issue136 熊熊互拍组 yurong84第4次作业，互拍！

yurong84UID: 2120087

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136. "The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."
 
没有选择的情况少之又少。
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syllabus:
1.positive: the choices always exist, sometimes there're too many for us to choose from.
2.让步：in certain cases or on several things, choices may be confined by the situation.
3.positive:choices depend on our attitude toward the problem.

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I strongly support the view of the arguer, that the absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare. Our experiences in everyday life as well as the history have both convinced us that, thing always has more than one aspects if one looks into it in different ways, thus the choices exists. However, why someone occasionally find himself been driven to the last ditch? The biggest obstacle might be set by one’s own opinion.

First, our world is consisted of numerous phenomena, which provide us with all kinds of possibilities, so that we will never get into such a corner without any alternations at all. However, sometimes the crucial problem does not lie in the scarcity of choices, but in that how to make up one’s decision. From the daily trifles such as choose the main dish of a dinner, to the most important events including the deciding of one's career, people always find themselves bogged down by countless potentials, not the absence of choices.

Admittedly, in some cases one cannot choose freely due to the restriction set by his situations or the other people. What’s more, one may found many things have been decided before they become aware of them. For example, all of us have to face the inevitable fact that, our family, race and social status must be decided by other ones when we come to this world. Even when we have grown up and developed our own comprehension of this world, we might find ourselves still confined by this or that objective matters. It's the same with those rulers who hold great power in their hands, as they have to make choices based on the need and advantages of the public, of the society, and must choose within an acceptable extent. But after all, this doesn't indicate the absolutely absence of choices.

If the choices do exist, why we always see people bothered by impasses, who complaining that they have no choice but to do something unwillingly? In my opinion, their main problem lies in the way they face the problem. Maybe the circumstance has provided them with a different direction, but they simply pass them by and stick to the vary goal they're pursuing. Without a right attitude, a person might believe in the so-called destiny and lose oneself. To illustrate this point, the first person comes into my mind is Helen Keller, a famous writer as well as inspiring educator in the history of America. Both her hearing and sight were lost since her recovery from an acute fever at the early age. In other people's eyes, the world left no choices to her but dark and silent, and her attempt to read and write was also considered as an illusion. But she finally achieved her goal, since she treated the misfortune optimistically and find chance for herself.  

To sum up, life is fair and won’t let anyone of us drop into a entirely hopeless situation. In fact, choices lie in every step we take, though sometimes we need to find them ourselves, or even create them. As an old saying goes: nothing is impossible. I believe everyone can choose the best way for himself.

[ Last edited by yurong84 on 2005-8-10 at 00:34 ]

sosoUID: 194270

刚要改,发现是argu！！！

yurong84UID: 2120087

hoho，多谢！
改过来了：）

sebarinaUID: 2108158

I strongly support the view of the arguer, that the absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare. Our experiences in everyday life as well as the history have both convinced us that, 冠词thing always has more than one aspects if one looks into it in different ways, thus the choices exists.那你是要说你将从experience论证了？ However, why someone occasionally find himself been driven to the last ditch? The biggest obstacle might be set by one’s own opinion.

First, our world is consisted of numerous phenomena, which provide us with all kinds of possibilities, so that we will never哈哈你也很绝对哈 get into such a corner without any alternations at all. However, sometimes the crucial problem does not lie in the scarcity of choices, but in that how to make up one’s decision. From the daily trifles such as choose the main dish of a dinner, to the most important events including the deciding of one's career, people always find themselves bogged down 词语很不错的学习之by countless potentials, not the absence of choices.

Admittedly, in some cases one cannot choose freely due to the restriction set by his situations or the other people. What’s more, one may found many things语法 have been decided before they become aware of them. For example, all of us have to face the inevitable fact that, our family, race and social status must be decided by other ones when we come to this world. Even when we have grown up and developed our own comprehension of this world, we might find ourselves still confined by this or that objective matters. It's the same with those rulers who hold great power in their hands, as they have to make choices based on the need and advantages of the public, of the society, and must choose within an acceptable extent. 没看懂你这个类比是要说什么But after all, this doesn't indicate the absolutely absence of choices.

If the choices do exist, why we always see people bothered by impasses, who complaining that they have no choice but to do something unwillingly? In my opinion, their main problem lies in the way they face tothe problem. Maybe the circumstance has provided them with a different direction, but they simply pass them by and stick to the varyvery goal they're pursuing. Without a right这个right不清~你并没有说明不选择就是错的~可能他们觉得只挑好的才是对的 attitude, a person might believe in the so-called destiny and lose oneself. To illustrate this point, the first person comes into my mind is Helen Keller, a famous writer as well as inspiring educator in the history of America. Both her hearing and sight were lost since her recovery from an acute fever at the early age. In other people's eyes, the world left no choices to her but dark and silent, and her attempt to read and write was also considered as an illusion.大牛例子~我怎么就想不到呢？ But she finally achieved her goal, since she treated the misfortune optimistically and find chance for herself. 再小结一下就更好啦~这个例子真是不错呀，噢呵呵

To sum up, life is fair and won’t let anyone of us drop into a entirely hopeless situation. In fact, choices lie in every step we take, though sometimes we need to find them ourselves, or even create them你这里想说什么. As an old saying goes: nothing is impossible. I believe everyone can choose the best way for himself.
后面的结尾是不是……？觉得不好
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困了只能先改这些了

foreveraUID: 202035

I strongly support the view of the arguer, that the absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare. Our experiences in everyday life as well as the history have both convinced us that, thing always has more than one aspects if one looks into it in different ways, thus the choices exists.这些证明choice存在的有点多吧,再简练一点可能会更好 However, why someone occasionally find himself been driven to the last ditch? The biggest obstacle might be set by one’s own opinion. 这里的观点有点模糊不够鲜明准确,在用几个词解释一下会好一点,

First, our world is consisted of numerous phenomena要用复数, which provide us with all kinds of possibilities, so that we will never get into such a corner without any alternations at all. However, sometimes the crucial problem does not lie in the scarcity of choices, but in that how to make up one’s decision. From the daily trifles such as to choose the main dish of a dinner, to the most important events including the deciding of one's career, people always find themselves bogged down by countless potentials, not the absence of choices.
这段在结构上有点问题,似乎这段是具体阐述和解释首段的观点,但是又举了些例子,这就有点混杂的感觉,如果是解释的话可以用几个很简练的句子把大概意思表达清楚就好,如果是正文就应该把2种观点分到下面的2部分中去.不过词汇用的还是很地道的....HOHO...值得俺去学学...
Admittedly, in some cases one cannot choose freely due to the restriction set by his situations or the other people. What’s more, one may found many things have been decided before they become aware of them. For example, all of us have to face the inevitable fact that, our family, race and social status must be decided by other ones when we come to this world. Even when we have grown up and developed our own comprehension of this world, we might find ourselves still confined by this or that objective matters. It's the same with those rulers who hold great power in their hands, as they have to make choices based on the need and advantages of the public, of the society, and must choose within an acceptable extent. But after all, this doesn't indicate the absolutely absence of choices. 整段论述的都非常不错,不过唯一最后一句最好不要在这里出现,这段就应该只在说absence of choices
If the choices do exist, why we always see people bothered by impasses, who complaining that they have no choice but to do something unwillingly? In my opinion, their main problem lies in the way they face the problem. Maybe the circumstance has provided them with a different direction, but they simply pass them by and stick to the vary goal they're pursuing. Without a right attitude, a person might believe in the so-called destiny and lose oneself. To illustrate this point, the first person comes into my mind is Helen Keller, a famous writer as well as inspiring educator in the history of America. Both her hearing and sight were lost since her recovery from an acute fever at the early age. In other people's eyes, the world left no choices to her but dark and silent, and her attempt to read and write was also considered as an illusion. But she finally achieved her goal, since she treated the misfortune optimistically and find chance for herself.  这一段也比较精彩,基本没有什么问题,不过好象choice的存在的问题并没有单独的论述,只是开头大概的一提,是不是应该单独搞一段说一下,然后这里"If the choices do exist",才有根据.
To sum up, life is fair and won’t let anyone of us drop into a entirely hopeless situation. In fact, choices lie in every step we take, though sometimes we need to find them ourselves, or even create them. As an old saying goes: nothing is impossible. I believe everyone can choose the best way for himself.结尾不错...我很喜欢


蓉蓉MM对语言的把握能力的确值得我们学习,每段论证也都比较好，不过最好在注意一下从全篇的高度去把握一下结构的问题,让全文看起来结构鲜明.


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