argument147 清凉夏日小组 3组作业

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1、前两个月销量下降是各种原因造成的，除了需要改进生动的画面之外还需要很多改进才能满足玩家，所以仅仅改进这一点并不能使得销量一定大增
2、调查仅仅在一部分的玩家中进行，不全面；广告又针对10～25的人群，但玩家的年龄范围无法确定，广告的效果很难说
3、下面几个月的市场情况和收入情况不确定，如果市场萧条，经济低迷，那电视游戏销量也不会好起来

The argument is well-presented, but not thoroughly well-reasoned. Whirlwing has introduced some new video-games according to a survey that most video -game players prefer games which provide lifelike graphics. And a conclusion is made by the author that the sales of Whirlwind video games are likely to increase dramatically after an extensive advertising campaign at people 10 to 25.
  However, the author are failing to consider other alternatives to the decline of the sales over the past two years beside what computer technology the video games use. An attractive game  will appeal to us not only by its beautiful graphics, but by all of its excellent features, as style, theme, interaction and so on. Players have their multi-reasons not to choose Whirlwind's products. Though the company has used lifelike graphics in the new products depend on some player's suggestion, other problems still have not been solved. The sales of the games may still stay at a low level.
  A survey of video-game players, not convincing enough ,could not typically support the view that the development of lifelike graphics will attract more people to play the game. It may be taken just in a small group where most players prefer beautiful graphics, and surely could not reflect the most case. So when the new products have been put to market, maybe only the small group people will choose them. Again, theirs no confidence shows that the age-group between 10 to 25 are most likely to play video games. It is possible that the players' age increase as the people who meet with the video-games from young grows. So we can not certain whether the effect of that advertising campaign will be acceptable.
  The financial situation of the world is also import. If the world's business decreases, how can the Whirlwind video games sale well? It appears reasonable that in the next few months, most of the citizens' income decreases, and certainly few people will buy video games when their money only can afford basic lives.
  Overall, the reasoning behind the sales of Whirlwind video games will increase in next few months seems logical as the new products have been provide by the company. However, before any decisions are made about the increase, the author should consider other reasons that caused sales declined in the past, and all the possible cases which may happen in the future.