COMEON作文小组------brufeng 9月24日作业

brufengUID: 2267718

Do you agree or disagree:The best way to travel is in a group led by a guide.(2006.11.18)
提纲：
1.提出观点，否定，正负 各一半
2.组团游的好处：飞机票，车票，门票便宜；省心；有解说。缺点：不自由；走马观花；被动接受；有时限
3.自己游的好处：自由；自己选地方；时间不受限。缺点：门票等贵；自己找饭店，旅店。
4.总，各有优缺点，视情况和个人喜好而定，享受旅行。

正文：
I am not exactly agree that travel with a group led by a guide is the best way. Some people love tripping with tourist party, others want have a special self-driving travelling or individual free journey, whichever they choose, as long as happy sufficient.

Travel with a group is a convenience way for present people. Nowadays, we have a great many travel agencies, with decades’ development, travel agency's server become more and more mature and efficient. By book a great many tickets from the bus companies, air companies and scenic spots, they can get the lowest price from them. When you guided with a traveling group the only thing you should do is enjoy your journey, for that can make you save worry about your food and shelter. There have expert staffs prepare these things for you. Furthermore, with the cicerone's introduction we can get a better understand with historical sites. Also, you join a travel party, as you get the servers from them you loose your freedom. You have to follow the order and restricted whatever on the places or with the time. May be the journey only have a rough look at your dreaming place.

Contrary, individual travelling do not have restrict. You can stop wherever you want and enjoy the scenic as long as you wish. Freeness the limited viewing places. However, each coin has two sides, travel by yourself should make you more money buy the high price ticket, and pay more attention for searching restaurant and hostel. If you meet tourist season, find a shelter will become a nightmare for you.

Whatever travel with a group or individual, there have good conditions also bad ones. So say that travel with a group led by a guid is the best way is unilateral. People can choose as their wish. Finally, remember one thing, enjoy your journey.


Lern Main Words:
tourist party旅游团
advantage好处 benefit
convenience方便的
bus ticket持票
scenic spot景区
save worry省心
restricted受限制的
have a rough look走马观花的看
passive acceptance被动的接受
self-driving travelling自驾游
at liberty有空，自由 laissez-aller放任 disegagement脱离，闲暇，自由 freedom自由 freeness不拘泥
charge费用
hostel旅店
comfortable舒适的
midseason for traveling 旅游旺季
tourist season旅游旺季
look at the situation看情况
not exactly agree不同意
travel agency旅行社
furthermore此外，而且
dragoman导游 cicerone导游（名胜古迹的） ciceroni导游
historical sites名胜古迹
unilateral片面的



[ 本帖最后由 brufeng 于 2008-9-25 16:25 编辑 ]

jackallen0714UID: 2510951

I am not exactly agree that travel with a group led by a guide is the best way. Some people love tripping with tourist party, others want have a special self-driving travelling or individual free journey, whichever they choose, as long as happy sufficient.

Travel with a group is a convenience way for present people. Nowadays, we have a great many travel agencies, with decades’ development, travel agency's server become more and more mature and efficient./建议拆成两句，要么就重新组织一下，比如Nowadays , great many mature and efficient travel agencies are available after dacade's development. By booking a great many换个词吧，才用过 tickets from the bus companies, air companies and scenic spots, they can get the lowest price from them. When you are guided with a traveling group the only thing you should do is enjoy your/the journey, for that (can make you save)would avoid your worrying about your多余 food and shelter. There have expert staffs prepare these things for you. Furthermore, with the cicerone's introduction we can get a better understand with historical sites/landscap. Also/逻辑关系不对，应该是转折吧, you join a travel party, as you get the servers/services from them you loose your freedom. You have to follow the order and restricted whatever on the places or with the time. May be the journey only have a rough look at your dreaming place.

Contrary, individual travelling do not have such restrict. You can stop wherever you want and enjoy the scenic as long as you wish. Freeness the limited viewing places. However, each coin has two sides, travel by yourself should make/cost you more money to buy the high price ticket, and pay more attention for searching restaurant and hostel. If you meet tourist season, find a shelter will become a nightmare for you.

Whatever travel with a group or individual, there have good conditions also bad ones. So say that travel with a group led by a guid is the best way is unilateral. People can choose as their wish. Finally, remember one thing, enjoy your journey.

用词要注意变化和准确，另外还有些拼写错误~
我在练习把一个意思用不同表达方式写出来，感觉很有用，建议楼主也试试~

[ 本帖最后由 jackallen0714 于 2008-9-25 16:58 编辑 ]

brufengUID: 2267718

刚才看了几个人的文章，有了新发现，有些思想我压根就没想到，跟帖做个记录：
不跟导游的理由：
1.寻求探险，explore，discover
2.free schedule
还摘了一些好词：
no consensus among people没有统一意见
arrange
schedule set by... ...给的时间表
handle the time by oneself ...自己掌控时间
in advance预先
memorable recalling难忘的回忆
terrain地形
get lost迷路
to begin with(作谓语，以...开始)
natural scenery 自然风景
hired雇佣
landscap风景，山水画
take into account考虑，重视
strive奋斗
fascinating迷人的

[ 本帖最后由 brufeng 于 2008-9-25 17:05 编辑 ]

brufengUID: 2267718

9.25号的作业也找到了好多好题和好例子，不过为了以后复习好查看，我自己就都放在这里跟贴了：:loveliness:
arduous journey 辛勤的、险峻的旅行
coincide with 与...相符
perspective观点
witness证明
significant重要的
brand崭新的
molecule chain分子链
pervade遍及
fragile脆的
innovative spirit 创新的，革新精神
for fear of为了避免
spoil（食物等）腐坏，变坏
manipulate利用
inventive发明的，善于创造的
hinge on靠...转动
emphatic reason强有力的理由
sagacious有远见的，有洞察力的
science科学
real estate房地产
income falls short of the expenditure/unable to make end meet入不敷出
sideline副业
parergon副业，第二职业
qualm疑虑
superior personality 出众的名人，出众的人格
risk always coexist wit opportunity机会与风险同在
replete with充满...
representitive声明，被称作
predict 预言
famous figures all over the world
bear the difficulty与困难斗争
reward for sb.某人的回报
ultimately achieve his goal最终达到他的目标
refine 精致，精炼v.
admittedly 无可否认
viewpoint
certain advanced personalities

brufengUID: 2267718

9.26
commit 犯罪
crime 罪行
miscellaneous factors 各种因素
reveal the truth of the universe解释宇宙的真理
a giant leap for the human 人类的巨大进步