【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组第2次作业】BY ONE0509

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When it comes to choosing a friend, people always have various standards, such as humor, wisdom, zeal and so on. And abundant of people hold the opinion that a friend of humor is better than a friend of wisdom, for a humorous friend can bring them with laughs and delighted mood all the time, which is such a relief in the society of high pressure. However, I prefer a wise friend to a humorous one, because I believe people of wisdom can give me more than just laughs and delighted mood.

Undoubtedly, a friend of wisdom is always full of social experience, so he/she is the friends in need. When we get in a trouble and at a loss of what to do, we usually turn to a wise friend who may have much more ideas to tackle the problem in a short time. No one will deny that the ability of solving out urgent matters is more precious than a funny story.

What is more, we can gain some knowledge from the behavior of a wise friend and learn to solve problems by ourselves. Not only knowledge does a wise friend give us, but also eternal happiness. Maybe he/she can not tell funny stories or give humorous speech, but he/she does know how to keep you enjoying life. When you are in blue, he/she is the best audience, encouraging you to conquer the difficulties in a smart way. When you succeed, he/she will share happiness with you and tell you it is still a long way to go. All the things he/she does instruct us the attitude to life and the wisdom to eternal happiness. Compared with a delighted mood based on a funny speech, i choose the happiness lasting forever.

From what have been discussed above, we finally draw the conclusion that a wise friend plays a more indispensable role than a humor friend. Although we do need some entertaining things to make us laugh, we can enjoy life without a smart and experienced teacher instill us the skill of dealing with problems and the attitude towards fluctuation in life.

我总觉得我理由说的很牵强，但是这次好歹字数是上300了……
狠狠拍吧

天泽UID: 2340391

When it comes to choosing a friend, people always have various standards, such as humor, wisdom, zeal and so on. And abundant of people hold the opinion that a friend of humor is better than a friend of wisdom, for a humorous friend can bring them (with)删掉 laughs and delighted mood all the time, which is such a relief in the society of high pressure. (However)Having said that, I prefer a wise friend to a humorous one, because I believe people of wisdom can give me more than just laughs and delighted mood.

Undoubtedly, a friend of wisdom is always full of social experience, so he/she is the (friends)friend in need. When we get in (a)删掉 trouble and at a loss of what to do, we usually turn to a wise friend who may have much more ideas to tackle the problem in a short time. No one will deny that the ability of solving (out)删掉 urgent matters is more precious than a funny story.

What is more, we can gain some knowledge from the behavior of a wise friend and learn to solve problems by ourselves. Not only knowledge does a wise friend give us, but also eternal happiness. Maybe he/she can not tell funny stories or give humorous speech, but he/she does know how to keep you enjoying life. When you are in blue, he/she is the best audience, encouraging you to conquer the difficulties in a smart way. When you succeed, he/she will share happiness with you and tell you it is still a long way to go. All the things he/she does instruct us the cheerful attitude to life and the wisdom to eternal happiness. Compared with a delighted mood based on a funny speech, i choose the happiness lasting forever.

From what have been discussed above, we finally draw the conclusion that a wise friend plays a more indispensable role than a (humor)humorous friend. Although we do need (some entertaining things)something entertaining to make us laugh, we (can)can’t enjoy life without a smart and experienced teacher (instill)instilling us the skill of dealing with problems and the attitude towards fluctuation in life.

天泽UID: 2340391

我觉得关键是举例子，比如第二段说一个智慧的朋友有社会经验可以帮助我们，就可以举一个自己的朋友的例子，其实也不一定用编了，肯定会有这样的例子的。比如自己参加学生干部竞选前朋友给支的招重点体现他的智慧和结果，你成功当选了之类的。这个例子根据各人情况，考试的时候实在是想不起来就编，也可以事先都给编好。相对于干巴巴的道理来说这些生动的例子会给文章增色不少，也能增加字数。
本文观点明确思路清晰，其实还不错啦~呵呵~+U

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谢谢童鞋们的努力批改

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谢谢童鞋们的努力批改