TOEFL4-6 Dark-Tournament小组小笨zt第12次作业

小笨ztUID: 2614191

Nowadays there is a rising debate about whether the teachers should assign daily homework to their students every day .More and more students show that they have no enthusiasm in doing the common homeworks prepared by their teacher.However ,deep in my thought ,I think that assigning and taking daily homework is indispensable to our students,especially those who are still studying such subjects like Mathematics or Physics which are kinds of
courses need functioning pratically.Without more experiments,we are not able to apply them accurately and well enough in reality life.Yet ,if the teachers authorized their students to finish
the homework in
diversity and
attractive ways ,it would benefit both the educators and the students now.

Undoubtedly,a guy when he is a pupil at the elementary
school should be cultivated to obtain his own qualities of dealing with different kinds of
matters,overcomig the hardship he encounts in dailylife,being full of confidence and so on.However ,all of these caliber should be shaped through not only to study the theory just like the mathematics fomulas or the physics exponents,or even a full page of literature's developing history but to do more practical exercises.And by a well combination of the theory basement
and everyday's practical experiences he may get the target he is looking forward to,and hand in a well-done paper to his parents who almost put all the hope on their child and insist that he should be assigned daily tasks
after school.

To the students ,in my opinion,a lifelong studying is a hard task for them,to conduct their studying process in an enjoyable and reasonable circumstances to do the series of  taking their classes,doing their homework,carrying out their experiments is the best way to enhance their skills from every aspects .

mimicaUID: 2457275

Nowadays there is a rising debate about whether the teachers should assign daily homework to their students every day .More and more students show that they have no enthusiasm in doing the common homeworks prepared by their teacher.However ,deep in my thought ,I think that assigning and taking daily homework is indispensable to our students,(to both teachers and students)especially those who are still studying such subjects like Mathematics or Physics which are kinds of A courses need functioning pratically.Without more experiments,we are not able to apply them accurately and well enough in reality life.Yet ,if the teachers authorized their students to finish( F5 n1 }& U9 D; Cthe homework in
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To the students ,in my opinion,a lifelong studying is a hard task for them,to conduct their studying process in an enjoyable and reasonable circumstances to do the series of  taking their classes,doing their homework,carrying out their experiments is the best way to enhance their skills from every aspects .

ilovelxlxUID: 2613222

Nowadays there is a rising debate about whether the teachers should assign daily homework to their students every day .More and more students show that they have no enthusiasm in doing the common homeworks(homework) prepared by their teacher. However ,deep in my thought ,I think that assigning and taking daily homework is indispensable to our students, especially those who are still studying such subjects like Mathematics or Physics(学科是不是不用大写啊) which are kinds of courses need functioning pratically(practically). Without more experiments, we are not able to apply them accurately and well enough in reality life. Yet ,if the teachers authorized their students to finish the homework in diversity and attractive ways ,it would benefit both the educators and the students now.

Undoubtedly, a guy (建议用PERSON,GUY是不是太口语化了)when he(OR SHE) is a pupil at the elementary school should be cultivated to obtain his own qualities of dealing with different kinds of mmatters(matters),overcomig(overcoming) the hardship he encounts(?) in daily life ,being full of confidence and so on. However ,all of these caliber should be shaped through not only to study the theory just like the mathematics formulas(formulas) or the physics exponents, or even a full page of literature's developing history but to do more practical exercises. And by a well combination of the theory basement and everyday's(every day’s) practical experiences he may get the target he is looking forward to, and hand in a well-done paper to his parents who almost put all the hope on their child and insist that he should be assigned daily tasks after school.

To the students ,in my opinion, a lifelong studying is a hard task for them, to conduct their studying process in an enjoyable and reasonable circumstances to do the series of  taking their classes, doing their homework, carrying out their experiments is the best way to enhance their skills from every aspects .

hjhj1110UID: 2553667

Nowadays there is a rising debate about whether the teachers should assign daily homework to their students every day .（个人认为daily和every day重复了啊）More and more students show that they have no enthusiasm in doing the（不用the） common homeworks（homework是不可数吧？偶也不确定..） prepared(这里用prepare有点不准确) by their teachers.However ,deep in my thought ,I think that assigning and taking daily homework is indispensable to our students,especially those who are still（这个still有点多余的感觉） studying such subjects like Mathematics or Physics which are kinds of courses need functioning pratically（是不是写错了？这样写从句里就没宾语了）.Without more experiments,we are not able to apply them （指谁啊？）accurately and well enough in reality life.Yet ,if the teachers authorized their students to finish the homework in3      Wdiversity and attractive ways ,it would benefit both the educators and the students now.

Undoubtedly,a guy when he is a pupil at the elementary6 _4 a' school should be cultivated to obtain his own qualities of dealing with different kinds of/ w2 [$ U/ n) bmatters,overcomig the hardship he encounts in dailylife,being full of confidence and so on.However ,all of these caliber（不认识） should be shaped through not only to study（studying） the theory just like the mathematics fomulas or the physics exponents,（这句没看懂）or even a full page of literature's developing history but to do(doing) more practical exercises.And by a well combination of the theory basement) J. Y! %and everyday's practical experiences he may get the target he is looking forward to,and hand in a well-done paper to his parents who almost put all the hope on their child and insist that he(有种族歧视的嫌疑哦，IBT很重视这个，用he/she比较好) should be assigned daily tasks after school.

To the students ,in my opinion,a lifelong studying is a hard task for them,to conduct their studying process in an enjoyable and reasonable circumstances to do the series of  taking their classes,doing their homework,carrying out their experiments is the best way to enhance their skills from every aspects .

ilovelxlxUID: 2613222

caliber是直径还是什么啊

qiangweiciUID: 2478469

Nowadays there is a rising debate about whether the teachers should assign daily homework to their students every day .More and more students show(complain) that they have no enthusiasm in doing the common homeworks prepared(assigned) by their teacher.However ,deep in my thought ,I think that assigning and taking(doing) daily homework is indispensable to our students,especially those who are still studying such subjects like Mathematics or Physics which are kinds of courses need functioning pratically（不是很懂这个表达）. Without more experiments, we are not able to apply them accurately(一般用来形容具体的事物 如计算什么的) and well enough in reality life.(regular practice, without which, we are not able to apply them properly and well enough in reality) Yet ,if the teachers authorized their students to finish the homework in diversity and attractive ways ,it would benefit both the educators and the students now.（LZ 你在Thesis的处理上出现了蛮大的问题~~首先，论点不够简洁 细节太多~~其次，thesis一定是放在最后一句的，可是lz的最后一句却变成了一个让步信息的细节处理~~建议lz可以分析一下范文的第一段和最后一句话的处理方式）

Undoubtedly,a guy when he is a pupil at the elementary school should be cultivated to obtain his own qualities of dealing with different kinds of matters,overcomig the hardship he encounts in daily life, being full of confidence and so on. However ,all of these caliber should be shaped through not only to study（studying） the theory just like the mathematics fomulas or the physics exponents,or even a full page of literature's developing history but to do(doing) more practical exercises.And by a well combination of the theory basement and everyday's(去掉) practical experiences he may get the target he is looking forward to,and hand in a well-done paper to his parents who almost put all the hope on their child and insist that he should be assigned daily tasks after school（感觉怪怪的 虽然知道LZ要表达什么 可是很明显的有种chienglish的味道，建议把and后的内容删掉，让细节完整一点~~如果细节过杂 反而让文章思路太散）.

To the students ,in my opinion,a lifelong studying（study） is a hard task for them,to conduct their studying(study) process in an enjoyable and reasonable circumstances to do the series of  taking their classes,doing their homework,carrying out their experiments is the best way to enhance their skills from every aspects(怪怪的 换成这样吧 for them. Conducting theit study process in an enjoyable circunstances and balancing the theory basement with practical experience is the best way to enhance their skills of every and each aspect.)

LZ 中间展开部分过短哦 一般两点或者三点理由会比较合适 我不晓得最后一段lz是当总结段处理还是展开段落的第二点理由 如果是后者的话 那我建议lz以后还是要写summary段会比较保险 这样框架更加完整~~另外看的出来lz的英语是有一定底子的 可是有些表达还是要好好斟酌 也可能是我的水平有限吧 总觉得有些长句没法理解恰当意思 或者理解起来完全是中文思维的味道~~就提这些意见了 修改有不周到的地方 虚心接受批评哦 呵呵 一起加油！

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5# ilovelxlx

不好意思 ，这两天有事， 都没时间过来看看，caliber 是品质的意思，呵呵

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6# qiangweici


非常感谢你的指正，确实我已经一两年没有学英语了，这是第一次写toefl的作文，文章基本上是挤出来的，词汇也跟不上了，呵呵，不过我会努力的，希望以后有机会还能请你帮我修改作文！