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"It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value."
Key words:artist,critic. society,lasting value.
1. What does X mean? (Definition)
Society:a body of humans seen as a community.
Artist:ones who creates and propose arts
Critic:ones who offers reasoned analysis and opinion.
Lasting value:the value is eternal or bring lasting influence.
2. What are the various features of X? (Description)

Critic:they are sharp when they comment things and endeavor to keep equality.
Lasting value:eternal.
Artist:have enthusiasm in creating arts and satisfy themselves by it.
3. What are the component parts of X? (Simple Analysis)
4. How is X made or done? (Process Analysis)

Artist:have good skills in his fields and well known by his famous arts.
Crtic:must know what he will critic about well and have wide knowledge to comment things in different aspects.
Lasting value:those works of art can affect the contemporary arts fields or learnt anf imitated by people now.
5. How should X be made or done? (Directional Analysis)

Lasting value:those works of arts or the genres is significant to continue.
6. What is the essential function of X? (Functional Analysis).

Artist:by works of arts to show their ideas in arts,and give people aesthetical values.
Critic:to comment things,make them easier to be known by the public,guide people to enjoy them
7. What are the causes of X? (Causal Analysis)

Artisit have strong interest in arts and the public needs arts.
Critic: public need people who can guide them to know arts better.
8. What are the consequences of X? (Causal Analysis)
9. What are the types of X? (Classification)

Artist:works on writing,movies,sculpture,etc
10. How is X like or unlike Y? (Comparison)
11. What is the present status of X? (Comparison)

Artist: Isadora Duncanthe constructor of modern dance


Vincent van Gogh(famous painter.killed himself,the main reason is few people praise or pay attention to his works,onlt critiques make him depreesion nervous
Comparison,both creates lating values.
12. What is the significance of X? (Interpretation)

Artist:influence people ,give lasting values by works of arts

13. What are the facts about X? (Reportage)
14. How did X happen? (Narration)
15. What kind of person is X? (Characterization/Profile)

Artist:those have great enthusiasm and interest in arts,creats works to express their minds.
Critic:who are very sharp to comment things. To offer reasoned opinion to guide people.
16. What is my personal response to X? (Reflection)

Artist:Mad, enthusiastic
Critic:sharp sometimes a little acerbic,but often fair.
17. What is my memory of X? (Reminiscence)
18. What is the value of X? (Evaluation)

Artist: influence people and give aesthetic values.
Critic:guide people by their reasoned opinions or comments
19. What are the essential major points or features of X? (Summary)
20. What case can be made for or against X? (Persuasion)

Isadora Duncan,Vincent Van Gogh,both influence people until now and provides with values.

"It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value.
大纲:outline
肯定观点
解释LASTING VALUE是什么,是那些有持续影响力的永恒的价值。而不是流行一时的价值。
评论家的作用,通过有条理的品论和分析,指引人们,能方便人们知道了解欣赏艺术作品。有助于区分作品的好坏。他们的评论无疑也是有价值的,但这种评论不会有永恒的影响力。例子:现在很少人关注当时评论家对艺术大师的评论了,而是关注他们本身和作品,
转折,反而是艺术家,不管是当时评论家如何看待他们,他们创造出来永恒的价值。梵高,不被当时评论界接受。邓肯,出道就广受人们称赞。
再升华:艺术家将他们的艺术细胞创作出了杰出的作品。其LASTINGVALUE在于,艺术作品,艺术丰富了人们的生活,提高了人们的眼界,ETC
总之,我们不能忽略评论家的作用,但是创造出真正LASTING VALUE的还是那些艺术家们。

"It is the artist, not the critic, who gives society something of lasting value."

正文:
    I agree with the speaker’s idea that artists give society more lasting value rather than critics do which can be
sustained by the following reasons.

    The lasting value must have two most important features: eternity and wide influence. Eternal value means its value must sustain the test of time,though its value maybe not found at its period;And,wide influence can assure its valuable.the influence can not be too narrowed because wide influence means many people accept it,on the other hand,its valuable for the society.
    Critics are those people who offer reasoned analysis and opinion.In art fields,their comments are useful,which can help select the best works of art for people to appreciate.However,they can not give lasting values.critics’ comments more or less reflect their individual views which are not always fair,and they are often accepted just at their time.contemporary people even do not how some artists commented by criticswho are at their time.
    And,people now pay attention to works of art
themselves rather than critiques. Artists are those ones, full of enthusiasm and passion ,to create their works,they devote themselves to the career,their works carry their soul of their mind,which sometimes give lasting value.Isadora Duncan,a famous artist in dancing,the constructor of modern dance.Her dancing winded over almost every land of the world to publicize her dacing mind.With her every motion and spin applauded by people,and with her publicizing modern dance as a devotee in artist,modern dance is now widely played by us all over the world,and it will be eternal because it is also developing quickly.

    What should be mentioned is that because sometimes critics will treat artists unfairly because of their prejudice which can mislead the society, sometimes even block the way to find the value.But these artists will never be ignored because they also give society last value as one day people start to apreciate them. Vincent Van Gogh,the Dutch painter,the representative artist of post-impressionists,his works never get admitted by critics until ended life with suicide in
depression and poverty.But now, his paintings are
most popular and several are most expensive in the world.

    The value given by artists can enrich human’s life.We live better life as media,dance,painting around us every day,which can help us strength our understanding in the artists. What is more , art is filled with the value of communication,by which we can promote the communication with different countries,and even promote the tourism by attracting people to appreciate the works of arts.
    In sum,though we can not ignore the use of critics because they help society know art better at a certain extent,the artists can give the lasting values to society by their works.
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