TOEFL4-6 Dark-Tournament小组第12次作业by ghr0111

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Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Most of the times that our students pay on study is used to finish the daily homework assigned by our teacher, and most of the conflictions between teachers and students are whether so much daily homework is useful. As a students, I think the homework should be alloted diversity for different students in various forms.

The students can be classified according to character as outgoing, shy, curious, industrious, lazy, etc. You can not use only one pattern to instruct all of the students. Like a pupil really wants to have a good sroce, but has little control on playing games. Then he needs a strict teacher to direct him what he should do and assign the daily work he must done. On the contrary, if a student who exactly know what he want and try hard for the porpuse, could get the konwledge beyond the subjects. The last thing the teacher should do is to restain his talent by endless homework. For these students, the only thing a teacher should do is tell them the direction and give your sincere encourage.

Various forms of homework could get absolutely distinct effect. Most of teacher think homework is just assigned to students like reading some books seriously, reciting  one paragraphy fluently, writing a paper deep-sightedly. But haven't they think game sometime is also necessary for students as a homework. Nowadays, the burden for students is high enough, the knowledge they should know is beyond their ability yet. So can you image one scene that your teacher tell you:" You are too tired to go on study, so the homework today for you is just nothing." Or"You need to find a friend and talk to him/her as today's homework".I think maybe this form of homework is more effective and useful.

Lastly, learning is largely something depending on students themselves. So a good teacher must konw what the students really want and the way students can easy to understand but not the form of homework is and the quantity it has been assigned.

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Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.  S& Z' K/ e' O8 d' X! i/ t

Most of the times(删) that our students pay on（这个短语再斟酌一下） study is used to finish（used to do过去常常做某事/be used to doing习惯于） the daily homework assigned by our teacher（s）, and most of the conflictions between teachers and students are whether so much daily homework is useful. As a students, I think the homework should be alloted diversity for different students in various forms.

The students can be classified according to character(s) as outgoing, shy, curious, industrious, lazy, etc. You can not use only one pattern to instruct all of (删)the students. Like a pupil really wants to have a good sroce, but has little control on playing games. Then he needs a strict teacher to direct him what he should do and assign the daily work he must done. On the contrary, if a student who exactly know what he want and try hard for the porpuse, could get the konwledge beyond the subjects. The last thing（第一二件事是什么？？虽然能理解是前面交待的东西，但还是要论证清楚一点） the teacher should do is to restain his talent by endless homework.（这句没明白想表达什么） For these students, the only thing a teacher should do is （to）tell them the direction and give your(指代不清) sincere encourage.% M+ a) n% L+ ?, e' e, L" R

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Lastly, learning is largely something depending on students themselves. So a good teacher must konw what the students really want and the way students can easy to understand but not the form of homework is and the quantity it has been assigned.(

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