issue130【文以载道小组】第1次作业2008.11.11---woshinidaye2008

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The speaker believes that society's destiny depends on how children are socialized, and we have not yet learned how to raise children who know how to create a better society. In contrast, my position concerning the issue is that adults in present should not get the same anxiety like their parents before.

First of all, so-called socialization is used by sociologists, social psychologists and educationalists to refer to the process of learning one's culture and how to live within it. Comparing with the past, we can easily see many negative factors which are embodyed by today's children, such as the absence of sympathy ,the shortage of ability to quickly adapt to the enviroment and the lacking sense of competition and cooperation. It seems that we have no learned how to better socialize our children from predecessors.

However, all above these phenomena depend on the fact that people in modern society will always focus on the self-worth and unique personality. This value orientation is entirely due to the high-speed economic development, especially the new economy based on the Internet and the high technology field.

In the Internet Age, people experience more unprecedented life style which they had never gone through before. "NO freedom of speech" as a label is an anachronism in this era of Internet. Those who have the independence of spirit to explore new roles, ideas and strategies would present themselves sufficiently. Then, a sort of phenomenon called “stand alone complex” has come into being. It does not mean that one should always keep lonely to avoid working with others. On the contrary, a man of insight must figure out his priviledge and responsibility before he make a decision to take a teamwork. If there will no or less benefit in cooperation, why individual must join a group to work together? Does this signify that we fail to better socialize our children?

We all know that social being determines consciousness. Therefore, we should consider that the behavior characteristics of children today may also let them to adapt to the future. Moreover, those nagative judgment of nowadays kids are likely to put forward for the simple reason that  adults also use old rules to measure young people while taking their thoughts off the claims of the immediate present.

On the other hand, if we define a “better” society as one characterized by greater tolerance of viewpoints and people who are different from ourselves, greater respect for individual rights, and greater cooperation across cultural and national boundaries, then the young people of the most recent half century are creating a better society. At the same time, we also realize that a global village is coming to us. And there is ample evidence of increasing international cooperation. APEC urged many countries to join it in offering more trade opportunities while gearing its multi-faceted cooperation more to the business communities and the general public; peace-keeping missions of United Nations are now largely multinational efforts; and some international NGO such as greenpeace groups also makes a bigger contribution to the global environmental protection. In short, we have every reason to trust our children and to cherish the hope that tomorrow will be better.

In sum, tomorrow world will not be desined by nowadays people, it may always be altered by the later generation. It is unnecessary for adults to concern too much about how children are socialized.

[ 本帖最后由 woshinidaye2008 于 2008-11-12 01:18 编辑 ]

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第一篇习作，写作过程中借助了“有道桌面词典”的例句功能，文章中间有一小段抄了《作文大讲堂》上的两句话，后面我会尝试改写的。大体框架参考了5.5 issue的思路，恳请大家多指正

[ 本帖最后由 woshinidaye2008 于 2008-11-11 01:44 编辑 ]

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The speaker believes that society's destiny depends on how children are socialized, and we have not yet learned how to raise children who know how to create a better society. In contrast, my position concerning the issue is that adults in present should not get the same anxiety like their parents before.
(观点:不同意题目的两个观点)
First of all, so-called socialization is used by sociologists, social psychologists and educationalists to refer to the process of learning one's culture and how to live within it. Comparing with the past, we can easily see many negative factors which are embodyed (embodied)by today's children, such as the absence of sympathy , the shortage of ability to quickly adapt to the environment and the lacking sense of competition and cooperation. It seems that we have not learnedhow to better socialize our children from predecessors (感觉这样说有点怪，还是用被动语态好点吧).
(这段挺多拼写错误和语法错误。让一步，现在的年轻一代有很多缺点，看起来是由于没有很好的社会化)However, all above these phenomena depend on the fact that people in modern society will always focus on the self-worth and unique personality (独立的人格？？那应该是优点啊). This value orientation is entirely due to the high-speed economic development, especially the new economy based on the Internet and the high technology field. In the Internet Age, people experience more unprecedented life style which they had never gone through before. "NO freedom of speech" as a label is an anachronism in this era of Internet. Those who have the independence of spirit to explore new roles, ideas and strategies would present themselves sufficiently. Then, a sort of phenomenon called “stand alone complex” has come into being. It does not mean that one should always keep lonely to avoid working with others. On the contrary, a man of insight must figure out his privilege and responsibility before he makes a decision to take teamwork. If there will no or less (more or less???) benefit in cooperation, why individual must join a group to work together? Does this signify that we fail to better socialize our children?
(感觉这段很乱，应该是想讲internet的应用使大家可以独立工作，因而减少了合作，所以影响了正常的社会化的过程吧。前面说internet让大家表达个性，于是大家更独立，但是中间红色的这句又讲的是合作是必要的，后面又说没必要合作)We all know that social being determines consciousness. Therefore, we should consider that the behavior characteristics of children today may also let them to adapt to the future. Moreover, those negative judgment of nowadays kids are likely to put forward for the simple reason that  adults also use old rules to measure young people while taking their thoughts off the claims of the immediate present.
(社会化的标准也会随时代变化，我们不应该用旧有的标准来要求小孩)On the other hand, if we define a “better” society as one characterized by greater tolerance of viewpoints and people who are different from ourselves, greater respect for individual rights, and greater cooperation across cultural and national boundaries, then the young people of the most recent half century are creating a better society. At the same time, we also realize that a global village is coming to us. And there is ample evidence of increasing international cooperation. APEC urged many countries to join it in offering more trade opportunities while gearing its multi-faceted cooperation more to the business communities and the general public; peace-keeping missions of United Nations are now largely multinational efforts; and some international NGO such as greenpeace groups also makes a bigger contribution to the global environmental protection. In short, we have every reason to trust our children and to cherish the hope that tomorrow will be better.(小孩们实际上是让世界变得更好了，并没有讨论我们教育的作用，没有针对题目的第二个观点进行讨论。)
In sum, tomorrow world will not be desined by nowadays people, it may always be altered by the later generation. It is unnecessary for adults to concern too much about how children are socialized.