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gringoireUID: 2221541

Modern building has changing the appearance of cities and towns, some people argue we should build all buildings in traditional styles to protect the cultural identity, to what extent do you agree or disagree

Whether we should protect old buildings in terms of preserving the cultural of a city has long been a controversial issue. Some people even go further to claim that we should build all buildings in traditional styles to serve the purpose. As far as I am concerned, this extreme opinion is a kind of
idealistic, and thus, remains impracticable by reasons below.

The first reason is that buildings with traditional structures may no longer fit today's city landscapes. Cities today have a much larger populations than before. In addition, the transport systems today have also been different from that in the old days. Let alone the modern water and gas supply system. The requirement to hold more people in limited space and the widely-application of these modern systems may be incompatible with buildings designed in a traditional styles. Therefore, I don't think it is a good practice for us to stick to old style buildings.

Further more, the technological aspect is another concern. The building materials using in old days have been replaced by some more "modern materials" with higher quality. For example, woods is the primary material for old buildings but today, they are largely instituted by concrete .Since those popular materials in old building have been gradually eliminating from modern architecture, either due to a limited resource or poorer quality, I don't think it's pragmatic for us to continuously building old style buildings.

Although protecting our cultural is a crucial concern in modern society, I don't think it is either appropriate nor realistic to achieve this goal by adhering to building all buildings in traditional styles. Instead, we can preserve the existing old buildings and build modern buildings in a separate area. By that way, we can both meet the needs of people living in the modern city and protect the cultural identity.

饱饭仔UID: 2505959

楼主文笔不错,文章很流畅哈
有点点意见
第一个,就是第三段,开头两句写得有点悬,你不如直接写现代建筑质量更好,更耐用之类的,线性思维
第二个,既然你文笔没问题,思路上怎么不来个完善呢?加一个让步,本身雅思考题都是有争议的,不存在绝对答案,只有倾向性,让步就让你考官觉得你的思考更全面
以上,个人意见