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Art is one of the fundamental possessions in people's lifes. The work of art gives people insightful inspiration and impart on the emotion, people use art to communicate with each other, to reflesh themselves, to get reborn, which we call the lasting value of the art. The critic, who evaluate those works, give the audience guidence, criticilze the thoughts and have deeper understanding of the works than most common people do,which is another kind of lasting value . Hence, both the critists and artists both have something of lasting value.


As the beginning,artist, as the gardener of the beautiful garden, is the resource of the creative thinking, and original thinking. The gardener decorate the garden to transverse the garden to become a excellent place.
The artist deploy their imaginary
power, to make the world a better place to live in, by means of painting, music, novels and etc. It is from the music which we can get peaceful and encouragement. It is from novels which we can attain the enjoyment and pleasurement. It is the from painting which we achieve the sense of hope and inspiration. we can not imagine the life without art, therefore, art, the unsubsituate part in our life, providing lasting values.

Secondly, critist, those who evaluate works of art such as novels, films, music, painting, etc, as the guidance of the beautiful garden, who show the people around, to find the most fabulous flowers in the garden, also provide some lasting value, as the artist do. Knowing the real function of the critist is the basic to understanding of the point above. Sometimes, from so many kinds and various books, we have confronted anxiety, because we have no idea which one to choose. Here, the critic came, and told us which one is really worthy reading, which one is not. It not only save our a lot of energy, but also, the every master piece would be at our sight as soon as possible.
What is more, critic who know the arts much better than our common people, would providing a new way to translate art work and illustrate the deep meaning of the piece. One of the critic's roles, is that providing better way to understand the works, and give the audiences something brand new view to view those works. Thanks to the critic, we know others' opinions about the art, which may
light up our instinct thinking and widen our sight. From the critic, we know much deeper than before. Consider, a person who has little about the Chinese tradition first time read the 《Red Chamber Dream》，the most likely that he would not know what is the whole story talking about and would be nothing specular. Actually, we knew that every move and every scene has its own meaning and could tell the personality of the character.

But, we neglect the fact that the critists are people, people make mistakes. It is very likely that the critists have various systems of evaluation due to their different values and beliefs. We also take 《Red Chamber Dream》as an example. It was once a time that listed as the forbidden books according to the critist at that time, but now, it is one of the most famous of Chinese tradition books , called one of the four treasures of the old Chinese, and now only accounts to the people who research on the book as a profession, there will be no less than
hundred thousands, not to mention the amount of people who read them. The book is the same, but has totally different situations. We assume the critist should be major repossiblily due to the case.
That is why different critists has different opinions about the same books. .
In the long history run, it is the critist who make real change to people’s interest in some level. The critic who guide the way to lead the leader to selected books, even though they would make mistakes sometimes, from another aspect to explain my point is that we should be critical with the critic, never believe everything being told, there is old saying that the
if you believe everything in the book, then you would rather had no book.



The artist who conducted pieces of wonderful works；the critic who elevate those artist' wonderful works, both of them are nessary and what is more, both of them give society something of lasting value, but in different aspects. The artist gave people more pleasure and enjoyment, but the critic provide us
more about how to be critical thinking, how to doubt the forerunner, came out with several questions quetioning their works. It is deniable to admit that only artist have some lasting value.


请大家多多指教！！！！谢谢！！我的第二篇~~~~

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Art is one of the fundamental possessions in people's lifes. The work of art(artist) gives people insightful inspiration and impart on the emotion, people use art = to communicate with each other, to reflesh themselves, to get reborn, which we call the lasting value of the art(把这个调整到=处). The critic, who evaluate those works, give the audience guidence, criticilze the thoughts and have deeper understanding of the works than most common people do,which（指什么？） is another kind of lasting value . Hence, both the critists and artists both have something of lasting value.（改为both the critists and artists give society something of lasting value）


As the beginning,artist, as the gardener of the beautiful garden, is the resource of the creative thinking, and original thinking（改为creative and original thinking）. The gardener decorates the garden to transverse the garden to become a excellent place.The artist deploys their imaginary power, to make the world a better place to live in, by means of painting, music, novels and etc. It is from the music which we can get peaceful and encouragement. It is from novels which we can attain the enjoyment and pleasurement. It is the from painting which(都改为that) we achieve the sense of hope and inspiration. we can not imagine the life without art, therefore, art, the unsubsituate part in our life, providing（provides） lasting values.（3个it is句型，句型重复，主要因为这种句型没有特点）

Secondly, critist, those who evaluate works of art such as novels, films, music, painting, etc,（写二三个就行了） as the guidance of the beautiful garden, who（改为and） show the people around, to find the most fabulous flowers in the garden, also provide some lasting value, as the artist do. Knowing the real function of the critist is the basic to understanding of the point above. Sometimes, from so many kinds and various books, we have confronted anxiety, because we have no idea which one to choose. Here, the critic came, and told us which one is really worthy reading, which one is not. It not only save our a lot of energy, but also, the every master piece would be at our sight as soon as possible.
What is more, critic who know the arts much better than our common people, would providing a new way to translate art work and illustrate the deep meaning of the piece. One of the critic's roles, is that providing better way to understand the works, and give the audiences something brand new view to view those works. Thanks to the critic, we know others' opinions about the art, which may
light up our instinct thinking and widen our sight. From the critic, we know much deeper than before. Consider, a person who has little about the Chinese tradition first time read the 《Red Chamber Dream》，the most likely that he would not know what is the whole story talking about and would be nothing specular. Actually, we knew that every move and every scene has its own meaning and could tell the personality of the character.

But, we neglect the fact that the critists are people, people make mistakes（这个用重句）. It is very（much吧？） likely that the critists have various systems of evaluation due to their different values and beliefs. We also take 《Red Chamber Dream》as an example. It was once a time that listed as the forbidden books according to the critist at that time, but now, it is one of the most famous of Chinese tradition books , called one of the four treasures of the old Chinese, and now only accounts to the people who research on the book as a profession, there will be no less than hundred thousands（第一次见，应该不对）, not to mention the amount of people who read them. The book is the same, but has totally different situations. We assume the critist should be major repossiblily due to the case.
That is why different critists has different opinions about the same books. .
In the long history run, it is the critist who make real change to people’s interest in some level. The critic who guide the way to lead the leader to selected books, even though they would make mistakes sometimes, from another aspect to explain my point is that we should be critical with the critic, never believe everything being told, there is old saying that the
if you believe everything in the book, then you would rather had no book. （你最后几句是在论证critic还是在说读书呀？）



The artist who conducted pieces of wonderful works；（用AND）the critic who elevate those artist' wonderful works, both of them are nessary and what is more, both of them give society something of lasting value, but in different aspects. The artist gave people more pleasure and enjoyment, but the critic provide us
more about how to be critical thinking, how to doubt the forerunner, came out with several questions quetioning their works. It is deniable to admit that only artist have some lasting value.

楼主，问个问题，你是从中文翻译成英文的吧？你挺能写的，但是感觉好多句子你都是初中生那种翻译方法词对词，这样不对，语法错误太多。另外，你的标点符号注意，还有单复数，里面有些我都没改出来。下回把字体弄成4号的，方便看。还有，积累句型，你和我一样，没有句型和单词积累。

112810asUID: 2646494

Art is one of the fundamental possessions in people's lifes. The work of art(artist) gives people insightful inspiration and impart on the emotion, people use art = to communicate with each other, to reflesh themselves, to get reborn, which we call the lasting value of the art(把这个调整到=处). The critic, who evaluate those works, give the audience guidence, criticilze the thoughts and have deeper understanding of the works than most common people do,which（指什么？） is another kind of lasting value . Hence, both the critists and artists both have something of lasting value.（改为both the critists and artists give society something of lasting value）


As the beginning,artist, as the gardener of the beautiful garden, is the resource of the creative thinking, and original thinking（改为creative and original thinking）. The gardener decorates the garden to transverse the garden to become a excellent place.The artist deploys their imaginary power, to make the world a better place to live in, by means of painting, music, novels and etc. It is from the music which we can get peaceful and encouragement. It is from novels which we can attain the enjoyment and pleasurement. It is the from painting which(都改为that) we achieve the sense of hope and inspiration. we can not imagine the life without art, therefore, art, the unsubsituate part in our life, providing（provides） lasting values.（3个it is句型，句型重复，主要因为这种句型没有特点）

Secondly, critist, those who evaluate works of art such as novels, films, music, painting, etc,（写二三个就行了） as the guidance of the beautiful garden, who（改为and） show the people around, to find the most fabulous flowers in the garden, also provide some lasting value, as the artist do. Knowing the real function of the critist is the basic to understanding of the point above. Sometimes, from so many kinds and various books, we have confronted anxiety, because we have no idea which one to choose. Here, the critic came, and told us which one is really worthy reading, which one is not. It not only save our a lot of energy, but also, the every master piece would be at our sight as soon as possible.
What is more, critic who know the arts much better than our common people, would providing a new way to translate art work and illustrate the deep meaning of the piece. One of the critic's roles, is that providing better way to understand the works, and give the audiences something brand new view to view those works. Thanks to the critic, we know others' opinions about the art, which may
light up our instinct thinking and widen our sight. From the critic, we know much deeper than before. Consider, a person who has little about the Chinese tradition first time read the 《Red Chamber Dream》，the most likely that he would not know what is the whole story talking about and would be nothing specular. Actually, we knew that every move and every scene has its own meaning and could tell the personality of the character.

But, we neglect the fact that the critists are people, people make mistakes（这个用重句）. It is very（much吧？） likely that the critists have various systems of evaluation due to their different values and beliefs. We also take 《Red Chamber Dream》as an example. It was once a time that listed as the forbidden books according to the critist at that time, but now, it is one of the most famous of Chinese tradition books , called one of the four treasures of the old Chinese, and now only accounts to the people who research on the book as a profession, there will be no less than hundred thousands（第一次见，应该不对）, not to mention the amount of people who read them. The book is the same, but has totally different situations. We assume the critist should be major repossiblily due to the case.
That is why different critists has different opinions about the same books. .
In the long history run, it is the critist who make real change to people’s interest in some level. The critic who guide the way to lead the leader to selected books, even though they would make mistakes sometimes, from another aspect to explain my point is that we should be critical with the critic, never believe everything being told, there is old saying that the
if you believe everything in the book, then you would rather had no book. （你最后几句是在论证critic还是在说读书呀？）



The artist who conducted pieces of wonderful works；（用AND）the critic who elevate those artist' wonderful works, both of them are nessary and what is more, both of them give society something of lasting value, but in different aspects. The artist gave people more pleasure and enjoyment, but the critic provide us
more about how to be critical thinking, how to doubt the forerunner, came out with several questions quetioning their works. It is deniable to admit that only artist have some lasting value.

楼主，问个问题，你是从中文翻译成英文的吧？你挺能写的，但是感觉好多句子你都是初中生那种翻译方法词对词，这样不对，语法错误太多。另外，你的标点符号注意，还有单复数，里面有些我都没改出来。下回把字体弄成4号的，方便看。还有，积累句型，你和我一样，没有句型和单词积累。

112810asUID: 2646494

Art is one of the fundamental possessions in people's lifes. The work of art(artist) gives people insightful inspiration and impart on the emotion, people use art = to communicate with each other, to reflesh themselves, to get reborn, which we call the lasting value of the art(把这个调整到=处). The critic, who evaluate those works, give the audience guidence, criticilze the thoughts and have deeper understanding of the works than most common people do,which（指什么？） is another kind of lasting value . Hence, both the critists and artists both have something of lasting value.（改为both the critists and artists give society something of lasting value）


As the beginning,artist, as the gardener of the beautiful garden, is the resource of the creative thinking, and original thinking（改为creative and original thinking）. The gardener decorates the garden to transverse the garden to become a excellent place.The artist deploys their imaginary power, to make the world a better place to live in, by means of painting, music, novels and etc. It is from the music which we can get peaceful and encouragement. It is from novels which we can attain the enjoyment and pleasurement. It is the from painting which(都改为that) we achieve the sense of hope and inspiration. we can not imagine the life without art, therefore, art, the unsubsituate part in our life, providing（provides） lasting values.（3个it is句型，句型重复，主要因为这种句型没有特点）

Secondly, critist, those who evaluate works of art such as novels, films, music, painting, etc,（写二三个就行了） as the guidance of the beautiful garden, who（改为and） show the people around, to find the most fabulous flowers in the garden, also provide some lasting value, as the artist do. Knowing the real function of the critist is the basic to understanding of the point above. Sometimes, from so many kinds and various books, we have confronted anxiety, because we have no idea which one to choose. Here, the critic came, and told us which one is really worthy reading, which one is not. It not only save our a lot of energy, but also, the every master piece would be at our sight as soon as possible.
What is more, critic who know the arts much better than our common people, would providing a new way to translate art work and illustrate the deep meaning of the piece. One of the critic's roles, is that providing better way to understand the works, and give the audiences something brand new view to view those works. Thanks to the critic, we know others' opinions about the art, which may
light up our instinct thinking and widen our sight. From the critic, we know much deeper than before. Consider, a person who has little about the Chinese tradition first time read the 《Red Chamber Dream》，the most likely that he would not know what is the whole story talking about and would be nothing specular. Actually, we knew that every move and every scene has its own meaning and could tell the personality of the character.

But, we neglect the fact that the critists are people, people make mistakes（这个用重句）. It is very（much吧？） likely that the critists have various systems of evaluation due to their different values and beliefs. We also take 《Red Chamber Dream》as an example. It was once a time that listed as the forbidden books according to the critist at that time, but now, it is one of the most famous of Chinese tradition books , called one of the four treasures of the old Chinese, and now only accounts to the people who research on the book as a profession, there will be no less than hundred thousands（第一次见，应该不对）, not to mention the amount of people who read them. The book is the same, but has totally different situations. We assume the critist should be major repossiblily due to the case.
That is why different critists has different opinions about the same books. .
In the long history run, it is the critist who make real change to people’s interest in some level. The critic who guide the way to lead the leader to selected books, even though they would make mistakes sometimes, from another aspect to explain my point is that we should be critical with the critic, never believe everything being told, there is old saying that the
if you believe everything in the book, then you would rather had no book. （你最后几句是在论证critic还是在说读书呀？）



The artist who conducted pieces of wonderful works；（用AND）the critic who elevate those artist' wonderful works, both of them are nessary and what is more, both of them give society something of lasting value, but in different aspects. The artist gave people more pleasure and enjoyment, but the critic provide us
more about how to be critical thinking, how to doubt the forerunner, came out with several questions quetioning their works. It is deniable to admit that only artist have some lasting value.

楼主，问个问题，你是从中文翻译成英文的吧？你挺能写的，但是感觉好多句子你都是初中生那种翻译方法词对词，这样不对，语法错误太多。另外，你的标点符号注意，还有单复数，里面有些我都没改出来。下回把字体弄成4号的，方便看。还有，积累句型，你和我一样，没有句型和单词积累。

112810asUID: 2646494

Art is one of the fundamental possessions in people's lifes. The work of art(artist) gives people insightful inspiration and impart on the emotion, people use art = to communicate with each other, to reflesh themselves, to get reborn, which we call the lasting value of the art(把这个调整到=处). The critic, who evaluate those works, give the audience guidence, criticilze the thoughts and have deeper understanding of the works than most common people do,which（指什么？） is another kind of lasting value . Hence, both the critists and artists both have something of lasting value.（改为both the critists and artists give society something of lasting value）


As the beginning,artist, as the gardener of the beautiful garden, is the resource of the creative thinking, and original thinking（改为creative and original thinking）. The gardener decorates the garden to transverse the garden to become a excellent place.The artist deploys their imaginary power, to make the world a better place to live in, by means of painting, music, novels and etc. It is from the music which we can get peaceful and encouragement. It is from novels which we can attain the enjoyment and pleasurement. It is the from painting which(都改为that) we achieve the sense of hope and inspiration. we can not imagine the life without art, therefore, art, the unsubsituate part in our life, providing（provides） lasting values.（3个it is句型，句型重复，主要因为这种句型没有特点）

Secondly, critist, those who evaluate works of art such as novels, films, music, painting, etc,（写二三个就行了） as the guidance of the beautiful garden, who（改为and） show the people around, to find the most fabulous flowers in the garden, also provide some lasting value, as the artist do. Knowing the real function of the critist is the basic to understanding of the point above. Sometimes, from so many kinds and various books, we have confronted anxiety, because we have no idea which one to choose. Here, the critic came, and told us which one is really worthy reading, which one is not. It not only save our a lot of energy, but also, the every master piece would be at our sight as soon as possible.
What is more, critic who know the arts much better than our common people, would providing a new way to translate art work and illustrate the deep meaning of the piece. One of the critic's roles, is that providing better way to understand the works, and give the audiences something brand new view to view those works. Thanks to the critic, we know others' opinions about the art, which may
light up our instinct thinking and widen our sight. From the critic, we know much deeper than before. Consider, a person who has little about the Chinese tradition first time read the 《Red Chamber Dream》，the most likely that he would not know what is the whole story talking about and would be nothing specular. Actually, we knew that every move and every scene has its own meaning and could tell the personality of the character.

But, we neglect the fact that the critists are people, people make mistakes（这个用重句）. It is very（much吧？） likely that the critists have various systems of evaluation due to their different values and beliefs. We also take 《Red Chamber Dream》as an example. It was once a time that listed as the forbidden books according to the critist at that time, but now, it is one of the most famous of Chinese tradition books , called one of the four treasures of the old Chinese, and now only accounts to the people who research on the book as a profession, there will be no less than hundred thousands（第一次见，应该不对）, not to mention the amount of people who read them. The book is the same, but has totally different situations. We assume the critist should be major repossiblily due to the case.
That is why different critists has different opinions about the same books. .
In the long history run, it is the critist who make real change to people’s interest in some level. The critic who guide the way to lead the leader to selected books, even though they would make mistakes sometimes, from another aspect to explain my point is that we should be critical with the critic, never believe everything being told, there is old saying that the
if you believe everything in the book, then you would rather had no book. （你最后几句是在论证critic还是在说读书呀？）



The artist who conducted pieces of wonderful works；（用AND）the critic who elevate those artist' wonderful works, both of them are nessary and what is more, both of them give society something of lasting value, but in different aspects. The artist gave people more pleasure and enjoyment, but the critic provide us
more about how to be critical thinking, how to doubt the forerunner, came out with several questions quetioning their works. It is deniable to admit that only artist have some lasting value.

楼主，问个问题，你是从中文翻译成英文的吧？你挺能写的，但是感觉好多句子你都是初中生那种翻译方法词对词，这样不对，语法错误太多。另外，你的标点符号注意，还有单复数，里面有些我都没改出来。下回把字体弄成4号的，方便看。还有，积累句型，你和我一样，没有句型和单词积累。

112810asUID: 2646494

Art is one of the fundamental possessions in people's lifes. The work of art(artist) gives people insightful inspiration and impart on the emotion, people use art = to communicate with each other, to reflesh themselves, to get reborn, which we call the lasting value of the art(把这个调整到=处). The critic, who evaluate those works, give the audience guidence, criticilze the thoughts and have deeper understanding of the works than most common people do,which（指什么？） is another kind of lasting value . Hence, both the critists and artists both have something of lasting value.（改为both the critists and artists give society something of lasting value）


As the beginning,artist, as the gardener of the beautiful garden, is the resource of the creative thinking, and original thinking（改为creative and original thinking）. The gardener decorates the garden to transverse the garden to become a excellent place.The artist deploys their imaginary power, to make the world a better place to live in, by means of painting, music, novels and etc. It is from the music which we can get peaceful and encouragement. It is from novels which we can attain the enjoyment and pleasurement. It is the from painting which(都改为that) we achieve the sense of hope and inspiration. we can not imagine the life without art, therefore, art, the unsubsituate part in our life, providing（provides） lasting values.（3个it is句型，句型重复，主要因为这种句型没有特点）

Secondly, critist, those who evaluate works of art such as novels, films, music, painting, etc,（写二三个就行了） as the guidance of the beautiful garden, who（改为and） show the people around, to find the most fabulous flowers in the garden, also provide some lasting value, as the artist do. Knowing the real function of the critist is the basic to understanding of the point above. Sometimes, from so many kinds and various books, we have confronted anxiety, because we have no idea which one to choose. Here, the critic came, and told us which one is really worthy reading, which one is not. It not only save our a lot of energy, but also, the every master piece would be at our sight as soon as possible.
What is more, critic who know the arts much better than our common people, would providing a new way to translate art work and illustrate the deep meaning of the piece. One of the critic's roles, is that providing better way to understand the works, and give the audiences something brand new view to view those works. Thanks to the critic, we know others' opinions about the art, which may
light up our instinct thinking and widen our sight. From the critic, we know much deeper than before. Consider, a person who has little about the Chinese tradition first time read the 《Red Chamber Dream》，the most likely that he would not know what is the whole story talking about and would be nothing specular. Actually, we knew that every move and every scene has its own meaning and could tell the personality of the character.

But, we neglect the fact that the critists are people, people make mistakes（这个用重句）. It is very（much吧？） likely that the critists have various systems of evaluation due to their different values and beliefs. We also take 《Red Chamber Dream》as an example. It was once a time that listed as the forbidden books according to the critist at that time, but now, it is one of the most famous of Chinese tradition books , called one of the four treasures of the old Chinese, and now only accounts to the people who research on the book as a profession, there will be no less than hundred thousands（第一次见，应该不对）, not to mention the amount of people who read them. The book is the same, but has totally different situations. We assume the critist should be major repossiblily due to the case.
That is why different critists has different opinions about the same books. .
In the long history run, it is the critist who make real change to people’s interest in some level. The critic who guide the way to lead the leader to selected books, even though they would make mistakes sometimes, from another aspect to explain my point is that we should be critical with the critic, never believe everything being told, there is old saying that the
if you believe everything in the book, then you would rather had no book. （你最后几句是在论证critic还是在说读书呀？）



The artist who conducted pieces of wonderful works；（用AND）the critic who elevate those artist' wonderful works, both of them are nessary and what is more, both of them give society something of lasting value, but in different aspects. The artist gave people more pleasure and enjoyment, but the critic provide us
more about how to be critical thinking, how to doubt the forerunner, came out with several questions quetioning their works. It is deniable to admit that only artist have some lasting value.

楼主，问个问题，你是从中文翻译成英文的吧？你挺能写的，但是感觉好多句子你都是初中生那种翻译方法词对词，这样不对，语法错误太多。另外，你的标点符号注意，还有单复数，里面有些我都没改出来。下回把字体弄成4号的，方便看。还有，积累句型，你和我一样，没有句型和单词积累。

112810asUID: 2646494

Art is one of the fundamental possessions in people's lifes. The work of art(artist) gives people insightful inspiration and impart on the emotion, people use art = to communicate with each other, to reflesh themselves, to get reborn, which we call the lasting value of the art(把这个调整到=处). The critic, who evaluate those works, give the audience guidence, criticilze the thoughts and have deeper understanding of the works than most common people do,which（指什么？） is another kind of lasting value . Hence, both the critists and artists both have something of lasting value.（改为both the critists and artists give society something of lasting value）


As the beginning,artist, as the gardener of the beautiful garden, is the resource of the creative thinking, and original thinking（改为creative and original thinking）. The gardener decorates the garden to transverse the garden to become a excellent place.The artist deploys their imaginary power, to make the world a better place to live in, by means of painting, music, novels and etc. It is from the music which we can get peaceful and encouragement. It is from novels which we can attain the enjoyment and pleasurement. It is the from painting which(都改为that) we achieve the sense of hope and inspiration. we can not imagine the life without art, therefore, art, the unsubsituate part in our life, providing（provides） lasting values.（3个it is句型，句型重复，主要因为这种句型没有特点）

Secondly, critist, those who evaluate works of art such as novels, films, music, painting, etc,（写二三个就行了） as the guidance of the beautiful garden, who（改为and） show the people around, to find the most fabulous flowers in the garden, also provide some lasting value, as the artist do. Knowing the real function of the critist is the basic to understanding of the point above. Sometimes, from so many kinds and various books, we have confronted anxiety, because we have no idea which one to choose. Here, the critic came, and told us which one is really worthy reading, which one is not. It not only save our a lot of energy, but also, the every master piece would be at our sight as soon as possible.
What is more, critic who know the arts much better than our common people, would providing a new way to translate art work and illustrate the deep meaning of the piece. One of the critic's roles, is that providing better way to understand the works, and give the audiences something brand new view to view those works. Thanks to the critic, we know others' opinions about the art, which may
light up our instinct thinking and widen our sight. From the critic, we know much deeper than before. Consider, a person who has little about the Chinese tradition first time read the 《Red Chamber Dream》，the most likely that he would not know what is the whole story talking about and would be nothing specular. Actually, we knew that every move and every scene has its own meaning and could tell the personality of the character.

But, we neglect the fact that the critists are people, people make mistakes（这个用重句）. It is very（much吧？） likely that the critists have various systems of evaluation due to their different values and beliefs. We also take 《Red Chamber Dream》as an example. It was once a time that listed as the forbidden books according to the critist at that time, but now, it is one of the most famous of Chinese tradition books , called one of the four treasures of the old Chinese, and now only accounts to the people who research on the book as a profession, there will be no less than hundred thousands（第一次见，应该不对）, not to mention the amount of people who read them. The book is the same, but has totally different situations. We assume the critist should be major repossiblily due to the case.
That is why different critists has different opinions about the same books. .
In the long history run, it is the critist who make real change to people’s interest in some level. The critic who guide the way to lead the leader to selected books, even though they would make mistakes sometimes, from another aspect to explain my point is that we should be critical with the critic, never believe everything being told, there is old saying that the
if you believe everything in the book, then you would rather had no book. （你最后几句是在论证critic还是在说读书呀？）



The artist who conducted pieces of wonderful works；（用AND）the critic who elevate those artist' wonderful works, both of them are nessary and what is more, both of them give society something of lasting value, but in different aspects. The artist gave people more pleasure and enjoyment, but the critic provide us
more about how to be critical thinking, how to doubt the forerunner, came out with several questions quetioning their works. It is deniable to admit that only artist have some lasting value.

楼主，问个问题，你是从中文翻译成英文的吧？你挺能写的，但是感觉好多句子你都是初中生那种翻译方法词对词，这样不对，语法错误太多。另外，你的标点符号注意，还有单复数，里面有些我都没改出来。下回把字体弄成4号的，方便看。还有，积累句型，你和我一样，没有句型和单词积累。

112810asUID: 2646494

Art is one of the fundamental possessions in people's lifes. The work of art(artist) gives people insightful inspiration and impart on the emotion, people use art = to communicate with each other, to reflesh themselves, to get reborn, which we call the lasting value of the art(把这个调整到=处). The critic, who evaluate those works, give the audience guidence, criticilze the thoughts and have deeper understanding of the works than most common people do,which（指什么？） is another kind of lasting value . Hence, both the critists and artists both have something of lasting value.（改为both the critists and artists give society something of lasting value）


As the beginning,artist, as the gardener of the beautiful garden, is the resource of the creative thinking, and original thinking（改为creative and original thinking）. The gardener decorates the garden to transverse the garden to become a excellent place.The artist deploys their imaginary power, to make the world a better place to live in, by means of painting, music, novels and etc. It is from the music which we can get peaceful and encouragement. It is from novels which we can attain the enjoyment and pleasurement. It is the from painting which(都改为that) we achieve the sense of hope and inspiration. we can not imagine the life without art, therefore, art, the unsubsituate part in our life, providing（provides） lasting values.（3个it is句型，句型重复，主要因为这种句型没有特点）

Secondly, critist, those who evaluate works of art such as novels, films, music, painting, etc,（写二三个就行了） as the guidance of the beautiful garden, who（改为and） show the people around, to find the most fabulous flowers in the garden, also provide some lasting value, as the artist do. Knowing the real function of the critist is the basic to understanding of the point above. Sometimes, from so many kinds and various books, we have confronted anxiety, because we have no idea which one to choose. Here, the critic came, and told us which one is really worthy reading, which one is not. It not only save our a lot of energy, but also, the every master piece would be at our sight as soon as possible.
What is more, critic who know the arts much better than our common people, would providing a new way to translate art work and illustrate the deep meaning of the piece. One of the critic's roles, is that providing better way to understand the works, and give the audiences something brand new view to view those works. Thanks to the critic, we know others' opinions about the art, which may
light up our instinct thinking and widen our sight. From the critic, we know much deeper than before. Consider, a person who has little about the Chinese tradition first time read the 《Red Chamber Dream》，the most likely that he would not know what is the whole story talking about and would be nothing specular. Actually, we knew that every move and every scene has its own meaning and could tell the personality of the character.

But, we neglect the fact that the critists are people, people make mistakes（这个用重句）. It is very（much吧？） likely that the critists have various systems of evaluation due to their different values and beliefs. We also take 《Red Chamber Dream》as an example. It was once a time that listed as the forbidden books according to the critist at that time, but now, it is one of the most famous of Chinese tradition books , called one of the four treasures of the old Chinese, and now only accounts to the people who research on the book as a profession, there will be no less than hundred thousands（第一次见，应该不对）, not to mention the amount of people who read them. The book is the same, but has totally different situations. We assume the critist should be major repossiblily due to the case.
That is why different critists has different opinions about the same books. .
In the long history run, it is the critist who make real change to people’s interest in some level. The critic who guide the way to lead the leader to selected books, even though they would make mistakes sometimes, from another aspect to explain my point is that we should be critical with the critic, never believe everything being told, there is old saying that the
if you believe everything in the book, then you would rather had no book. （你最后几句是在论证critic还是在说读书呀？）



The artist who conducted pieces of wonderful works；（用AND）the critic who elevate those artist' wonderful works, both of them are nessary and what is more, both of them give society something of lasting value, but in different aspects. The artist gave people more pleasure and enjoyment, but the critic provide us
more about how to be critical thinking, how to doubt the forerunner, came out with several questions quetioning their works. It is deniable to admit that only artist have some lasting value.

楼主，问个问题，你是从中文翻译成英文的吧？你挺能写的，但是感觉好多句子你都是初中生那种翻译方法词对词，这样不对，语法错误太多。另外，你的标点符号注意，还有单复数，里面有些我都没改出来。下回把字体弄成4号的，方便看。还有，积累句型，你和我一样，没有句型和单词积累。

112810asUID: 2646494

Art is one of the fundamental possessions in people's lifes. The work of art(artist) gives people insightful inspiration and impart on the emotion, people use art = to communicate with each other, to reflesh themselves, to get reborn, which we call the lasting value of the art(把这个调整到=处). The critic, who evaluate those works, give the audience guidence, criticilze the thoughts and have deeper understanding of the works than most common people do,which（指什么？） is another kind of lasting value . Hence, both the critists and artists both have something of lasting value.（改为both the critists and artists give society something of lasting value）


As the beginning,artist, as the gardener of the beautiful garden, is the resource of the creative thinking, and original thinking（改为creative and original thinking）. The gardener decorates the garden to transverse the garden to become a excellent place.The artist deploys their imaginary power, to make the world a better place to live in, by means of painting, music, novels and etc. It is from the music which we can get peaceful and encouragement. It is from novels which we can attain the enjoyment and pleasurement. It is the from painting which(都改为that) we achieve the sense of hope and inspiration. we can not imagine the life without art, therefore, art, the unsubsituate part in our life, providing（provides） lasting values.（3个it is句型，句型重复，主要因为这种句型没有特点）

Secondly, critist, those who evaluate works of art such as novels, films, music, painting, etc,（写二三个就行了） as the guidance of the beautiful garden, who（改为and） show the people around, to find the most fabulous flowers in the garden, also provide some lasting value, as the artist do. Knowing the real function of the critist is the basic to understanding of the point above. Sometimes, from so many kinds and various books, we have confronted anxiety, because we have no idea which one to choose. Here, the critic came, and told us which one is really worthy reading, which one is not. It not only save our a lot of energy, but also, the every master piece would be at our sight as soon as possible.
What is more, critic who know the arts much better than our common people, would providing a new way to translate art work and illustrate the deep meaning of the piece. One of the critic's roles, is that providing better way to understand the works, and give the audiences something brand new view to view those works. Thanks to the critic, we know others' opinions about the art, which may
light up our instinct thinking and widen our sight. From the critic, we know much deeper than before. Consider, a person who has little about the Chinese tradition first time read the 《Red Chamber Dream》，the most likely that he would not know what is the whole story talking about and would be nothing specular. Actually, we knew that every move and every scene has its own meaning and could tell the personality of the character.

But, we neglect the fact that the critists are people, people make mistakes（这个用重句）. It is very（much吧？） likely that the critists have various systems of evaluation due to their different values and beliefs. We also take 《Red Chamber Dream》as an example. It was once a time that listed as the forbidden books according to the critist at that time, but now, it is one of the most famous of Chinese tradition books , called one of the four treasures of the old Chinese, and now only accounts to the people who research on the book as a profession, there will be no less than hundred thousands（第一次见，应该不对）, not to mention the amount of people who read them. The book is the same, but has totally different situations. We assume the critist should be major repossiblily due to the case.
That is why different critists has different opinions about the same books. .
In the long history run, it is the critist who make real change to people’s interest in some level. The critic who guide the way to lead the leader to selected books, even though they would make mistakes sometimes, from another aspect to explain my point is that we should be critical with the critic, never believe everything being told, there is old saying that the
if you believe everything in the book, then you would rather had no book. （你最后几句是在论证critic还是在说读书呀？）



The artist who conducted pieces of wonderful works；（用AND）the critic who elevate those artist' wonderful works, both of them are nessary and what is more, both of them give society something of lasting value, but in different aspects. The artist gave people more pleasure and enjoyment, but the critic provide us
more about how to be critical thinking, how to doubt the forerunner, came out with several questions quetioning their works. It is deniable to admit that only artist have some lasting value.

楼主，问个问题，你是从中文翻译成英文的吧？你挺能写的，但是感觉好多句子你都是初中生那种翻译方法词对词，这样不对，语法错误太多。另外，你的标点符号注意，还有单复数，里面有些我都没改出来。下回把字体弄成4号的，方便看。还有，积累句型，你和我一样，没有句型和单词积累。

112810asUID: 2646494

Art is one of the fundamental possessions in people's lifes. The work of art(artist) gives people insightful inspiration and impart on the emotion, people use art = to communicate with each other, to reflesh themselves, to get reborn, which we call the lasting value of the art(把这个调整到=处). The critic, who evaluate those works, give the audience guidence, criticilze the thoughts and have deeper understanding of the works than most common people do,which（指什么？） is another kind of lasting value . Hence, both the critists and artists both have something of lasting value.（改为both the critists and artists give society something of lasting value）


As the beginning,artist, as the gardener of the beautiful garden, is the resource of the creative thinking, and original thinking（改为creative and original thinking）. The gardener decorates the garden to transverse the garden to become a excellent place.The artist deploys their imaginary power, to make the world a better place to live in, by means of painting, music, novels and etc. It is from the music which we can get peaceful and encouragement. It is from novels which we can attain the enjoyment and pleasurement. It is the from painting which(都改为that) we achieve the sense of hope and inspiration. we can not imagine the life without art, therefore, art, the unsubsituate part in our life, providing（provides） lasting values.（3个it is句型，句型重复，主要因为这种句型没有特点）

Secondly, critist, those who evaluate works of art such as novels, films, music, painting, etc,（写二三个就行了） as the guidance of the beautiful garden, who（改为and） show the people around, to find the most fabulous flowers in the garden, also provide some lasting value, as the artist do. Knowing the real function of the critist is the basic to understanding of the point above. Sometimes, from so many kinds and various books, we have confronted anxiety, because we have no idea which one to choose. Here, the critic came, and told us which one is really worthy reading, which one is not. It not only save our a lot of energy, but also, the every master piece would be at our sight as soon as possible.
What is more, critic who know the arts much better than our common people, would providing a new way to translate art work and illustrate the deep meaning of the piece. One of the critic's roles, is that providing better way to understand the works, and give the audiences something brand new view to view those works. Thanks to the critic, we know others' opinions about the art, which may
light up our instinct thinking and widen our sight. From the critic, we know much deeper than before. Consider, a person who has little about the Chinese tradition first time read the 《Red Chamber Dream》，the most likely that he would not know what is the whole story talking about and would be nothing specular. Actually, we knew that every move and every scene has its own meaning and could tell the personality of the character.

But, we neglect the fact that the critists are people, people make mistakes（这个用重句）. It is very（much吧？） likely that the critists have various systems of evaluation due to their different values and beliefs. We also take 《Red Chamber Dream》as an example. It was once a time that listed as the forbidden books according to the critist at that time, but now, it is one of the most famous of Chinese tradition books , called one of the four treasures of the old Chinese, and now only accounts to the people who research on the book as a profession, there will be no less than hundred thousands（第一次见，应该不对）, not to mention the amount of people who read them. The book is the same, but has totally different situations. We assume the critist should be major repossiblily due to the case.
That is why different critists has different opinions about the same books. .
In the long history run, it is the critist who make real change to people’s interest in some level. The critic who guide the way to lead the leader to selected books, even though they would make mistakes sometimes, from another aspect to explain my point is that we should be critical with the critic, never believe everything being told, there is old saying that the
if you believe everything in the book, then you would rather had no book. （你最后几句是在论证critic还是在说读书呀？）



The artist who conducted pieces of wonderful works；（用AND）the critic who elevate those artist' wonderful works, both of them are nessary and what is more, both of them give society something of lasting value, but in different aspects. The artist gave people more pleasure and enjoyment, but the critic provide us
more about how to be critical thinking, how to doubt the forerunner, came out with several questions quetioning their works. It is deniable to admit that only artist have some lasting value.

楼主，问个问题，你是从中文翻译成英文的吧？你挺能写的，但是感觉好多句子你都是初中生那种翻译方法词对词，这样不对，语法错误太多。另外，你的标点符号注意，还有单复数，里面有些我都没改出来。下回把字体弄成4号的，方便看。还有，积累句型，你和我一样，没有句型和单词积累。

112810asUID: 2646494

Art is one of the fundamental possessions in people's lifes. The work of art(artist) gives people insightful inspiration and impart on the emotion, people use art = to communicate with each other, to reflesh themselves, to get reborn, which we call the lasting value of the art(把这个调整到=处). The critic, who evaluate those works, give the audience guidence, criticilze the thoughts and have deeper understanding of the works than most common people do,which（指什么？） is another kind of lasting value . Hence, both the critists and artists both have something of lasting value.（改为both the critists and artists give society something of lasting value）


As the beginning,artist, as the gardener of the beautiful garden, is the resource of the creative thinking, and original thinking（改为creative and original thinking）. The gardener decorates the garden to transverse the garden to become a excellent place.The artist deploys their imaginary power, to make the world a better place to live in, by means of painting, music, novels and etc. It is from the music which we can get peaceful and encouragement. It is from novels which we can attain the enjoyment and pleasurement. It is the from painting which(都改为that) we achieve the sense of hope and inspiration. we can not imagine the life without art, therefore, art, the unsubsituate part in our life, providing（provides） lasting values.（3个it is句型，句型重复，主要因为这种句型没有特点）

Secondly, critist, those who evaluate works of art such as novels, films, music, painting, etc,（写二三个就行了） as the guidance of the beautiful garden, who（改为and） show the people around, to find the most fabulous flowers in the garden, also provide some lasting value, as the artist do. Knowing the real function of the critist is the basic to understanding of the point above. Sometimes, from so many kinds and various books, we have confronted anxiety, because we have no idea which one to choose. Here, the critic came, and told us which one is really worthy reading, which one is not. It not only save our a lot of energy, but also, the every master piece would be at our sight as soon as possible.
What is more, critic who know the arts much better than our common people, would providing a new way to translate art work and illustrate the deep meaning of the piece. One of the critic's roles, is that providing better way to understand the works, and give the audiences something brand new view to view those works. Thanks to the critic, we know others' opinions about the art, which may
light up our instinct thinking and widen our sight. From the critic, we know much deeper than before. Consider, a person who has little about the Chinese tradition first time read the 《Red Chamber Dream》，the most likely that he would not know what is the whole story talking about and would be nothing specular. Actually, we knew that every move and every scene has its own meaning and could tell the personality of the character.

But, we neglect the fact that the critists are people, people make mistakes（这个用重句）. It is very（much吧？） likely that the critists have various systems of evaluation due to their different values and beliefs. We also take 《Red Chamber Dream》as an example. It was once a time that listed as the forbidden books according to the critist at that time, but now, it is one of the most famous of Chinese tradition books , called one of the four treasures of the old Chinese, and now only accounts to the people who research on the book as a profession, there will be no less than hundred thousands（第一次见，应该不对）, not to mention the amount of people who read them. The book is the same, but has totally different situations. We assume the critist should be major repossiblily due to the case.
That is why different critists has different opinions about the same books. .
In the long history run, it is the critist who make real change to people’s interest in some level. The critic who guide the way to lead the leader to selected books, even though they would make mistakes sometimes, from another aspect to explain my point is that we should be critical with the critic, never believe everything being told, there is old saying that the
if you believe everything in the book, then you would rather had no book. （你最后几句是在论证critic还是在说读书呀？）



The artist who conducted pieces of wonderful works；（用AND）the critic who elevate those artist' wonderful works, both of them are nessary and what is more, both of them give society something of lasting value, but in different aspects. The artist gave people more pleasure and enjoyment, but the critic provide us
more about how to be critical thinking, how to doubt the forerunner, came out with several questions quetioning their works. It is deniable to admit that only artist have some lasting value.

楼主，问个问题，你是从中文翻译成英文的吧？你挺能写的，但是感觉好多句子你都是初中生那种翻译方法词对词，这样不对，语法错误太多。另外，你的标点符号注意，还有单复数，里面有些我都没改出来。下回把字体弄成4号的，方便看。还有，积累句型，你和我一样，没有句型和单词积累。

112810asUID: 2646494

Art is one of the fundamental possessions in people's lifes. The work of art(artist) gives people insightful inspiration and impart on the emotion, people use art = to communicate with each other, to reflesh themselves, to get reborn, which we call the lasting value of the art(把这个调整到=处). The critic, who evaluate those works, give the audience guidence, criticilze the thoughts and have deeper understanding of the works than most common people do,which（指什么？） is another kind of lasting value . Hence, both the critists and artists both have something of lasting value.（改为both the critists and artists give society something of lasting value）


As the beginning,artist, as the gardener of the beautiful garden, is the resource of the creative thinking, and original thinking（改为creative and original thinking）. The gardener decorates the garden to transverse the garden to become a excellent place.The artist deploys their imaginary power, to make the world a better place to live in, by means of painting, music, novels and etc. It is from the music which we can get peaceful and encouragement. It is from novels which we can attain the enjoyment and pleasurement. It is the from painting which(都改为that) we achieve the sense of hope and inspiration. we can not imagine the life without art, therefore, art, the unsubsituate part in our life, providing（provides） lasting values.（3个it is句型，句型重复，主要因为这种句型没有特点）

Secondly, critist, those who evaluate works of art such as novels, films, music, painting, etc,（写二三个就行了） as the guidance of the beautiful garden, who（改为and） show the people around, to find the most fabulous flowers in the garden, also provide some lasting value, as the artist do. Knowing the real function of the critist is the basic to understanding of the point above. Sometimes, from so many kinds and various books, we have confronted anxiety, because we have no idea which one to choose. Here, the critic came, and told us which one is really worthy reading, which one is not. It not only save our a lot of energy, but also, the every master piece would be at our sight as soon as possible.
What is more, critic who know the arts much better than our common people, would providing a new way to translate art work and illustrate the deep meaning of the piece. One of the critic's roles, is that providing better way to understand the works, and give the audiences something brand new view to view those works. Thanks to the critic, we know others' opinions about the art, which may
light up our instinct thinking and widen our sight. From the critic, we know much deeper than before. Consider, a person who has little about the Chinese tradition first time read the 《Red Chamber Dream》，the most likely that he would not know what is the whole story talking about and would be nothing specular. Actually, we knew that every move and every scene has its own meaning and could tell the personality of the character.

But, we neglect the fact that the critists are people, people make mistakes（这个用重句）. It is very（much吧？） likely that the critists have various systems of evaluation due to their different values and beliefs. We also take 《Red Chamber Dream》as an example. It was once a time that listed as the forbidden books according to the critist at that time, but now, it is one of the most famous of Chinese tradition books , called one of the four treasures of the old Chinese, and now only accounts to the people who research on the book as a profession, there will be no less than hundred thousands（第一次见，应该不对）, not to mention the amount of people who read them. The book is the same, but has totally different situations. We assume the critist should be major repossiblily due to the case.
That is why different critists has different opinions about the same books. .
In the long history run, it is the critist who make real change to people’s interest in some level. The critic who guide the way to lead the leader to selected books, even though they would make mistakes sometimes, from another aspect to explain my point is that we should be critical with the critic, never believe everything being told, there is old saying that the
if you believe everything in the book, then you would rather had no book. （你最后几句是在论证critic还是在说读书呀？）



The artist who conducted pieces of wonderful works；（用AND）the critic who elevate those artist' wonderful works, both of them are nessary and what is more, both of them give society something of lasting value, but in different aspects. The artist gave people more pleasure and enjoyment, but the critic provide us
more about how to be critical thinking, how to doubt the forerunner, came out with several questions quetioning their works. It is deniable to admit that only artist have some lasting value.

楼主，问个问题，你是从中文翻译成英文的吧？你挺能写的，但是感觉好多句子你都是初中生那种翻译方法词对词，这样不对，语法错误太多。另外，你的标点符号注意，还有单复数，里面有些我都没改出来。下回把字体弄成4号的，方便看。还有，积累句型，你和我一样，没有句型和单词积累。

112810asUID: 2646494

Art is one of the fundamental possessions in people's lifes. The work of art(artist) gives people insightful inspiration and impart on the emotion, people use art = to communicate with each other, to reflesh themselves, to get reborn, which we call the lasting value of the art(把这个调整到=处). The critic, who evaluate those works, give the audience guidence, criticilze the thoughts and have deeper understanding of the works than most common people do,which（指什么？） is another kind of lasting value . Hence, both the critists and artists both have something of lasting value.（改为both the critists and artists give society something of lasting value）


As the beginning,artist, as the gardener of the beautiful garden, is the resource of the creative thinking, and original thinking（改为creative and original thinking）. The gardener decorates the garden to transverse the garden to become a excellent place.The artist deploys their imaginary power, to make the world a better place to live in, by means of painting, music, novels and etc. It is from the music which we can get peaceful and encouragement. It is from novels which we can attain the enjoyment and pleasurement. It is the from painting which(都改为that) we achieve the sense of hope and inspiration. we can not imagine the life without art, therefore, art, the unsubsituate part in our life, providing（provides） lasting values.（3个it is句型，句型重复，主要因为这种句型没有特点）

Secondly, critist, those who evaluate works of art such as novels, films, music, painting, etc,（写二三个就行了） as the guidance of the beautiful garden, who（改为and） show the people around, to find the most fabulous flowers in the garden, also provide some lasting value, as the artist do. Knowing the real function of the critist is the basic to understanding of the point above. Sometimes, from so many kinds and various books, we have confronted anxiety, because we have no idea which one to choose. Here, the critic came, and told us which one is really worthy reading, which one is not. It not only save our a lot of energy, but also, the every master piece would be at our sight as soon as possible.
What is more, critic who know the arts much better than our common people, would providing a new way to translate art work and illustrate the deep meaning of the piece. One of the critic's roles, is that providing better way to understand the works, and give the audiences something brand new view to view those works. Thanks to the critic, we know others' opinions about the art, which may
light up our instinct thinking and widen our sight. From the critic, we know much deeper than before. Consider, a person who has little about the Chinese tradition first time read the 《Red Chamber Dream》，the most likely that he would not know what is the whole story talking about and would be nothing specular. Actually, we knew that every move and every scene has its own meaning and could tell the personality of the character.

But, we neglect the fact that the critists are people, people make mistakes（这个用重句）. It is very（much吧？） likely that the critists have various systems of evaluation due to their different values and beliefs. We also take 《Red Chamber Dream》as an example. It was once a time that listed as the forbidden books according to the critist at that time, but now, it is one of the most famous of Chinese tradition books , called one of the four treasures of the old Chinese, and now only accounts to the people who research on the book as a profession, there will be no less than hundred thousands（第一次见，应该不对）, not to mention the amount of people who read them. The book is the same, but has totally different situations. We assume the critist should be major repossiblily due to the case.
That is why different critists has different opinions about the same books. .
In the long history run, it is the critist who make real change to people’s interest in some level. The critic who guide the way to lead the leader to selected books, even though they would make mistakes sometimes, from another aspect to explain my point is that we should be critical with the critic, never believe everything being told, there is old saying that the
if you believe everything in the book, then you would rather had no book. （你最后几句是在论证critic还是在说读书呀？）



The artist who conducted pieces of wonderful works；（用AND）the critic who elevate those artist' wonderful works, both of them are nessary and what is more, both of them give society something of lasting value, but in different aspects. The artist gave people more pleasure and enjoyment, but the critic provide us
more about how to be critical thinking, how to doubt the forerunner, came out with several questions quetioning their works. It is deniable to admit that only artist have some lasting value.

楼主，问个问题，你是从中文翻译成英文的吧？你挺能写的，但是感觉好多句子你都是初中生那种翻译方法词对词，这样不对，语法错误太多。另外，你的标点符号注意，还有单复数，里面有些我都没改出来。下回把字体弄成4号的，方便看。还有，积累句型，你和我一样，没有句型和单词积累。

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Art is one of the fundamental possessions in people's lifes. The work of art(artist) gives people insightful inspiration and impart on the emotion, people use art = to communicate with each other, to reflesh themselves, to get reborn, which we call the lasting value of the art(把这个调整到=处). The critic, who evaluate those works, give the audience guidence, criticilze the thoughts and have deeper understanding of the works than most common people do,which（指什么？） is another kind of lasting value . Hence, both the critists and artists both have something of lasting value.（改为both the critists and artists give society something of lasting value）


As the beginning,artist, as the gardener of the beautiful garden, is the resource of the creative thinking, and original thinking（改为creative and original thinking）. The gardener decorates the garden to transverse the garden to become a excellent place.The artist deploys their imaginary power, to make the world a better place to live in, by means of painting, music, novels and etc. It is from the music which we can get peaceful and encouragement. It is from novels which we can attain the enjoyment and pleasurement. It is the from painting which(都改为that) we achieve the sense of hope and inspiration. we can not imagine the life without art, therefore, art, the unsubsituate part in our life, providing（provides） lasting values.（3个it is句型，句型重复，主要因为这种句型没有特点）

Secondly, critist, those who evaluate works of art such as novels, films, music, painting, etc,（写二三个就行了） as the guidance of the beautiful garden, who（改为and） show the people around, to find the most fabulous flowers in the garden, also provide some lasting value, as the artist do. Knowing the real function of the critist is the basic to understanding of the point above. Sometimes, from so many kinds and various books, we have confronted anxiety, because we have no idea which one to choose. Here, the critic came, and told us which one is really worthy reading, which one is not. It not only save our a lot of energy, but also, the every master piece would be at our sight as soon as possible.
What is more, critic who know the arts much better than our common people, would providing a new way to translate art work and illustrate the deep meaning of the piece. One of the critic's roles, is that providing better way to understand the works, and give the audiences something brand new view to view those works. Thanks to the critic, we know others' opinions about the art, which may
light up our instinct thinking and widen our sight. From the critic, we know much deeper than before. Consider, a person who has little about the Chinese tradition first time read the 《Red Chamber Dream》，the most likely that he would not know what is the whole story talking about and would be nothing specular. Actually, we knew that every move and every scene has its own meaning and could tell the personality of the character.

But, we neglect the fact that the critists are people, people make mistakes（这个用重句）. It is very（much吧？） likely that the critists have various systems of evaluation due to their different values and beliefs. We also take 《Red Chamber Dream》as an example. It was once a time that listed as the forbidden books according to the critist at that time, but now, it is one of the most famous of Chinese tradition books , called one of the four treasures of the old Chinese, and now only accounts to the people who research on the book as a profession, there will be no less than hundred thousands（第一次见，应该不对）, not to mention the amount of people who read them. The book is the same, but has totally different situations. We assume the critist should be major repossiblily due to the case.
That is why different critists has different opinions about the same books. .
In the long history run, it is the critist who make real change to people’s interest in some level. The critic who guide the way to lead the leader to selected books, even though they would make mistakes sometimes, from another aspect to explain my point is that we should be critical with the critic, never believe everything being told, there is old saying that the
if you believe everything in the book, then you would rather had no book. （你最后几句是在论证critic还是在说读书呀？）



The artist who conducted pieces of wonderful works；（用AND）the critic who elevate those artist' wonderful works, both of them are nessary and what is more, both of them give society something of lasting value, but in different aspects. The artist gave people more pleasure and enjoyment, but the critic provide us
more about how to be critical thinking, how to doubt the forerunner, came out with several questions quetioning their works. It is deniable to admit that only artist have some lasting value.

楼主，问个问题，你是从中文翻译成英文的吧？你挺能写的，但是感觉好多句子你都是初中生那种翻译方法词对词，这样不对，语法错误太多。另外，你的标点符号注意，还有单复数，里面有些我都没改出来。下回把字体弄成4号的，方便看。还有，积累句型，你和我一样，没有句型和单词积累。

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