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发表于 2006-6-15 07:27:20 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
TOPIC: ISSUE208 - "The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."
WORDS: 320          TIME: 上午 12:45:00          DATE: 2006-6-15
1、        从一个人的外表能判断她或他的情绪、心理状态;
2、        从一个人的外表能判断社会的观念;
3、        不可否认,还有其他因素需要考虑;

When i was engaged in this issue, I found there is a controversy lying in it. Some people contend that the way by which one looks, dresses, and acts frequently reveals his or her attitudes. What’s more, we can discern a society’s ideas and values by the appearance and behavior. However, some people hold the opposite view. Insofar as I can see, i fundamentally agree with this standpoint for to some extend I believe the external phenomena reflect the internal state, such as mood, attitudes ,interests, even a society's ideas.

Firstly, it is easy for us to judge an individual's attitude and interests according to his or her look , dress and so on. As we all know, we, human beings, are the highest creators in the nature; we have the most complex mental organizations to generate free wills. Consequently, the external actions are determined by our psychological status. For example, during the period of bad mood, we might lose interest in anything, and looks like dismay. Whereas, when we devote ourselves into something interested, such as go to a party, journey, we are always full of passion and vitality. We would like to wear with hilarious dressing, smiling all the time. Though the behaviors are affected by many factors, we can not deny that the psychological status has played a critical role in determination.   

Expand the assertion to a broad realm; it is also a quick way to tell from the appearance and behavior of its people to learn about a society's ideas and values. For instance, hippie, occurred in 1950's American, wore long hair and grew beard. Young woman dressed like peasants and wore psychedelic colors. All of them seemed dirty, drugged and disrespect of elders and society at large. Their looks and appearances indicate they would oppose and reject  the conventional standards and customers of their society, and by this way they show avocation of  the extreme liberalism in sociopolitical attitude and lifestyle, even ethic standard. Since Happie is represent of the pioneer of America from 1950 to 1960, their looks and appearance can mirror the ideas and values of their country at that time. There are parallels with domestic circumstance. Comparing the dressing style of 1960s to 1990s in china, we will find interesting phenomena. In the former period, people are confined to three colors when they choose their costumes that are black, white and grey. Their personalities were suppressed by collectivism during the "cultural revolution”. A sweeping reform launched in the 1978 greatly emancipated people's mind and behaviors. The Chinese began getting more concerned about their personal interests and favorites, which can also reflect on the appearance. As a result, it is possible for researchers to probe into the contemporary ideas or cultures according to the people’s appearance.

However, the appearance or look does not make up the whole externality of an individual. To understand contemporary culture of a society, analyzing the activities of the people may be the most easy and quick way but not the most effective one. Because an effective one not only means a quick observation but also a comprehensive understand, whereas mere look, dress, act is insufficient. The appearance, with variable and superficial deficiency, hampers people to learn the essential ideas of a society.  What have been formed into the social ideas are those that are lasting and profound.

All in all , as for the feature of a society, including both the externality and internality, acquiring a effective comprehension of it, a combination both its citizens’ appearance, looks, acts and other factors study is needed.
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再不交作业,芹菜会批评我滴、、、、、


syllabus:
1, 可以根据人们的穿着,饮食来确定他们的信仰以及整个社会的价值观,举例:穆斯林
2,人们的行为反映他们的兴趣,举例,美国人喜欢运动,日本勤奋,法国浪漫
3,但是,仅仅通过外表很难完全的反映一个社会,举例,移民较多的国家,如美国。

TOPIC: ISSUE208 - "The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."
WORDS: 404          TIME: 0:45:00          DATE: 2006-6-15

I fundamentally agree with the statement that the way people look,dress and act  can reveals their attitudes and interests, and then shows a society's ideas and values.

First of all, the appearence and behavior of people are influenced by religions in many countries, and the religion embraced by a society can go further to determine the society's ideas and values. For example, Muslems would be recognized by their food and dress. They would like to choose white tradidtional dress and  there would be some time when they are not allowed to eat meat every month. From this point we can conclude their attitudes, especially about the religion. Moreover, generally speaking,  Moslem countries have similar values so we can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearence of its people.

Secondly, we can also guess people's interests according their act or look. When we are comparing different countries' people, the prinsiple is more apparent. For example, most of American people like simple and healthy life style, and they  play sports more than other people. Often we can see people in the USA wear sports dress and exercise, this would be related with the value of American people, that is, they like to challenge and keep a optimistic attitude about life. Also, from the way of working we can know that Japan is a diligent people and from acts of French people, especially of the young , we can conclude that France is a romantic people.

However, observing the appearence and behavior of people is not an absolute method to reveals their attitudes and interests, therefore not able to show a society's ideas without any flaws. Countries with many immigrations are hard to conclude their  values because various of values are existing together in their society. For example, we can find a few characters of American people and the major value in the USA, however, if we want to analyze in detail the ideas and values of American people, we would find just observing people's outlook and act is far from enough, because it is impossible to generalize so many racies completely according their dress, look or act. In order to know the real situations in a society, we should take more complex factors into consideration.

In sum, under most circumstances we can conclude a society's ideas and valuse by observing the appearance and behavior of its people, but the principle does not apply to all situations and to know better about a society we should pay attention to considering other factors.
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发表于 2006-6-15 13:10:35 |只看该作者
TOPIC: ISSUE208 - "The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."

同意,让步

一人的穿着和行为体现态度和兴趣
V1 职业。艺术家穿着比较随意,自由,代表他们的创造力;典型的白领穿着正式,得体,这要求他们懂得礼仪,工作严谨认真。
V2 性格。严肃的人穿着正式,衣服款式陈,颜色单调; 开朗的人会选择活泼明快的颜色;开放的人善于接受新的事物,穿着前卫。
V3 心情。人们在心情愉快的时候大多会打扮自己,比如女孩子参加舞会。而在悲伤压抑的时候会没有心思在意穿着。

二社会是由人组成的,所以人们的态度和兴趣能反映出社会的价值观,所以通过衣着和行为能观察出人们的兴趣和态度,也能看出社会的价值观。
V1 人们的态度能反映社会的理念和价值。古希腊人们喜欢艺术和科学,并出现了大批的艺术家和科学家,这反映了当时的一种进步,自由的氛围和崇尚科学艺术,崇尚创造的理念和价值。
V2 通过衣着能看出人们的态度和兴趣,所以也能洞察到整个社会的理念和价值。现在朝鲜和文革时期的中国,人们只穿军装,颜色单调款式陈旧,反应了一种思想的僵化,创造精神被压抑,半军事化的状态。

三但是应该承认衣着和行为并不是一个人的全部,通过衣着和态度来判断一个人是片面和不合理的。对于社会也是这样。
V1 衣着是思想的外在表现,思想决定衣着和行为,衣服只是思想的表现的很多方式中的一种
V2 通过衣着和行为无法完全判定一个人

During the recent decades of years, people are paying more and more attention on the way we dress and act. It seems that appearance and what we do can reveal our values and interest. Well , I believe that how people dress themselves and their behavior can not only tell their interests and values, but also reveal the ideas and values of their society.

Firstly, the way people dress and behave can show their attitude and interest, as well as their occupation, character and can also whether they are in a good or bad mood. From the occupation aspect, a while collar may dress formal suit during their work time in the company showing his decency and the strict attitude toward his work; an artist are always dressing in a particular and exotic way, they may have long hair dressing quite differently from others, which may show their  unparalleled creativity and unique character. Let's get to the character aspect. A strict man may dress in an antique way or in unfashionable suit, revealing his reluctance to accept the fashion and some other latest things; a happy girl of elastic temperament would like to dress in bright and brisk colors, which can add her happiness and delight. Besides, when in a bad mood people would not tend to dress themselves deliberately, but when in a good mood, a girl, for instance going to a party would rather spending hours in choosing a dress from her wardrobe. Appearance can indeed tell us something about a person.

Appearance can also reveals the idea and value of a society. Society is consists of different individuals, thus individuals' thought and idea is actually the society's value. Residents in the ancient Greece advocated art and science, which represents a trend then, freedom of person's thought and the passion and determination in  exploring the nature. Thus appearance can tell persons' interest and attitude as well as the value of their society. People in North Korea all dress in uniform, with only a few dull colors, black or grey, as well as hairstyle, are all quite the same. Their action and remarks are also uniformed. People can not afford to buy clothes, and they not allowed dress in a diverse way. This strange way they dress and behave reflects the terrible governance of this nation, rude and savage, and the nature of the nation, lacking of creativity, also their undeveloped economy. In contrast, China, which also suffered that savage period called ?The Great Cultural Revolution?, has undergone a dramatic development since its ?open and reform policy? came into effect in the end of the 1970s. People will not suffer from their constraint thought any longer, and get ride of any autocrat of the leader. Thus people can dress in different styles of clothes and in bright color. Each individual's attitude aggregate to the values of the society which can be reflected by their appearance.

One misconception is that appearance and behavior can reflect the whole nature of a person. Admittedly they can represent person's attitude and interests, and it will also lead us to a superficial way to understand a person or a society. Appearance and behavior are such exterior features that can not be used to percept the nature. To comprehend a society, we should study it from every aspect and collect more information, not just confined in that outside characters.

To sum up, appearance and behavior are quite essential for us to understand a person or a society,  but we should not be confined to those superficial things. Only by knowing from different aspect can we percept the interest or attitudes of a person or a society's values.
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发表于 2006-6-15 15:07:59 |只看该作者
提纲:   ++ -
衣着反映人的性格(T-shirt图案 颜色 饰品);
行为反映价值观 (道德水平 犯罪 社会民主程度);
不完全,有误导性(外交场合 人是不同的)

Recently personal characteristics which are paid attention to usually become a mayor component of the contemporary society. It is a controversy debated among the public that converges in two opinions whether these properties can portray a society's believes. As for me, I consider that there is a relationship between the attitudes and the exteriors of people. In the following two respects of the appearance and behavior, the specific reasons will be listed.

In the first place, the appearance of individuals can reflect their attitudes and interests more or less in modern society. On one hand, seldom are garments totally the same for different persons. For instance, in summer seasons T-shirts become a mainstream of clothes. Adolescents also have a series of shirts to choose that are printed distinct images or manufactured from special materials. Who favors basketball games may dress in clothes with Michael Jordan, a famous basketball star worldwide while a student interested in computer science naturally prefers to a shirt sewed the sign of Microsoft Corporation. Various colors also express interests of people even for the similar style garments. Active ones cast to red dresses; however, black suits are better choices for sophisticates. On the other hand, persons can be told apart from different jewelry decorations. Diamond rings are symbols of much property coinciding with a high economic progress. It is illustrated that citizens begin to focus more on the mental enjoyment. Therefore, the appearance definitely shows the changes in society.

Secondly, there is no denying that behaviors directly indicate some characteristics of residents and their countries. Take the level of morality as a case. In civilization, dwellers act in a polite and honest way. Even in a traffic jam, all drivers abide the norm rather than complete with others. To some extent, the number of crime affairs basically reflects people's attitudes. If the government has focused on education programs for several decades, criminals decline dramatically. When it comes to a democracy country, the public all participate political actions to construct prosperous society. At the same time, they hardly waste the national resource due to a endure development, yet it is impossible to be realized in ancient eras. Hence, in addition to appearance, behavior exerts a profound effect about ideas and values of a society.

Admittedly, in some particular occasions, people are forced to dress and act unaccustomedly which may mislead the normal judgment. A case in point is that at a diplomacy meeting politicians usually follow the certain rules that restrict their improper manners. Whatever they dress and act all depend on the political destination. Without deep investigations, it is unconvincing to conclude the statement of a society. The interior factors which cannot easily be revealed demand our long-time touch and careful observation to tell much about a society's ideas and values.

In short, to identify people's attitudes and interests is actually a complex course. The appearance and behavior can offer original impressions; however, furthermore interior characteristics are still indispensable for accurate discernments. It is an adventure that hasty generalizations inevitably lead to. Combining with the exterior glance and the interior analysis, people can know about a real society.
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发表于 2006-6-15 15:10:20 |只看该作者

作业,今天我该改那位仁兄的??

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This issue about whether people's general behavior can disclose the value the  society conducted advocate is complex and controversial. While the speaker asserts so, in my view I disagree the speaker’s point. The reason for this is that if people want to investigate a society's real ideas precisely, many other aspects should be considered.

First, we admit that to some extent, a person' attitudes and interests can be mirrored their appearance, including look, dress, act and so forth. After all, their value  determines to some degree their behavior. For example, if a person is very fat, we can conclude that he is probably absence of excise and has low healthy sense, and even very lazy in daily life; If a person can express the their idea and thinking very clearly by influence language,  he or she may be labeled the "logical and critical thinking man"; At the same time, if a person is very diligent in his or her working and takes efforts in their assignment, he or she probably hold strong responsibility sense. Moreover, in some countries, for example German, the citizen living in German pursue the precise in any aspects and order society. And  it is true that German embrace preciseness.

Second, some time even if we can recognize people's appearance, we fail to real understand or fathom their nature.  After all, owing to some reason, including social level, or individual level, people often mask their real interests and attitude or are forced to conceal their. Therefore, the quality surveyed only show an illusion about their value. For example, to cover the daily costs, and earn money for whole family, some individual hard work and represent diligent facet in their career, although hating busy life, and high life pace. When it comes to political areas, politicians make a good illustration for this point of view. To pander the publics and thus gain the support form general people,  some time the sagacious leaders hide their real emotion to pursue winning of election action. Although they are lack of confidence and ability to manage the whole nation, they need to pretend them embracing these qualities to get over any difficulties. As a result, the publics will see only a "cheating".

Finally, the traditional culture and some custom play a vital role the society's idea and values. None person can refuse the influence of these factors. So to understand the traditional culture rather than only rests on the people's appearance more help us understand the society's ethos. In particular today, with the development of globalization, people living in the majority of big city  trend to show same appearance characteristics in the first glimpse. They commonly dress the business suits; use English; eat instant food. Nevertheless, it is true that people living different countries have different values. For example, after comparing between China and American we can not conclude that these two countries share common values only in that they have similar appearance, including wearing same dress, and drinking StarBuck coffee.

In sum, to judge a society's idea we cannot over look the important aspects-traditional culture. Moreover, only relying on the appearance to define a person's character   is superficial.

提纲, 1 外表能在一定程度上体现兴趣态度
       2, 有时依赖外表是不真是的 , 例子政治家,
       3,传统文化是更可靠的比从外表看
、应为没有时间了 , 我就没写另一个观点-------------在自由的国度, 人们的打扮都不一样, 我们不能的出普遍的结论

25词错误, 太多了

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发表于 2006-6-15 16:09:54 |只看该作者

回复小蜗牛

syllabus:
1, 可以根据人们的穿着,饮食来确定他们的信仰以及整个社会的价值观,举例:穆斯林
2,人们的行为反映他们的兴趣,举例,美国人喜欢运动,日本勤奋,法国浪漫
3,但是,仅仅通过外表很难完全的反映一个社会,举例,移民较多的国家,如美国。

TOPIC: ISSUE208 - "The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."
WORDS: 404          TIME: 0:45:00          DATE: 2006-6-15

I fundamentally agree with the statement that the way people look,dress and act  can reveals their attitudes and interests, and then shows a society's ideas and values.不错很简洁

First of all, the appearence appearance and behavior of people are influenced by religions in many countries, and the religion embraced by a society can go further to determine the society's ideas and values.ts ,我觉得ts写得不太好,我以前也是,老想用ts改扩所用想说的,但是,如果ts写的太细下面不太好展开, For example, Muslems 时不时又写错了,我现在最怕错字了, 它可把5分的打道3分 would be recognized by their food and dress. They would like to choose white tradidtional dress and  there would be some time when they are not allowed to eat meat every month. From this point we can conclude their attitudes, especially about the religion. Moreover, generally speaking,  Moslem countries have similar values so we can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearence of its people 这句话写得太主观了,可以再想象 review 本段写得没有离题,但是我觉得写得不时态透彻,仅仅说了. Muslim

Secondly, we can also guess people's interests according their act or look 大概看懂了,你用的事方方面面法写得, When we are comparing different countries' people, the prinsiple is more apparent. For example, most of American people like simple and healthy life style, and they  play sports more than other people . Often we can see people in the USA wear sports dress and exercise, this would be related with the value of American people, that is, they like to challenge and keep an optimistic attitude about life. Also, from the way of working we can know that Japan is a diligent people and from acts of French people, especially of the young , we can conclude that France is a romantic people.再把日本人,和法国人的说得细些,如何工作勤奋,法国人浪漫,你不能说,因为浪漫所以浪漫,

However, observing the appearence appearance and behavior of people is not an absolute method to reveals their attitudes and interests, therefore not able to show a society's ideas without any flaws ts 对还有其他方法. Countries with many immigrations are hard to conclude their  values because various of values are existing together in their society. For example, we can find a few characters of American people and the major value in the USA, however, if we want to analyze in detail the ideas and values of American people, we would find just observing people's outlook and act is far from enough, because it is impossible to generalize so many racies completely according their dress, look or act. In order to know the real situations in a society, we should take more complex factors into consideration. 我觉得你这一段,是这样写的,没有例子,空话有点多,我看过以前的一片文章,就是这样说得,一个东西好,应为,促进了社会的发展,人们生活水平高了,所以这个东西好,最后分数不是太高,我觉得例子不再你举名人的,生活中就可以,例如我们不能从他们都用ibm, 吃麦当劳,肯德基,suit, 你就说美国和中国的 value people hold 呵呵举个例子,我也很菜,大家共同进步,说得太狠介意,大家共同探讨  

In sum, under most circumstances we can conclude a society's ideas and valuse by observing the appearance and behavior of its people, but the principle does not apply to all situations and to know better about a society we should pay attention to considering other factors. 结尾就不说了,我时写得不太好,

Review  我觉得你这篇文章首先没离题,而且比较流畅,
        但是,我觉得写得有点空洞,  其实举举例子就行了,比如现在全球一体化了,我们能说,美国人爱喝可乐,starbuck 中国人也这样,能说 我们的观念一样吗?  其实例子就是靠写小东西就能充实的

说得不好大家共同进步

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发表于 2006-6-15 16:13:21 |只看该作者

大家有什么好的方法,能提高打字的正确率马???

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发表于 2006-6-15 16:57:23 |只看该作者
但是,我觉得写得有点空洞,  其实举举例子就行了,比如现在全球一体化了,我们能说,美国人爱喝可乐,starbuck 中国人也这样,能说 我们的观念一样吗?  其实例子就是靠写小东西就能充实的

非常感谢老妇人的提醒,我正愁没有大块的例子来支持论点呢,其实看那些范文,一点小例子在加上合理的分析,就显得很流畅很有力,大家可以琢磨琢磨
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发表于 2006-6-15 16:59:02 |只看该作者
回答老妇人:

提高打字正确率,我认为最关键的是调整写作文的心态,如果过分紧张的话,不仅错误率高,而且思维还混乱。
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发表于 2006-6-16 02:08:37 |只看该作者
During the recent decades of years, people are paying more and more attention on the way we dress and act. It seems that appearance and what we do can【建议用activities,和前面的appearance对应】 reveal our values and interest. Well, I believe that how people dress themselves and their behavior can not only tell their interests【interest】 and values, but also reveal the ideas and values of their society.

Firstly, the way people dress and behave can show their attitude and interest, as well as their occupation, character and can also【indicate】 whether they are in a【前面是they】 good or bad mood. From the occupation aspect, a while【white】 collar may dress formal suit during their【单复数不一致】 work time in the company showing【to show】 his decency【decent】 and the strict attitude toward his work; an artist are always dressing in a particular and exotic way, 【What’s more】they may have long hair dressing【dress long hair】 quite differently from others, which may show their  unparalleled creativity and unique character. Let's get to the character aspect. A strict man may dress in an antique way or in unfashionable suit【or前后意思重复】, revealing his reluctance to accept the fashion and some other latest things; a happy girl of elastic temperament would like to dress in bright and brisk colors, which can add her happiness and delight. Besides, when in a bad mood people would not tend to dress themselves deliberately, but when in a good mood, a girl, for instance going to a party would rather spending hours in choosing a dress from her wardrobe. Appearance can indeed tell us something about a person.

Appearance can also reveals【reveal】 the idea and value of a society. Society is 【is删除】consists of different individuals, thus individuals' thought and idea is actually the society's value【社会由个人组成,但社会观念不等同于个人观念】. Residents in the ancient Greece advocated art and science, which represents【represented】 a trend then, freedom of person's thought and the passion and determination in exploring the nature. Thus appearance can tell persons' interest and attitude as well as the value of their society【TS说个人的外表反映社会价值,但作者提到古希腊的例子并没有提到这一点。这里作者好像在说他们的态度】. People in North Korea all dress in uniform, with only a few dull colors, black or grey, as well as hairstyle, are all quite the same. Their action and remarks are also uniformed. People can not afford to buy clothes, and they 【are】not allowed 【to】 dress in a diverse way. This strange way they dress and behave reflects the terrible governance of this nation, rude and savage【这种评论影响国际关系。totalitarianism】, and the nature of the nation, lacking of creativity, also their undeveloped economy【没有谓语】. In contrast, China, which also suffered that savage period called? The Great Cultural Revolution?, has undergone a dramatic development since its ?open and reform policy? came into effect in the end of the 1970s. People will not suffer from【will free from】 their constraint thought any longer, and get ride of any autocrat of the leader【这样评价文革?!】. Thus people can dress in different styles of clothes and in bright color. Each individual's attitude aggregate to the values of the society which can be reflected by their appearance.

One misconception is that appearance and behavior can reflect the whole nature of a person. Admittedly they can represent person's attitude and interests, and it will also lead us to a superficial way to understand a person or a society. Appearance and behavior are such exterior features that can not be used to percept the nature. To comprehend a society, we should study it from every aspect and collect more information, not just confined【confine】 in that outside characters.

To sum up, appearance and behavior are quite essential for us to understand a person or a society, but we should not be confined to those superficial things【factors】. Only by knowing from different aspect【aspect】 can we percept the interest or attitudes of a person or a society's values.

总结:作者的中文提纲写得很详细,但要想做到面面俱到不是一件容易的事情。另外还要注意时间问题。语法错误比较多,chienglish比较浓。建议补充一下语法知识。

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During the recent decades of years, people are paying more and more attention on the way we dress and act. It seems that appearance and what we do can【建议用activities,和前面的appearance对应】 reveal our values and interest. Well, I believe that how people dress themselves and their behavior can not only tell their interests【interest】 and values, but also reveal the ideas and values of their society.

Firstly, the way people dress and behave can show their attitude and interest, as well as their occupation, character and can also【indicate】 whether they are in a【前面是they】 good or bad mood. From the occupation aspect, a while【white】 collar may dress formal suit during their【单复数不一致】 work time in the company showing【to show】 his decency【decent】 and the strict attitude toward his work; an artist are always dressing in a particular and exotic way, 【What’s more】they may have long hair dressing【dress long hair】 quite differently from others, which may show their  unparalleled creativity and unique character. Let's get to the character aspect. A strict man may dress in an antique way or in unfashionable suit【or前后意思重复】, revealing his reluctance to accept the fashion and some other latest things; a happy girl of elastic temperament would like to dress in bright and brisk colors, which can add her happiness and delight. Besides, when in a bad mood people would not tend to dress themselves deliberately, but when in a good mood, a girl, for instance going to a party would rather spending hours in choosing a dress from her wardrobe. Appearance can indeed tell us something about a person.

Appearance can also reveals【reveal】 the idea and value of a society. Society is 【is删除】consists of different individuals, thus individuals' thought and idea is actually the society's value【社会由个人组成,但社会观念不等同于个人观念】. Residents in the ancient Greece advocated art and science, which represents【represented】 a trend then, freedom of person's thought and the passion and determination in exploring the nature. Thus appearance can tell persons' interest and attitude as well as the value of their society【TS说个人的外表反映社会价值,但作者提到古希腊的例子并没有提到这一点。这里作者好像在说他们的态度】. People in North Korea all dress in uniform, with only a few dull colors, black or grey, as well as hairstyle, are all quite the same. Their action and remarks are also uniformed. People can not afford to buy clothes, and they 【are】not allowed 【to】 dress in a diverse way. This strange way they dress and behave reflects the terrible governance of this nation, rude and savage【这种评论影响国际关系。totalitarianism】, and the nature of the nation, lacking of creativity, also their undeveloped economy【没有谓语】. In contrast, China, which also suffered that savage period called? The Great Cultural Revolution?, has undergone a dramatic development since its ?open and reform policy? came into effect in the end of the 1970s. People will not suffer from【will free from】 their constraint thought any longer, and get ride of any autocrat of the leader【这样评价文革?!】. Thus people can dress in different styles of clothes and in bright color. Each individual's attitude aggregate to the values of the society which can be reflected by their appearance.

One misconception is that appearance and behavior can reflect the whole nature of a person. Admittedly they can represent person's attitude and interests, and it will also lead us to a superficial way to understand a person or a society. Appearance and behavior are such exterior features that can not be used to percept the nature. To comprehend a society, we should study it from every aspect and collect more information, not just confined【confine】 in that outside characters.

To sum up, appearance and behavior are quite essential for us to understand a person or a society, but we should not be confined to those superficial things【factors】. Only by knowing from different aspect【aspect】 can we percept the interest or attitudes of a person or a society's values.

总结:作者的中文提纲写得很详细,但要想做到面面俱到不是一件容易的事情。另外还要注意时间问题。语法错误比较多,chienglish比较浓。建议补充一下语法知识。

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態度:有保留的反對。
提綱:
1.        的確,部分人的行爲舉止可以間接透露他們的理念和價值觀(eg:康德)
2.        但是也有外表舉止同社會整體風氣矛盾的情況(eg:阿拉伯社會的肚皮舞女郎;及泰國的人妖事業。)
3.        現代社會中外表和舉止在決定一個人的成分中,所佔比重越來越少。


Whether the way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests? In my view, this issue is a case-by-case basis. The appearance and behavior are sometimes reflecting the ideas and values from the society, but in some other cases, they do not work so.

On one hand, people's look, dress and act, to some extent do reveal with their attitudes and interests. Especially for the professional workers, such like the doctor prefers white color and always keep their stuff in a tidy order. And the actor is likely to get in attract with fashion clothes much more than others. Take a German philosopher for example. Immanuel Kant must be one of the most important philosophers in last hundreds, who stay in his hometown for whole life. And Kant always keeps an ordered arrangement in his life. People living in the town as well, even can check their watches' time while they saw Kant walking on the street in every afternoon at exactly same time. Like his strict behaviors on every trivial things in the life, Kant's attitudes on the academic writings are as same strict as well. And people could find out that Kant's ideas about the philosophic issue are always critical and inflexible. So in the case here, from Kant's behaviors in the reality, people can obvious know his attitudes on academic ideas.

On the other hand, there are many cases in the world that people's appearance and behavior are not revealing with their social background. For instance, in Arab society, women must wear veils for their religious believes. However, in such conservative countries, there are lots belly-dancing girls wear wanton costumes and perform in front of public. Same situation happens in Thailand, one of the traditional Buddhism countries. As we know, the lady-boy phenomenon is quite commonly to see in every tourism place in Thailand. By exchange from male body to some female features via artificial causes, those lady-boys are wearing bare dresses and living only for their abnormal appearances. It might be shock for people who seen them at first glance, yet at least, their government allow the lady-boy living with their own ways in totally opposite Thai society. In short, these cases tell us that someone's appearance and behavior are not always reflecting their social backgrounds, even in the extremely conservative countries.

In final analysis, appearance is less likely in nowadays to be a necessary issue to recognize someone in this pluralistic and blooming world. Take Bill Gates for example, the most wealth person in the world, however prefer to wear causal t-shirts and jeans in his daily life. What is more, there is a trend that lots high school girls are pursuing super-brands in today's society, and so do some ordinary office-workers. Another example here is about the appearances of homosexuals. Like some "tom-boys" in lesbian group are prefer male dressing, but some others are not. And it is easy for people who pretend to be such appearance, yet hard to recognize them. Therefore, the way people look, dress, and act only can take small part to decide the real ideas and values of them, especially in this modern age.

To sum up, the appearance and behavior are some factors that might be used in the way to observe someone, however, in today's world, the way people look, dress, and act are less likely to be the fundamental issue to reveal with their attitudes and interests. Hence, we need see people from different angles to recognize the ideas and values of the whole society.

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发表于 2006-6-16 07:59:19 |只看该作者
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