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今天开始彻底进入专业>G的进程了。。。~。。。不过当我看了电磁场之后。。。sigh。。。我真是怀念我的AW。。。
因为看了电磁场。。。所以几乎什么都没干今天。。。
不过还是看了imong的追星特辑。。。然后我再次崩溃。。。怎么最近老是崩溃。。。他老人家太强。。。我每看一个特辑。。。就可以推翻一堆我以前辛辛苦苦写的outline。。。我的issueTT。。。不过。。。没关系。。。对于outline的看法我也决定按草木的来。。。前五十必须详细。。。其他的其实基本都可以覆盖到。。。有时间就多写~。。。破题思路就按imong的来。。。~
对于more型的。。。事实型的。。。的确误区很大。。。而且还吸收了一招。。。就是可以分领域来分析。。。以不变应万变~
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呵呵。。。以为星期四是自己的生日。。。其实今天才是。。。不过因为知道晚上才被寝室同学提醒。。TT...于是就决定一玩到底。。。生日开始好好认真复习专业然后考G。。。一切加油。。~。。。恩。。。看了情书。。。哇塞。。。超级感动。。。无敌的感动。。。特别是两位女生的“你好吗?我很好~”。。。泪流满面。。。觉得里面包含了太多的情感了。。。没有办法表达。。。只能一点一点地用心体会到她们的心酸和幸福。。。以及告别过去的回忆。。。坚强地走向未来的决定。。。恩。。。所以。。。从现在开始。。。我想对过去的自己说。。。谢谢你。。。无论过去的自己多么脆弱。。。多么倔强。。。多么隐忍。。。但是。。。一直很喜欢过去的自己。。。所以。。。从现在开始。。。要做更真实的自己。。。更加的坚强。。。更加的潇洒。。。更加的成为一个自豪骄傲的自己。。。更加的可以一点一点达到自己梦想中的世界。。。我知道前途一定会有比黎明更加艰难的黑暗。。。不过我知道。。。再一点点。。。只要再多一点点自己的坚持和努力。。。那么。。。我就可以看见。。。樱花开了。。。》《。。。铺天盖地的樱花。。。
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0910G SPECTACULAR 备考日记 by 银落saya  --樱花开了

…… 樱花开了,我希望我的樱花可以开得绚烂而纯粹。
银落 发表于 2009-5-31 10:23


喜欢这一句。
“绚烂而纯粹”的樱花,迷人,肆意。
꾹 열힘이해!
一万年太久,只争朝夕!

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呵呵。。。谢谢楼上。。。

然后。。。继续今天。。。
恩。。。改了篇文章。。。发现改文章其实是极痛苦的事。。。特别是自己的文章。。。其难度不亚于写篇issue。。。
下午和学长谈了下方向。。。很透彻。。。比以前和学长谈的时候更加透彻了。。。不仅因为自己在自己的学习过程中发现了以后专业的方向。。。并且。。。还从他这里更加地确信了这种目标。。。不过与出国无关。。。只是专业方向而已。。。等以后能出去深造了。。。就更好了。。。~

最后再感叹一句,imong真的是厉害。。。~。。。几天前看的精华。。。对于破题很受用~
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米饭的祝福收到。。。很感动撒。。~

tsubasa开始复活了。。不对。。应该说是崭新开始了。。很好。。上正轨。。于是今天干了issue和argument两篇文章。。。其余还是在看电磁场。。。然后寻找了一些文章的例子。。。现在。。。不看英语感觉真的有点慌。。。希望快点结束期末可以恢复英语。。~。。加油加油。。~
明天再写篇argument。。。至于issue157.。关于主观和客观的真的是难写。。。没有勇气提笔。。。
然后。。。希望以后可以越写越快。。不然每次都话几个小时来写。。。考试来不及了要。。TT.。。
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ok。。。今天一篇A。。很好。。一个小时内了。。就是发现自己话表达不清。。然后逻辑有点散落。。恩。。致命。。所以继续努力。。。继续查了一份资料。。。然后和糖糖以及zyp为小组以后的规划做了一次讨论。。铁血计划。。晚上意外流鼻血。。额。。天气太热。。万恶的黄梅天。。竟然那么闷额。。。ok。。。感觉自己似乎什么都没有做。。额。。
好贴下harvard的图书馆训言:
哈佛图书馆墙上的训言

  
训言1 此刻打盹,你将做梦;而此刻学习,你将圆梦
训言2 我荒废的今日,正是昨天殒身之人祈求的明日
训言3 觉得为时已晚的时候,恰恰是最早的时候
训言4 勿将今日之事拖到明日
训言5 学习时的痛苦是暂时的,未学到的痛苦是终生的
训言6 学习这件事,不是缺乏时间,而是缺乏努力
训言7 幸福或许不排名次,但成功必排名次
训言8 学习并不是人生的全部。但既然连人生的一部分??学习也无法征服,还能做什么呢?
训言9 请享受无法回避的痛苦
训言10 只有比别人更早、更勤奋地努力,才能尝到成功的滋味
训言11 谁也不能随随便便地成功,它来自彻底的自我管理和毅力
训言12 时间在流逝
训言13 现在流的口水,将成为明天的眼泪
训言14 狗一样地学,绅士一样地玩
训言15 今天不走,明天要跑
训言16 投资未来的人是忠于现实的人
训言17 受教育程度代表收入
训言18 一天过完,不会再来
训言19 即使现在,对手也在不停地翻动书页
训言20 没有艰辛,便无所获
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今天把哈佛的校训打印了出来。。。不过。。依然在图书馆倒头睡了两次。。并且醒来以后迷糊不清。。。额。。我不应该觉得困了啊。。TT.。。。以后要更严厉的监督。。。特别是看了米饭的最新日志。。。对于恒心的一篇文。。。很好。。。学习。。然后把恒心当成是自己的一种生活态度。。不管是否成功。。这必须是一种习惯和处事方式。。成为一种habit才行。。。~。。话说。。真的是每次都无法按时完成当天订的计划。。然后连理由都不找直接overlook掉。。然后。。into a vicious circle。。。深恶痛绝地必须改。。效率太低。。太想睡觉。。。两大极恶而万能的原因。==

改了同组的三篇文章。。感觉这孩子。。厉害。。。总之学习。。语言和思路都很简单。。。但给人清晰之美。。~。。然后很意外地收到了表扬。。。说我的argu写得好。。惊讶。。然后又回头看了那篇被表扬的奶酪篇。。。还是觉得不好。。语言一旦用英语表达就会collapse into a difficulty。。。哎。。无语。。

电磁场。。概率。。继续奋斗~。。顺便也要keep fit了。。似乎人一累就吃得特别多。。。恶。。争取回到以前瘦瘦的样子。。
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明天考英语。。。对于明天考试的作文基本已经抱着很高的期待了。。~。。G的熏陶啊。。现在很热爱写作文。。G的试题除外。。==...
今天一篇argu在45分钟内写完。。第一次限时。。。还不是限时30分钟。。不过算是很大的进步了。。不管逻辑多么混乱。。是否表达清晰。。。在我看来。。是进步了。。毕竟时间最高。。写得再好。。没写完不是白搭嘛。。以后在快的基础上求准~和好~。。
今天概率论。。基本把概率都过了,虽然还差那么一点点。。接下来攻击统计。。~很好。。
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今天的argu进入35分钟。。哎。。混乱啊思维。。看了以题目练思路都里不出来。。TT
怎么感觉argu越写越没感觉了。。??。。。不行。。明天去研究范文了要。。~
今天下午的英语我真是无语啊。。。收音机竟然坏了。。。额。。。然后听力做得一塌糊涂。。。果然长时间不听听力是不行的。。。哎。。等考过了G。。考T的时候在准备听力吧~。。。阅读能力也下降。。。无语。。看得极慢无比。。学校竟然出这种莫名的文章。。那么奇怪的逻辑问题。。。sigh。。。只有作文写起来比较爽。。虽然我知道我写得不怎么样。。。但是洋洋洒洒。。。还是写了大概两百字。。。

贴上economist debate的background。。虽然在组里的作业贴里也贴了。。。但毕竟是日志。。还是贴下
About this debateUnemployment, repossession and a falling stock market. There is nothing like a recession to keep people awake at night. Add economic anxiety to the normal stress of work and family, and you would think that the world must be full of insomniacs. Are we getting enough sleep, and how much sleep is enough? In these troubled times, should people be sleeping less, so they can accomplish more?

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Insomniac 失眠症患者

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Restless
Sep 18th 2008
From The Economist print edition

A strange case raises the question of what sleep is for


THE function of sleep, according to one school of thought, is to consolidate memory. Yet two Italians have no problems with their memory even though they never sleep. The woman and man, both in their 50s, are in the early stages of a neurodegenerative disease called multiple system atrophy. Their cases raise questions about the purpose of sleep.

Healthy people rotate between three states of vigilance: wakefulness, rapid eye-movement (REM) sleep and non-REM sleep. But all three are mixed together in the Italian patients. The pair were initially diagnosed by Roberto Vetrugno of the University of Bologna and his colleagues as suffering from REM behavioural disorder, in which the paralysis, or cataplexy, that normally prevents sleeping people from acting out their dreams is lost. This can cause people in REM sleep to twitch and groan, sometimes flailing about and injuring their bedmates. These patients, however, soon progressed from this state to an even odder one, according to a report in Sleep Medicine.

One of the principal ways to measure sleep is to monitor brainwave activity, which can be done by placing electrodes on the scalp in a technique known as electroencephalography (EEG). Non-REM sleep itself is divided into four stages defined purely by EEG patterns; the first two are collectively described as light sleep and the last two as deep or slow-wave sleep. When the Italian patients appeared to be asleep, their EEGs suggested that their brains were either simultaneously awake, in REM sleep and non-REM sleep, or switching rapidly between the three. Yet when subjected to a battery of neuropsychological tests, they showed no intellectual decline.

Mark Mahowald of the University of Minnesota Medical School, whose group first described REM behavioural disorder in 1986, thinks memory consolidation is still going on in the brains of the two Italian patients; hence their lack of cognitive impairment or dementia. What needs to be revised in light of their cases, he says, is the definition of sleep.
-----创新 质疑权威
Dr Mahowald suspects that sleep can occur in the absence of the markers that currently define it, which means those markers are insufficient. What’s more, the Italian cases lend support to an idea that has been gathering steam in recent years: that wakefulness and sleep are not mutually exclusive. In other words, the human brain can be awake and asleep at the same time.

That evidence takes the form of a growing list of conditions in which wakefulness, REM and non-REM sleep appear to be mixed. An example is narcolepsy, in which emotionally laden events trigger sudden cataplexy. When the dreaming element of REM intrudes into wakefulness, which can happen with sleep-deprivation, the result is wakeful dreaming or hallucinations. Since such dreams can be highly compelling, Dr Mahowald thinks they might account for some reports of alien abduction.

But there is another possible explanation of the Italian puzzle: that sleep is not necessary for memory after all. Jerry Siegel of the University of California, Los Angeles, has studied the sleep habits of many animals and thinks that could well be the explanation. All of which gives researchers something new to keep them awake at night.

Consolidate 强化
Atrophy 萎缩
Vigilance 失眠症
Behavioural 行为的
Parlaysis 麻痹 中风
Cataplexy 昏倒
Twitch 抽搐
Flail
Dementia 痴呆
Compelling 强迫的 激发兴趣的
Abduction 诱拐 大前提正确小前提有问题的三段论式
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明天考C。。。加油。。不多说什么了。。。今天issue130被批得很厉害。。。argu也是。。。竟然被人说回去重写。。。不过还是有点高兴的。。。毕竟总比不知道问题在哪里好》《
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今天c感觉考得不错。。。然后趁着一点点时间和母亲去对面交大吃了饭。。》《。。。好久没享受了。。~。。然后。。看了一下午的概率。。。晚上继续。。回寝室讨论积分问题。。。人的大脑有点呆滞了。。ORZ......好吧。。。。在G的网站上说与G无关的话。。。我不应该的。。。恩。。。今天第一天为了考试不看G了。。。有点不舍的。。。不过。。为了GPA。。我也只好这样了。。~
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看了一天的概率。。。然后人彻底有点晕了。。。哎。。。公式。。背了还不一定会用。。。TT
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恩。。基本复习好。。。接下来。。。加油考试啦。。》《。。。
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本来想考试的时候每天都来坚持更新的,果然考试这种事情是紧迫的,差一点我的电磁场就要出问题了,不过还好成绩出来了还好,现在就是希望概率论可以及格,当然分数越高越好,绩点越高越好啦,毕竟以后要靠奖学金的话GPA是一定要的,我的微机也一定要替我争口气啊。。》《
好吧,然后说说期末的英语,我实在就是不明白为什么只有78分,怎么可能呢,我又不是不会做,明明阅读翻译和写作我都明白的啊,sigh,竟然会有这种事,只能怪我平时不去上课,把老师给惹怒了估计,但是,。。。哎。。真的好低。。伤心了。。C也是。。只有86分。。我明明都给编出来了啊。。而且也运行出结果来的嘛。。竟然也没有上九十。。sigh again。

考试完本来想像米饭一样继续看书的,不过,回寝室理理东西,然后回家,一下子就从中午到晚上了,再加上前一天为了背集成电路就只睡了两个半小时多,人几乎快不行了,于是扫了两遍argu的高频前五的题目,发现一点思路都没有,年久失修了啊我的argu思维,虽说原来也不怎么好,作罢,和同学聊了几句之后,一直到十点,直接倒头上床睡觉。。。

7月三号。。好吧。。我承认没有缓冲过来。。真的是想休息。。本来按考试作息应该六点半起床。。然后开始写文的。。无奈。。结果困。。依然什么都做不进去。。然后浑浑噩噩地吃东西来维持神智。。。但还是在中午的时候直接连睡了四个小时。。才终于清醒。。很好。。于是彻底决定放自己假。。决定4号正式进入进度。。恩。。去看了两个星期没去看的奶奶。。看了会同一首歌。。奶茶果然是很有味道的。。~。。很女人。。很恬淡的感觉。。然后回家。。。进入小组的BS.。。呵呵。。在米饭和CMJ的开导下。。以及严厉的批评下。。我们组终于大概找到了BS的方向了。。感慨。。不过很开心有米饭和CMJ的指导。。。p的严厉是好事》《。。

感觉issue的方法就是。。先好好分析题目。。然后列出自己的观点。。然后不断地问why。。一直问道本质。。然后根据本质来列每个大观点的分论点。。然后开始想论证方法和例证。。。最后就是写。。。
不过我自己似乎一直都是最后几步合在一起做的。。

好的。。今天是进入正轨。。。虽然还是有点颓废。。。一共2A2I。。。然后分析了debate的。。中立正反双方。。。然后背了四句难句。。改了一篇issue。。该文章花的时间比写文章还多啊。。天。。。看了michael的mv。。很奇特的舞蹈。。》《。。。因为字数超了。。所以debate贴在下面一个贴。。~
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The moderator's opening remarksApr 21st 2009 | Ms Alison Goddard

、、、、
People generally spend about a third of their lives asleep. A century ago, they had little choice. Artificial light was dim and little could be accomplished by it. So people went to bed soon after dark and rose with the lark. The invention of the electric light bulb changed all this. (可以褒义可以贬义) Now it is perfectly possible to get on with useful—and, perhaps more entertainingly, frivolous—pursuits during the hours of darkness. The advice handed down from grandmother, to get at least eight hours of sleep a night, with an hour before midnight being worth two after, goes unheeded. What are the consequences of ignoring her counsel?
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Staying awake for longer obviously enables people to achieve more. As students around the globe will attest, revising for examinations into the early hours boosts the grades attained. Indeed, many students are reported to take stimulants such as Ritalin and Modafinil in order to stay alert for longer. But at some stage, sleep becomes vital. It is not only essential to restore alertness; sleep is also critical for learning as well as many other measures of well-being, both physical and mental.

Involuntary insomnia, perhaps brought on by economic anxiety, achieves little. Spending several wakeful hours staring in frustration at a darkened ceiling is no one's idea of fun.(挺有意思的表达,虽然好像考试的时候用不到) People who suffer from insomnia tend not only to be tired and perform less well in the workplace but also to be depressed. Some studies show that people who take sleeping pills are sicker than those who do not.

Are we getting enough sleep? The question has bothered many distinguished thinkers for decades. We are privileged to have two great authorities to discuss the issue. Robert Stickgold of the Harvard Medical School argues that people who do not get enough shut-eye become "fat, sick and stupid" as a result. Dan Kripke of the University of California, San Diego, reckons that too much sleep has similar consequences. Let the debate commence.

Frivolous 轻浮的,琐碎的
Unheeded 无人理睬的
Privileged 享有特权的


The proposer's opening remarksApr 21st 2009 | Dr Robert Stickgold


Are we getting enough sleep? While the answer to this question obviously depends on who "we" are, and what "enough" means,(很好的句式,可以用在引出对某个词的定义) the bulk of the scientific evidence supports a resounding "No". We need more sleep.

Let me summarise what I am going to tell you: you are probably not getting enough sleep, and you know it. If sleepiness doesn't kill you on the highways, the consequences of inadequate sleep are going to dramatically increase the likelihood that you end up fat,(很好的不用even if 的一种让步句式) sick and stupid. Let us look at these claims one at a time.一次性)

First, we know that we are not getting enough sleep. Of among 100,000 randomly selected individuals enrolled in a telephone survey, a quarter reported that they "did not get enough rest or sleep" on at least half of the previous 30 nights. Of those 18-34 years of age, the number was even higher, at 33%, and 10% of all respondents reported never getting enough. So we know from our own experience that(我的argu一定会用你这句句子的,用于引出常识) we are not getting enough sleep. Caffeine consumption is another measure of our sleepiness. After oil, coffee is the largest traded commodity on the world markets in terms of total dollar amount.(一个极好的例子,用于不眠的人们总是不停的工作) Americans alone drink over 300 million cups of coffee a day, and that number ignores caffeinated soft drinks. We clearly know that we are not getting enough sleep and are desperately(拼命的) self-medicating ourselves in the hope of waking up.
先引例子,然后说we know from our own experience 开始说明一个事实,然后再从别的角度引例子,再次论证我们睡眠不足这一事实。估计下面要说理了。】

Our daytime sleepiness is killing us on the road. Recent analyses of vehicular deaths suggest that sleepiness is as big a culprit as alcohol. Shifting to daylight savings time in the spring, when Americans lose just one hour of sleep over a weekend, leads to a 9% increase in automobile accidents the following day. This is not due to just a few short sleepers. 37% of Americans admit having fallen asleep at the wheel at least once, and 6% report having done so in the last six months. So despite(又一个很好的让步) our use of caffeine to help keep us awake, our sleepiness is killing us on the highways. (Forgive me if most of the data I present is for Americans, but most studies have been carried out in the United States.)

There is a common misperception that(这个句式可以用于argu里面的概念混淆) all that sleep does is cure sleepiness. But sleep is a time when the body and brain actively prepare for the next day. Every year, more evidence comes out about the importance of adequate sleep in maintaining our health and sanity. Just some of these studies should prove the point.
睡眠的作用

For a start, sleep is critical for the effective operation of the immune system. So if you do not get enough sleep, you will probably get sick more often. In one study, subjects who stayed up all night after getting immunised against hepatitis ended up producing only half as much antibody against the virus as those who slept normally. In another study, participants who reported sleeping, on average, less than seven hours a night were three times more likely to get sick, when exposed to a cold virus, than those who averaged eight hours or more.
睡眠的重要原因一immune system.

Adequate sleep is also critical for maintaining normal glucose metabolism and for preventing both obesity and type II diabetes. Our feelings of hunger and satiety are controlled by two opposing hormones, ghrelin and leptin; high ghrelin levels and low leptin levels make us feel hungry. When subjects were restricted to five hours of sleep a night for a week, their leptin levels dropped by 17% and ghrelin increased 28%, despite food intake being rigorously maintained at a constant level. With unrestrained eating, these changes would normally lead to the consumption of an extra 1,000 Kcal of food, half of your normal daily intake. Indeed, when subjects in another study were allowed to eat as much as they wanted, their desire for high carbohydrate (read "junk") food went up 32%.
睡眠的重要原因二maintain normal glucose metabolism and preventing obesity and diabetes.

These same studies showed that with inadequate sleep, glucose regulation goes awry. Subjects whose sleep had been restricted to five hours a night showed signs that normally presage the onset of diabetes after less than a week of restricted sleep. But these are experimental subjects. Wouldn't people who normally sleep less get used to it? Don't their bodies adjust? Apparently not.(这篇文章对argu真是很有帮助啊~。。这句可以用在researchsubjects上面
Subjects who normally sleep no more than 6.5 hours a night show 40% higher insulin sensitivity than those sleeping eight hours, levels that reflect a significant risk of diabetes.

睡眠的重要原因三glucose regulation goes awry

But inadequate sleep also impairs mental functioning. As the most basic level, inadequate sleep leads to poor attention. Limiting sleep to just seven hours in bed for a week leads to a dramatic decrease in the ability of individuals to maintain sustained attention.(连续的注意力) On a simple test of attention, a quarter of subjects restricted to six hours per day in bed fell asleep during testing, taking over 30 seconds to respond to the appearance of an obvious signal on their computer screen. Interestingly, although subjects perceived their performance as stabilising after three days, it actually continued to deteriorate across the entire week of sleep restriction.
睡眠的重要原因四impairs mental functioning。从physical level mental level上来了。

Attention is not the only cognitive impairment produced by inadequate sleep. Learning and memory are also affected. Memories formed and skills learned during the day are stabilised, enhanced and integrated with other memories and skills during sleep the following night. For example, with a visual skill learning task, individuals actually improve over a night of sleep, performing better the next day. But this improvement is in proportion to how much sleep they obtain in excess of six hours. Twice as much improvement was seen with eight hours of sleep than with seven hours, and no improvement was seen with six or less. More recent studies suggest that REM sleep, which is most prominent at the very end of the night, is critical for integrating newly learned information into our larger networks of pre-existing memories, helping us make meaning out of the events of the preceding day. Getting less than eight hours
may prevent this crucial work from being done.

Cognitive 的另外一些respectattentionlearning and memory

So it is most likely literally (=indeed) true that if you are getting less than the eight hours of sleep your body is asking for, both your body and your mind will pay the price.

Resounding 响亮的 彻底的
Summarise 总结
Satiety 吃得太饱
Rigorously 严厉地

The opposition's opening remarksApr 21st 2009 | Dr Daniel Kripke


Most of us get enough sleep. A fair percentage even spend too long in bed, but there is wide diversity among us. (赞一下,一直都在想different people have different thoughts这种话怎么写得好看,这句话很厉害,再自己打一遍,there is wide diversity among us) For most people, there is no persuasive evidence that spending more time in bed would be good for them or for the folks around them.
一上来就表明观点—we have enough sleep, and maybe over.

These days, adults in the United States and much of Europe say they sleep an average of 6.5-7.5 hours a night. In study after study, people who sleep 6.5-7.4 hours live the longest, so most people are getting enough sleep. People who report sleeping five or six hours live almost as long. In fact, people who sleep five or six hours may live a bit longer than people who sleep eight hours. People who sleep five or six hours live considerably longer than the person who sleeps nine hours or more. With the best survival among those with rather short sleep durations, it would be hard to prove that increasing sleep time would be good for most people.

By the majority of measures, those with average or short sleep seem healthier also. Recent results from the Hordaland study in Norway showed that working people who reported sleeping less than 6.5 hours a night did not suffer any significant increase in disability. Those who reported more than 8.5 hours were more than twice as likely to become disabled as those who slept 6.5-7.5 hours. Those who slept 7.5-8.5 hours were slightly more likely to become disabled (not significant). The suggestion from this study was that, if anything,(极好的插入语,在新概念里我也看到过一次,如果还有的话,甚至于。。) spending more time in bed might tend to increase disability.

To give more examples,(在issue里面可以用排比的例子) the six-hour sleeper is less likely to develop diabetes than the nine-hour sleeper. The six-hour sleeper is less likely to have a stroke than the long sleeper. Incidentally(附带的), I have not been able to find evidence that people who sleep more than average earn more money or do more to help other people. Quite the opposite.

You might think that more sleep would be good for mood, but those who sleep nine or ten hours tend to be very depressed. A counter-intuitive surprise is that sleep deprivation actually improves mood, at least in the short run.(这种转折方式也很新奇)

Insomnia is not mainly a problem of short sleep:(可以用在issue里面的挖深,引出本质问题) those with more than average sleep frequently report insomnia. Moreover, the false belief that people generally need eight hours of sleep is one of the common causes of insomnia. Spending less time in bed is an important solution for many with insomnia.

Nobody seems to know exactly where the idea that we should sleep eight hours came from. I guess it was just passed down from somebody's grandmother.

It turns out that many of the chief proponents of more sleep are being paid by the sleeping-pill industry. The industry thinks that campaigns for more sleep increase sleeping-pill sales. Some people imagine that sleeping pills help them cope on the following day, but the majority of objective studies show that sleeping pills have no benefit for next-day performance or even make behaviour worse. A recent 20-year study from Sweden showed that men who took sleeping pills had even more early deaths and more cancer than those who smoked cigarettes. There have been 16 other studies showing excess mortality among sleeping-pill users. Perhaps epidemiologic studies do not necessarily prove that sleeping pills cause mortality, but the pharmaceutical industry has done randomising controlled trialsrandomising controlled trials 很好的词) showing that sleeping pills increase depression and infection, and probably increase the likelihood of cancer.

We should be worried that many disasters are caused by mistakes made in the early hours of the morning: the Chernobyl and Three-Mile-Island nuclear melt-downs, the Bhopal disaster, Exxon Valdez and so forth. Work shifts between midnight and 6 am produce increased numbers of minor and serious errors. Night work does curtail sleep, which is part of the problem, but the main difficulty is that night workers try to function when the body clock is lowering alertness and the metabolism. 再一次让步)The circadian rhythm problem in night work is more important than the element of(可以用在argu的另一个因素更为重要) sleep loss, so these causes should be distinguished(接着上面一句配合使用). Moreover, for many shift workers, the issue is that they are unable to sleep enough during the day, and too little is known about how their sleep disturbances could be managed. As modern economies increase the percentage of night workers, much more research is needed to find solutions for the problems of shift workers.

Similarly, after midnight vehicle accident rates are very high. Here again the impairment may come more from the downside of circadian rhythms than from any acute sleep loss. Many road accidents are caused by young lads who have been abusing alcohol or other substances as well as staying up much too late. I have seen no convincing evidence that the person who regularly averages six hours of sleep a night has more accidents than the person who sleeps eight hours. There is some evidence that nine-hour sleepers are a danger on the road.

Of course, there are people in particular situations who should get more sleep. Research shows that doctors and nurses make more mistakes when their work hours are too long to allow enough sleep. I would prefer that their schedules provided adequate sleep.
这段是分类讨论,承认the opposite同时让自己的point更加完整

Years ago, a small Navy submarine sank in San Diego Bay, possibly due to a mistake by a sailor whose commanders had allowed him only 4-5 hours' sleep for weeks. His commander testified at the court-martial that such sleep schedules were routine on nuclear submarines. I would prefer that the fellows with their fat fingers on the nuclear red buttons were getting more sleep. Stressed doctors, nurses and submariners are some of the exceptions to the general point that most people sleep enough.

For most people, this debate's proposition that we do not get enough sleep is misguided.

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