9 L% s' G    A.so that their offspring could have this desirable trait passed to them
. [5 }: y. F( U# n# t. z    B.原句

; `4 `/ w+ W- @. {, }11.Unfortunately, the opening of the new library complex, previously scheduled for next September, would be delayed for several months because of construction difficulties. No error
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12.Many changes occured while she was president of the college, and they increased its educational quality as well as effectiveness.
    A.原句
    B.college; these changes increased both the educational quality and effectiveness of the college

13.High school graduates usually do not end up earning as much income as college graduates do, this being why so many high school students go on to pursue college degree.
    A.do, explaining why so many high school students
    B.do; this fact explains why so many high school students

5 X9 F' Y4 Q( h- a6 y; E, W7 h14.The programmers always talked of having too much to do, but in truth they had a lesser amount of work to do than their colleagues.
( g3 a/ A& ^* Y9 u     A.their work was the least among
    B.they had less work to do than
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& n( Q% T0 Y6 i" b+ H. @6 k1 u; ]& B15. In a world that the rate of technological and social change accelerates frighteningly, change itself often seems to be the only constant. No error(这题不知选项哪错）
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& X: f, `3 t$ n4 }4 p16. No biographer can attests to absolute accuracy in documenting the activities of his or her subject, this biographer of Cesar Chavez is no exception.
) w' }6 J0 ]" x& |2 v4 Q) n+ }     A.subject; this biography of Cesar Chavez is no exception
# D  }& d8 d1 U5 _* {# |     B.subject, and this biographer of Cesar Chavez is no exception

l_dongliUID: 2488893

同学。。。好认真。。。很欣赏。。。继续努力。。。

/ y" d' \' T) S  q# M1.       A和原句的in this肯定不对，SAT中this不能单独存在，记住见到this单独存在一定错呃。B对的，for后面表示原因是一个完整句子，很对嘛！
2.       原句being错（自杀词），A的telling现在分词表伴随应该是在相同时间发生的事情（进行时），后面句子是一个算是客观事实吧，比较陈述的反正是，所以不符。B是Linda的同位语，很简洁，SAT中同位语优先原则知道吧！（要对其敏感一些哦）
3.       这里表示目的的，所以要用不定式，不仅准确而且简洁。改成to catch。SAT中to do很常见，因为简洁原则。
4.       这里to是介词，后面要加doing，改成being。这个需要积累，有些adj后面的to不是不定式，要注意啊！
$ I+ Q  ?% g/ i6 N8 |# N9 e0 ]5.       这是介词搭配呃：necessary+for sth…   condition+to sth…
) u' q  P2 u+ U3 X* l4 l  Y( F6.       分号相当于and，所以前后句子并列平行。Is one和is another很明显看出平行啊，那看两句主语，前面是driving，后面就得turning off啦！
7.       后面是sth and sth很明显是复数嘛，谓语动词咋能是is嘞？要改are呃。这是个倒装，形容语提前了，但是动词形式还是要看主语的嘛！
8.       原句being自杀，A的whose形容人而前面是city，不对。B中although表示转折，算是一个插入语吧，不影响大局。后面动词要单数因为city是主语。
; R" P6 O) u# P& p, H# U9.       这个好熟悉呀！我当年最晕的题（其实就是今年），走街串巷似乎问遍全球的…呵呵…几种解释：becoming放soon后面修饰soon了不对，应该修饰path，所以要把soon去掉；然后就是时态，明显前后不一，这里现在分词表示伴随结果必须和原句时态相符。
6 b6 J, W7 W/ f: Y! X10.   原句没错而且平行原则对仗工整的很啊！那个A似乎比较罗嗦，而且听不懂他在说啥，有歧异，还有就是不在不得已的情况下不要随便换主语，还有不要轻易用被动。
11.   时态问题。前面有next Sep了，后面就应是will。这个would没有时态暗示时候不能轻易动用呃。
+ {+ y  j% t$ W8 A9 N12.   这是代词指代不明确。句子有college还有president，这个its不好定位了。They和its在一个句子里出现很容易模糊指代。答案把主语补充上，和原句构成平行结构很工整嘛，而且比较选项也能看出答案很简洁呃。
1 Q7 z9 i# u- d' |13.   现在分词可以伴随表示伴随方式或结果，这个是原因，表示解释的，不能直接explaining。还有就是这个doing指代的也比较模糊，正确答案把主语补充上了，很对哇！
14.   原句lesser不是比较级而是形容词，后面有than所以错了。A又是物做主语吧，不要呃，那个least还改变句意了…B相当简洁相当准确尤其是那个to do…
4 a7 v0 ~7 o$ D+ e- G* q15.   in a world that后面是一个完整句子吧，所以that就不对了呃，不能做状语。所以要改成where，而且前面是world也表示地点，不会用that的。这个要注意！最好背住！
  y, G# e1 M; V" L$ j% c5 M8 I% M# a16.   原句是run-on句型错了。你那A是马虎了吧，明明是人，是biographer，你咋给弄成biography了呢？除此之外，这个分号和and都是对的，没有区别。B很好嘛。这个马虎要不得啊，几千块跑香港还是国外去，一定得控制…呵呵…

% o2 F' X; l$ s呼呼呼。。。两个小时呃。。。累了。。。
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PS：肯付出努力的孩子早晚有一天会成功！

l_dongliUID: 2488893

还有一件事情。。。不好意思呵~
/ `: W  b6 U5 y& ^: W8 z我不是牛人。。。有点误闯了。。。
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不过我相信  不久后的某天  我一定会成为牛人。。。
7 [2 i+ L; E* _& ^3 ^, y' N' h华尔街的牛人。。。呵呵~~~:loveliness:
AZA AZA FIGHTING！