是新手,给个评价(issue 25)

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                                                                 是issue的第25个。

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Issue: Anyone can make thingsbigger and more complex, what requires real effort and courage is to move inthe opposite direction--------in other words, to make things as simple aspossible.
This issue istold us an information that things should be acted to be as simple as we can,which is what requires real effort and courage. Although it is widely acceptedthat things in some special realms are completed by pointing to the directionof simplicity, it is unlikely to be true that things of other areas have to beacted toward the opposite direction---the complexity, as a result of satisfyingthe individual or local benefits or some peculiar functions and considering theessences things itself.
The reasons willbe given in details for the following.





Firstly,the way to solve a thing may be from the complexity to simplicity ,whichaccords with the minds of the majority ,in other words ,is most applied to hisor her daily life or study. What’s more, the increasing competitions in kindsof occupations in all over the world request us to improve the efficiency ofwork, create more benefits for company, which requires us to aptly choose andto decide the methods to deal with things .One way is widely adopted thatacting things are pointed at the simple direction is called as the mostefficient and most effective. For example, in a test, if he or she adopts therelatively simple methods to settle questions in examination, then he or shewill have enough time to answer the questions, the higher accurateness, earlier to finish the test than takethe relatively complex ways. Of course, the result is likely that the formeracquire a high score in test.
It is alsoproved by an increasing number of people that the method is significant in somerealms in nowadays work or study. The number of people, who will select timelyto go to the internet by searching for the Google rather than by consulting thedictionary or other traditional ways when resolve a query at hand, is dramaticallyaugmenting.


Secondly, it is no denying that theinterpersonal skills will be more and more crucial for individual in society,and so how to develop and improve the interpersonal skills is the identicalimportant and impending thing. We can easily understand a common truth that wecan rapidly develop our interpersonal skills, and finally turn to be anexcellent interpersonal individual by felicitous and concise expression.
If he or she does well in refining a complexsentence, via altering a complex one to a relatively refined one, then he orshe will probably be without question the most excellent one in community. Heor she, who is capable of managing issues with concise expressions are apt tounderstood by the local in a shorter time than others, is probably accepted andacknowledged by individuals or the local, which will result in succeeding toacquiring a big compact and making a high profit for his or her company. Fromwhat has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that taking asimple way will produce a far-reaching impact on individual.






Nevertheless, on other aspects, the chanceto adopt the simple way is almost unavailable, resulting from the essences orthe especial complexities in issue self. For example, the law one country orlocal has made into effect has to be complex and rigorous and squares the realisticcondition and features of country or local, such as the civil laws or the administrationlaws. Sometimes laws varies from different locations or countries, only in thisway might special issues be rightly deposed as the correlative
laws have brought into effect. If the law issimplicity ---- not exactly tangible or explicit in content, then the sin will beescaped from the laws and can not be necessarily punished, leading to aterribly wicked result, which the evil and justice will be confused.







In
conclusion, dealing with an issue should focusat the essences or benefits issues itself, rather than by naively to makethings move in the simple direction. If one only spares no efforts to makethings simple, not considering the intricacies issue existed in, he or she mayfinally pay an expensive cost.