TOPIC 15 5t要是碰上列举题就认命了

归来的虎子UID: 181060

NO.5   Topic: 15   Time Consumed: 26min


  People are regularly regarded lucky when they have a good neighbor. However, up to the question that what qualities make a good neighbor, people always tend to have different opinions. As far as I am concerned, I hold the belief that despite many other candidates, there are three necessities that name the one who live near me “a good neighbor.”

  The most critical characteristics I define a good neighbor goes to the ability of understanding others. A good neighbor should be specialized in understanding some tiny mistakes his/her neighbors have made and give his/her pardon to these things. That is, he would not get angered by kids in the community stepping on his/her beloved grass garden because he/she knows that they are still young; he would not complain about others mistakenly took his/her morning newspaper because they did not do that on purpose.

  Another striking quality which should be part of a good neighbor is that he/she is always be willing and ready to help people living near him/her. He/she would ask you to leave your pets to them when you are on a long journey and keep an eye on your house in case there are someone who would break into it. They would be happy to offer you help, delivering your children to school if you are busy at that day.

  Furthermore, a good neighbor should be kindly enough to think by your sides. Besides warm-hearted when you are asking for help, they would voluntarily lend you some tools for painting your house when they realized that you are running low for that. They yould bought you some daily necessities when they learned you have a full schedule on your work these days. They would stand with your noisy celebration party because they know you got a raise on your job and you would apologize to them the next morning.

  In conclusion, a good neighbor should have many qualities, especially understanding and tolerance each other, being warm-hearted, and the merit of often thinking by others’ side. In a word, a good neighbor is a person who is difficult to find, but once you have one, your life would be more comfortable and enjoyable thanks to him.


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westcowerUID: 2123051

给个邮箱吧,把我修改的情况发给你

归来的虎子UID: 181060

0472430@fudan.edu.cn

many thanks!

susanlytUID: 2190838

People are regularly regarded lucky when they have a good neighbor. However, up to the question that what qualities make a good neighbor, people always tend to have different opinions. As far as I am concerned, I hold the belief that despite many other candidates, there are three necessities that name the one who live（lives） near me “a good neighbor.”

  The most critical characteristics I define a good neighbor goes to the ability of understanding others. A good neighbor should be specialized in understanding some tiny mistakes his/her neighbors have made and give his/her pardon to these things. That is, he（这一段都是用his/her的，这个he与下文不一致哦～而且个人认为，his/her 用太多不太好，或者试试用其他人称：如they，their） would not get angered by （或者be angry with 会好些）kids in the community stepping on his/her beloved grass garden because he/she knows that they are still young; he would not complain about others mistakenly took his/her morning newspaper because they did not do that on purpose.

Another striking quality which should be part of a good neighbor is that he/she is always be willing and ready to help people living near him/her. He/she would ask you to leave your pets to them when you are on a long journey and keep an eye on your house in case there are（is） someone who would break into it. They would be happy to offer you help, delivering your children to school if you are busy at that day.

Furthermore, a good neighbor should be kindly enough to think by your sides. Besides warm-hearted when you are asking for help, they would voluntarily lend you some tools for painting your house when they realized that you are running low for that. They yould bought（would buy） you some daily necessities when they learned you have a full schedule on your work these days. They would stand with your noisy celebration party because they know you got a raise on your job and you would apologize to them the next morning.

  In conclusion, a good neighbor should have many qualities, especially understanding and tolerance each other, being warm-hearted, and the merit of often thinking by others’ side. In a word, a good neighbor is a person who is difficult to find, but once you have one, your life would be more comfortable and enjoyable thanks to him.

楼主的文章写得很不错哦，例子都很详细，每个quality都很好地展开～
以偶的一点浅薄的认识，s/he  his/her这类词还是少用的好～试试用别的代替
但总体来说楼主的文章很不错哦～

如果楼主有时间，欢迎来拍拍我的哦～:)
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归来的虎子UID: 181060

thanks to susanlyt!

lanccyUID: 2156906

你好啊，你的文章我看过好几遍了，真得很不错啊。
我又写了两篇举例的文，有空来拍拍啊
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768504935

归来的虎子UID: 181060

文章看过了，楼上作文词汇量很牛了

westcowerUID: 2123051

People are regularly regarded luckily when they have a good neighbor. However, up to the question what qualities make a good neighbor, people always tend to have different opinions. As far as I am concerned, despite many other candidates, there are three necessities that name the one who live near me “a good neighbor.”

  The most critical characteristics I define a good neighbor is  the ability of understanding others. A good neighbor should forgive some tiny mistakes his/her neighbors have made. That is, he would not be angry by kids in the community stepping on his/her beloved grass garden because of youth; he would not complain about others mistakes,such as taking his/her morning newspaper because they did not do that on purpose.

Another striking quality which should be part of a good neighbor is that he/she is always be willing and ready to help people living near him/her. He/she would ask me to leave my pets when I am on a long journey and keep an eye on my house in case there are someone who break into it. They would be happy to offer their help, delivering your children to school if I am busy at that day.
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  Furthermore, a good neighbor should be kindly enough to stand on my feet . Besides legency when I ask for help, they would voluntarily lend you some tools for painting your house when they realized that I am  running low for that. They would bring me some daily necessities when they learned you have a full schedule on my work these days. They would stand with your noisy of celebration parties because they know I get a raise and i would apologize next morning.


In fact, if I want to have a good neighbor who have such good quilities, I should first do what I want them do .
In conclusion, a good neighbor should have many qualities, especially understanding and tolerant each other, being warm-hearted, and the merit of often thinking by others’ side. In a word, a good neighbor is a person who is difficult to find, but once we have one, our life would be more comfortable and enjoyable thanks to him.

westcowerUID: 2123051

楼我改的.一直没等到你的邮箱

归来的虎子UID: 181060

邮箱我留在三楼了，可能你没看到，不过还是谢谢了！