issue29 清凉夏日小组3组 作业

cpuliuwenUID: 2203373

TOPIC: ISSUE29 - "Public figures such as actors, politicians, and athletes should expect people to be interested in their private lives. When they seek a public role, they should expect that they will lose at least some of their privacy."

I fundamentally agree with the speaker's statement: since they have chosen what they do, public figures should expect that they will be interested in their private lives and therefore, they will lose at least some of their privacy.

The chief reason for my agreement is that, people are born with curiosity and they seek something different and interesting by nature. What the public figures do happen to cater to the appetite of the public. Take actors for example, all too often, we can see some boys and girls crazy about a movie star. They are not only interested in the actor's movies, but inclined to search more information about the private life of the actor, such as the habit of him, what he likes to eat, and even which kind of girl he likes. This kind of phenomenon is widely spreading all over the world.

Another reason why I generally agree with statement is that inevitably some people look for someone as their idol, and in all likelihood, they focus on a public figure whose performance is excellent to be honored. Lately, through watching a TV program, I learned about a lady who regards Hao Haidong, a famous Chinese football player, as her idol. She watches every game Hao plays and sends cards and letters to Hao regularly. What impresses me most is that she even meets his idol once every year to communicate with Hao,  exchanging some thoughts about everyday life. She told the audience that Hao has become an impetus for her to move on in her life. And Hao also expressed his gratitude to her because her care continuously encouraged him to strive hard to make greater progress. In this case, the lady's attention on the athlete has intervened in his private life, but Hao accepted it and considered it as an inspiration.

In addition, the mass media always try to bring the private lives of famous people into public to maximize the profits of shareholders. Since they know well about what the public demands, they will make their best to satisfy their needs. From entertainment information to politics scandal, the mass media are ready to discover it as soon as possible and attract the public attention promptly. As a result, no matter whether they like or not, the public figures will have to accept the fact that they are the cynosure. Both their works and private lives will be concerned by the masses.

However, although intense public scrutiny of the private lives is unavoidable, the public figures should try to protect their family members and friends from becoming the victims of the mass media. After all, other people are innocent, even if they have a relationship with a public figure. They should be given the rights to live their lives in a way they like.

In conclusion, people should consider all the positive and negative aspects before they deciding to become a public figure who would inevitably become the focus of the masses. Also, they should accept that they will necessarily lose some of their private. In spite of these, they still ought to realize it is their responsibility to protect people around them from being harmed by too much attention from the public.

rosy0928UID: 2191748

TOPIC: ISSUE29 - "Public figures such as actors, politicians, and athletes should expect people to be interested in their private lives. When they seek a public role, they should expect that they will lose at least some of their privacy."

I fundamentally agree with the speaker's statement: since they have chosen what they do, public figures should expect that they will be interested in their private lives and therefore, they will lose at least some of their privacy.//开头直接了当！

The chief reason for my agreement is that, people are born with curiosity and they seek something different and interesting by nature. What the public figures do happen to cater to the appetite of the public. Take actors for example, all too often, we can see some boys and girls crazy about a movie star. They are not only interested in the actor's movies, but inclined to search more information about the private life of the actor, such as the habit of him, what he likes to eat, and even which kind of girl he likes. This kind of phenomenon is widely spreading all over the world.//起承转合都很好啊！学习！

Another reason why I generally agree with statement is that inevitably some people look for someone as their idol, and in all likelihood, they focus on a public figure whose performance is excellent to be honored. Lately, through watching a TV program, I learned about a lady who regards Hao Haidong, a famous Chinese football player, as her idol. She watches every game Hao plays and sends cards and letters to Hao regularly. What impresses me most is that she even meets his idol once every year to communicate with Hao,  exchanging some thoughts about everyday life. She told the audience that Hao has become an impetus for her to move on in her life. And Hao also expressed his gratitude to her because her care continuously encouraged him to strive hard to make greater progress. In this case, the lady's attention on the athlete has intervened in his private life, but Hao accepted it and considered it as an inspiration.//我觉得这段好像例子描述有些繁杂，和第一段的论点只是程度上的差别，觉得可否合为一段呢？呵呵，建议罢了！

In addition, the mass media always try to bring the private lives of famous people into public to maximize the profits of shareholders. Since they know well about what the public demands, they will make their best to satisfy their needs. From entertainment information to politics scandal, the mass media are ready to discover it as soon as possible and attract the public attention promptly. As a result, no matter whether they like or not, the public figures will have to accept the fact that they are the cynosure. Both their works and private lives will be concerned by the masses.//换了角度，阐述很生动的！

However, although intense public scrutiny of the private lives is unavoidable, the public figures should try to protect their family members and friends from becoming the victims of the mass media. After all, other people are innocent, even if they have a relationship with a public figure. They should be given the rights to live their lives in a way they like. //没有想到的一点，小让步，值得学习哦！

In conclusion, people should consider all the positive and negative aspects before they deciding to become a public figure who would inevitably become the focus of the masses. Also, they should accept that they will necessarily lose some of their private. In spite of these, they still ought to realize it is their responsibility to protect people around them from being harmed by too much attention from the public.//个人感觉总结很全面，要是再有点力度就更好了！呵呵

好佩服啊～～觉得你写的真的很好，从语言还是段落结构都很好！如果我能写成这样，我一定高兴死了！一点建议，觉得ETS的范文都有观点很专一但深入的特点，如果观点安排的再合理一些就更好了！！
佩服啊！！:victory:一定向你好好学习！

例子：Take actors for example, all too often, we can see some boys and girls crazy about a movie star. They are not only interested in the actor's movies, but inclined to search more information about the private life of the actor, such as the habit of him, what he likes to eat, and even which kind of girl he likes. （少男少女的追星行为）
         Lately, through watching a TV program, I learned about a lady who regards Hao Haidong, a famous Chinese football player, as her idol. She watches every game Hao plays and sends cards and letters to Hao regularly. What impresses me most is that she even meets his idol once every year to communicate with Hao,  exchanging some thoughts about everyday life. She told the audience that Hao has become an impetus for her to move on in her life. And Hao also expressed his gratitude to her because her care continuously encouraged him to strive hard to make greater progress. （郝海东和女球迷的和谐共处）

linfan68UID: 2185216

I fundamentally agree with the speaker's statement: since they have chosen what they do, public figures should expect that they will be interested in their private lives and therefore, they will lose at least some of their privacy.

The chief reason for my agreement is that, people are born with curiosity and they seek something different and interesting by nature. [精辟！] What the public figures do happen to cater to the appetite of the public. Take actors for example, all too often, we can see some boys and girls crazy about a movie star. They are not only interested in the actor's movies, but inclined to search more information about the private life of the actor, such as the habit of him, what he likes to eat, and even which kind of girl he likes. This kind of phenomenon is widely spreading all over the world.

Another reason why I generally agree with statement is that inevitably some people look for someone as their idol, and in all likelihood, they focus on a public figure whose performance is excellent to be honored. Lately, through watching [可以不要] a TV program, I learned about a lady who regards Hao Haidong, a famous Chinese football player, as her idol. She watches every game Hao plays and sends cards and letters to Hao regularly. What impresses me most is that she even meets his idol once every year to communicate with Hao, exchanging some thoughts about everyday life. She told the audience that Hao has become an impetus for her to move on in her life. And Hao also expressed his gratitude to her because her care continuously encouraged him to strive hard to make greater progress. In this case, the lady's attention on the athlete has intervened in his private life, but Hao accepted it and considered it as an inspiration. [说实话，这样的例子还真不好找……]

In addition, the mass media always try to bring the private lives of famous people into public to maximize the profits of shareholders. Since they know well about what the public demands, they will make their best to satisfy their needs. From entertainment information to politics scandal, the mass media are ready to discover it as soon as possible and attract the public attention promptly. As a result, no matter whether they like or not, the public figures will have to accept the fact that they are the cynosure. Both their works and private lives will be concerned by the masses. [如果把这段和主体第一段放在一起的话会好一点，因为这之间是有联系的，大家喜欢所以media才关注]

However, although intense public scrutiny of the private lives is unavoidable, the public figures should try to protect their family members and friends from becoming the victims of the mass media. After all, other people are innocent, even if they have a relationship with a public figure. They should be given the rights to live their lives in a way they like. [这个观点稍微有点偏，如果让步的话应该直接对题目取反，或是程度取反，比如，如果他们自己注意，不让大家有那么多把柄的话，也不会有人太关心他们的私人生活。]

In conclusion, people should consider all the positive and negative aspects before they deciding to become a public figure who would inevitably become the focus of the masses. Also, they should accept that they will necessarily lose some of their private. In spite of these, they still ought to realize it is their responsibility to protect people around them from being harmed by too much attention from the public.
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语言的掌握已经很不错了，但是感觉你的逻辑方面还是要练一下，再Argument里面也感觉主线比较模糊
你的主体我总结一下;
1隐私的失去是不可避免的（公众兴趣）
2隐私的失去也可能是好的
3隐私的失去是必然的（媒体利益）
4必须保护其他人的隐私
首先如果把1 3放在一起的话会好一些，然后就是如果能够把4的论证改善一下，比如不是名人保护，而是社会保护。
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cpuliuwenUID: 2203373

关于4的论证,我有不同的看法,既然题目是从poblic figure的角度来提出问题的,难道我们的论证不应该从public figure的角度来展开吗?