trier eleven

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为什么不写issue 16啊，不是很好写，我写的很平淡

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刚模考的就这个~感觉文章没太表达出我的真实想法~

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high levels of a certain metallic element contained in various foods are strongly associated with people who migrated to a new place after childhood. Many of the bones found near the pots at a few sites showed high levels of the metallic element.
这两句话作者到底的assumption是什么？

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1. no efficient conections are proved as the arguer does not offer information about whether bones contained such metallic element are found only at sites where pots are uncovered. if metallic element in bones is identified in a more widespread area than pots are located, the conection between bones and pots are invalid.（ok~你驳的的是骨骼分析的方法）
2. even bones is firmly conected with pots, they can still be traded to these sites rather than by imigration. Perhaps merchants use these pots as container to store food, which contains the metallic element and are sold with pots together. Thus, people could have bought them both.（是对史前人的human skeleton分析啊~不是动物bones啊）
3. manual workers who made these pots can also brought them to many other places for sale. They could be living in their original villeges but make a living at areas where pots are found today.（这点怪怪的~既然pots trade走了，为什么还能在这些pots周围找到含有这种金属的bones？）

arguer意思是这群人带着pots移居别处然后挂了~在pots旁边发现bones里含有金属~说明pots是靠人们migrate吧~

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TOPIC: ISSUE25 - "Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What requires real effort and courage is to move in the opposite direction-in other words, to make things as simple as possible." WORDS: 534 (547)         TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2009-8-16 10:21:29 1.        人的本性将事物简单化。(daily lives： efficient) 2.        人对事物的认知过程是从复杂到简单再到复杂……的循环过程。看上去再简单的事物都有值得研究的价值。(Da Vinci画鸡蛋) 3.        有些时候简单化了反而会出乱子。(NASA, accountant) 逻辑很好！ People having been always seeking for a perfect way to deal with the things they encounter. solve problems once for all.It is human nature to simplify things, which is effective most of the time; however, there is no a fixed model. Admittedly,还没改啊？ it is necessary to simplify things even though they are not that plain. Especially in our daily lives, we want to be more effective and efficient; as a result we find the most crucial parts out and concentrate on the few issues. Such simplifying process can, to a large extent, save our time and energy, and thus we could focus on other issues. We make the washing machine so that we do not need to do the laundry by our own hands; we invented the mobile phones so that we do not need to wait days and nights and even months to hear our parents' voice; we create the Internet so that people can now enjoying sitting in front of the screen, clicking the mouse and waiting for the goods they have purchased to be delivered to their own places. Our keen desire to simplify the things serves to push the world move forward. 没有看出来有什么simplify 的迹象。我想了几个例子：做数学题先弄清楚公式，或者你可以写那个流水线上的盒子里是空的没产品，用吹风机而不是红外的检测方法。 Digging into the process of our learning and recognizing things, we would discover that most of the time, different people's view on disparate things share something in common: from the very beginning, they have so little ideas of the new issue that they regard it as obscure and complex; when they spend some time doing researches on it, they may probably find some rules and begin to take it as a piece of cake; whereas, as they go further, they are startled to find that they should not have been that happy for the project is not that easy as they imagine.APPLAUD！ In reality, there are many factors they failed to consider before; so they do more researches--this is a cyclic process. In other words, whether things are simple or not depends on the degree that people master it. Even a seemingly easy and tiny thing deserves to be explored for the reason that after the research, people may find a new world. Take a vivid example. Da Vinci was made to draw the most "simple" eggs when he started to learn to paint. He was confused about the order made by his teacher at first. The wise teacher told him that the egg seems rather simple, but the lines and the shadow of every egg were different. The teacher was brilliant; she established the foundation of painting of Da Vinci. Indeed, only when one manages to draw an egg well enough can one accomplish other senior tasks. In this sense, even if facing a "simple" task, we should not take it too careless. 画鸡蛋和石膏柱体（plaster cast of cube and cylinder）都是基于世间万物都能简化为简单体，比如脸通常是椭球(ellipsoid)，手是圆柱体等等。 写上这些会更细腻写吧。呵呵 Furthermore, sometimes excessively simplify would trigger mistakes and even tragedies. If driven by the "simplify" nature, the researchers in NASA dare to ignore some minor problems on the satellites or rockets, the astronauts could face huge disasters and even their lives would be threatened. If an accountant dare to neglect some seemingly "useless" data, the overall budget would not be in balance. 着力描写下奋进号会比较爽 In sum, to make things simple is the natural wish of human beings. But simplify is conditional: not all the time could people afford to make things simple; otherwise, it would lead mistakes. 总的来说这一篇逻辑感觉很好。语言还是没什么好说的了，就看考场上能不能保持这样的灵感了。

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high levels of a certain metallic element contained in various foods are strongly associated with people who migrated to a new place after childhood. Many of the bones found near the pots at a few sit ...
emily_feifei 发表于 2009-8-17 11:25

从小吃的食物有金属，有金属骨头的地方又有pots，所以说从小就在有pots的环境中，说明大人是做pots的。

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1. no efficient conections are proved as the arguer does not offer information about whether bones contained such metallic element are found only at sites where pots are uncovered. if metallic element ...
emily_feifei 发表于 2009-8-17 11:42

you got it

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you got it
wk4a 发表于 2009-8-17 12:11

啥啊~你还没回答呢~
2. even bones is firmly conected with pots, they can still be traded to these sites rather than by imigration. Perhaps merchants use these pots as container to store food, which contains the metallic element and are sold with pots together. Thus, people could have bought them both.（是对史前人的human skeleton分析啊~不是动物bones啊）
3. manual workers who made these pots can also brought them to many other places for sale. They could be living in their original villeges but make a living at areas where pots are found today. （这点怪怪的~既然pots trade走了，为什么还能在这些pots周围找到含有这种金属的bones？）

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35# wk4a

TOPIC: ISSUE25 - "Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What requires real effort and courage is to move in the opposite direction-in other words, to make things as simple as possible."
WORDS: 534 (547)         TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2009-8-16 10:21:29
1.        人的本性将事物简单化。(daily lives： efficient)
2.        人对事物的认知过程是从复杂到简单再到复杂……的循环过程。看上去再简单的事物都有值得研究的价值。(Da Vinci画鸡蛋)
3.        有些时候简单化了反而会出乱子。(NASA, accountant)

逻辑很好！

People having been always seeking for a perfect way to deal with the things they encounter. solve problems once for all.It is human nature to simplify things, which is effective most of the time; however, there is no a fixed model.

Admittedly,还没改啊？呃~写急了~忘了~ it is necessary to simplify things even though they are not that plain. Especially in our daily lives, we want to be more effective and efficient; as a result we find the most crucial parts out and concentrate on the few issues. Such simplifying process can, to a large extent, save our time and energy, and thus we could focus on other issues. We make the washing machine so that we do not need to do the laundry by our own hands; we invented the mobile phones so that we do not need to wait days and nights and even months to hear our parents' voice; we create the Internet so that people can now enjoying sitting in front of the screen, clicking the mouse and waiting for the goods they have purchased to be delivered to their own places. Our keen desire to simplify the things serves to push the world move forward.
没有看出来有什么simplify 的迹象。我想了几个例子：做数学题先弄清楚公式，或者你可以写那个流水线上的盒子里是空的没产品，用吹风机而不是红外的检测方法。
确实没有什么关系~数学弄懂公式我觉也不是~哪个是先搞清楚本质。倒是流水线那个你具体说说吧~没太明白~
Digging into the process of our learning and recognizing things, we would discover that most of the time, different people's view on disparate things share something in common: from the very beginning, they have so little ideas of the new issue that they regard it as obscure and complex; when they spend some time doing researches on it, they may probably find some rules and begin to take it as a piece of cake; whereas, as they go further, they are startled to find that they should not have been that happy for the project is not that easy as they imagine.APPLAUD！ In reality, there are many factors they failed to consider before; so they do more researches--this is a cyclic process. In other words, whether things are simple or not depends on the degree that people master it. Even a seemingly easy and tiny thing deserves to be explored for the reason that after the research, people may find a new world. Take a vivid example. Da Vinci was made to draw the most "simple" eggs when he started to learn to paint. He was confused about the order made by his teacher at first. The wise teacher told him that the egg seems rather simple, but the lines and the shadow of every egg were different. The teacher was brilliant; she established the foundation of painting of Da Vinci. Indeed, only when one manages to draw an egg well enough can one accomplish other senior tasks. In this sense, even if facing a "simple" task, we should not take it too careless.
画鸡蛋和石膏柱体（plaster cast of cube and cylinder）都是基于世间万物都能简化为简单体，比如脸通常是椭球(ellipsoid)，手是圆柱体等等。
写上这些会更细腻写吧。呵呵
呵呵~你可是就干这个的啊~
Furthermore, sometimes excessively simplify would trigger mistakes and even tragedies. If driven by the "simplify" nature, the researchers in NASA dare to ignore some minor problems on the satellites or rockets, the astronauts could face huge disasters and even their lives would be threatened. If an accountant dare to neglect some seemingly "useless" data, the overall budget would not be in balance.
着力描写下奋进号会比较爽是那个老是推迟发射就因为老发现点问题的么？
In sum, to make things simple is the natural wish of human beings. But simplify is conditional: not all the time could people afford to make things simple; otherwise, it would lead mistakes.

总的来说这一篇逻辑感觉很好。语言还是没什么好说的了，就看考场上能不能保持这样的灵感了。

emily_feifeiUID: 2626151

刚看economist看到的~appeals to tastes 迎合口味~

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34# emily_feifei

1. no efficient conections are proved as the arguer does not offer information about whether bones contained such metallic element are found only at sites where pots are uncovered. if metallic element in bones is identified in a more widespread area than pots are located, the conection between bones and pots are invalid.（ok~你驳的的是骨骼分析的方法）
2. even bones is firmly conected with pots, they can still be traded to these sites rather than by imigration. Perhaps merchants use these pots as container to store food, which contains the metallic element and are sold with pots together. Thus, people could have bought them both.（是对史前人的human skeleton分析啊~不是动物bones啊）
3. manual workers who made these pots can also brought them to many other places for sale. They could be living in their original villeges but make a living at areas where pots are found today.（这点怪怪的~既然pots trade走了，为什么还能在这些pots周围找到含有这种金属的bones？）

arguer意思是这群人带着pots移居别处然后挂了~在pots旁边发现bones里含有金属~说明pots是靠人们migrate吧~

2.史前人们吃了pots里的食物，有metallic的食物。
3pots traders也是pots maders，到不同的地方去卖，然后挂了

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39# emily_feifei

TOPIC: ISSUE25 - "Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What requires real effort and courage is to move in the opposite direction-in other words, to make things as simple as possible."
WORDS: 534 (547)         TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2009-8-16 10:21:29
1.        人的本性将事物简单化。(daily lives： efficient)
2.        人对事物的认知过程是从复杂到简单再到复杂……的循环过程。看上去再简单的事物都有值得研究的价值。(Da Vinci画鸡蛋)
3.        有些时候简单化了反而会出乱子。(NASA, accountant)

逻辑很好！

People having been always seeking for a perfect way to deal with the things they encounter. solve problems once for all.It is human nature to simplify things, which is effective most of the time; however, there is no a fixed model.

Admittedly,还没改啊？呃~写急了~忘了~ it is necessary to simplify things even though they are not that plain. Especially in our daily lives, we want to be more effective and efficient; as a result we find the most crucial parts out and concentrate on the few issues. Such simplifying process can, to a large extent, save our time and energy, and thus we could focus on other issues. We make the washing machine so that we do not need to do the laundry by our own hands; we invented the mobile phones so that we do not need to wait days and nights and even months to hear our parents' voice; we create the Internet so that people can now enjoying sitting in front of the screen, clicking the mouse and waiting for the goods they have purchased to be delivered to their own places. Our keen desire to simplify the things serves to push the world move forward.
没有看出来有什么simplify 的迹象。我想了几个例子：做数学题先弄清楚公式，或者你可以写那个流水线上的盒子里是空的没产品，用吹风机而不是红外的检测方法。
确实没有什么关系~数学弄懂公式我觉也不是~哪个是先搞清楚本质。倒是流水线那个你具体说说吧~没太明白~

有一个生产香皂的工厂，工厂生产出来的香皂，都装在一个漂亮的纸盒子里。
但是工厂的装香皂的流水线存在一个问题，总是有一些纸盒子，经过流水线以后，香皂没装进去，成了空纸盒子。
要把这些纸盒子全部捡出来是一个很伤脑筋的事，厂长增加了很多工人检查流水线，但是空纸盒还是存在。
这天，厂长去研究所找到一些专家和博士，“你们给我研究出一个装置，能把空纸盒全部捡出来，我出100万”
专家和博士立即成立攻关小组，在经历了半年的艰苦研究，并花费了上千万的资金，终于制造出一种光电扫描器，香皂盒经光电扫描装置扫描后，里面没有香皂的盒子被扫描出来，并且被机械手捡出。
终于解决了这个问题，厂长舒了一口气。
话说另外一家生产香皂的小工厂，也存在同样的空纸盒的问题，另厂长十分恼火。
这天，厂长把几个农民工召集起来“给我找个办法把空纸盒捡出来，否则我把你们都开除了”
农民工聚到一起，想啊想，想了足足有一天的时间。。。。
最后。。。。
一个农民工买来一个大功率的风扇。。。
对着流水线上的香皂盒吹，空香皂盒就这样被吹跑了。
终于解决了这个问题，厂长舒了一口气。

Digging into the process of our learning and recognizing things, we would discover that most of the time, different people's view on disparate things share something in common: from the very beginning, they have so little ideas of the new issue that they regard it as obscure and complex; when they spend some time doing researches on it, they may probably find some rules and begin to take it as a piece of cake; whereas, as they go further, they are startled to find that they should not have been that happy for the project is not that easy as they imagine.APPLAUD！ In reality, there are many factors they failed to consider before; so they do more researches--this is a cyclic process. In other words, whether things are simple or not depends on the degree that people master it. Even a seemingly easy and tiny thing deserves to be explored for the reason that after the research, people may find a new world. Take a vivid example. Da Vinci was made to draw the most "simple" eggs when he started to learn to paint. He was confused about the order made by his teacher at first. The wise teacher told him that the egg seems rather simple, but the lines and the shadow of every egg were different. The teacher was brilliant; she established the foundation of painting of Da Vinci. Indeed, only when one manages to draw an egg well enough can one accomplish other senior tasks. In this sense, even if facing a "simple" task, we should not take it too careless.
画鸡蛋和石膏柱体（plaster cast of cube and cylinder）都是基于世间万物都能简化为简单体，比如脸通常是椭球(ellipsoid)，手是圆柱体等等。
写上这些会更细腻写吧。呵呵
呵呵~你可是就干这个的啊~
Furthermore, sometimes excessively simplify would trigger mistakes and even tragedies. If driven by the "simplify" nature, the researchers in NASA dare to ignore some minor problems on the satellites or rockets, the astronauts could face huge disasters and even their lives would be threatened. If an accountant dare to neglect some seemingly "useless" data, the overall budget would not be in balance.
着力描写下奋进号会比较爽是那个老是推迟发射就因为老发现点问题的么？
都已经爆炸了呢
In sum, to make things simple is the natural wish of human beings. But simplify is conditional: not all the time could people afford to make things simple; otherwise, it would lead mistakes.

总的来说这一篇逻辑感觉很好。语言还是没什么好说的了，就看考场上能不能保持这样的灵感了。

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41# wk4a

呃~第三点的merchant会不会太可怜了~挂路上了~

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42# wk4a

爆炸的是挑战者号啊~
奋进号都顺利回家了~

那个盒子的故事是假的吧~哪个肥皂厂花上千万投资这个~
我倒是想起看到的一个~爱迪生算灯泡容积~他的助手用了一堆公式没算出来~最后爱迪生把灯泡弄水里~就算出来了~
刚查了下~有个版本最后的结语是“青少年学习知识时，要把书本知识和实践结合起来，才能学得活，记得住，更便于应用。”

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哈~我爱死的哈利波特还有地方没下线！我明天考完就要冲去看！