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发表于 2009-8-13 22:40:53
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本帖最后由 STELLA710 于 2009-8-13 22:45 编辑
作文小組作業 第一次參加 激動 緊張 嚴肅 活潑
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Some people think it's more important to spend more time working than being with family,你的觀點?
Whatever the lifestyle is, since it born, is complicated, containing a great mass of elements as its part which build a whole body. Along with increasingly fierce competition among the contemporary society, people are invariably faced with such a question: how to allot our life time in working and being with family. Which is more essential? When it comes to this dilemma, different people have different opinion due to their distinctive backgrounds and perspectives on this complex issue. With all aspects carefully considered, I am convinced that spending more time in working would better than being with family.
First of all, with the increasing pace in our daily life and work, people should concentrate in their work, If not, which will in return pose a negative impact on financial earnings. For example, one of my sisters has 2 children, and everyday she needs spend much time in teaching children doing homework and playing with them instead of focusing on her job. Every weekend she also needs to bring children to learn the piano and violin. It becomes a daily routine which makes her without a tranquil mood to doing her works. And finally, she has no promotion with her job and now is on the edge of being fired. If she does really have no job, her family will almost collapse and hardly can they live happy, especially she is divorced. So, it is necessary to attach considerable importance to take many efforts and time in working.
Furthermore, due to the significant economic benefits of working, which can offer more life security, and people could get more annual profits. It makes their life more stable and happy. According to a recent survey done by China employment Association (CEA), around 81% of the employees said that the more time they spend in working the more payment they earned. And thus, they could be able to buy some luxury things for their family and themselves. And it could, in some extend, improves the quality of whole family’s life.
Admittedly, the family plays an essential role in our whole life. Nothing can compare with the love of family. But nowadays people are living under this increasingly competitive world which is changing and developing at a faster and faster rate that people need to spend more time in their work or they, in large extent, will be out. No money support the family, even if have much time to accompany family members, finally the family can not be maintain in a comfortable way yet.
To sum up, for what I discussed above, although family is of primary importance to us. And we can not live without the love of family. But also no one can doubt that the essential of work to ordinary people. I therefore reinforce my stand point that people should spend more time in their work than being with family. |
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