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Nowadays the debate of who make choices for children have been discussed drastically. The two sides, parents and children themselves, have different reasons to support their own beliefs. For parents, they want to help their child to make good decisions based on their own experience; However, as for children, they want to make decisions by  themselves because they have unique perspective facing the choices. As far as I concerned, I maintain that children make the choices by themselves could be better than that of by parents.  


Admittedly, parents make choices for their childern have some
advantages to some extent. Because parents have experienced the way which we are walking or will walk and they know where we will make the mistakes. Therefore, if they make decision for children could let they avoid those mistakes.


However, the most important benefit of making choices by children is that children could make good use of their intelligence. Could you imagine if the famous physicist, Newton, was instilled his parent's belief that the apple fell from the tree was very normal? May be nowadays, human could still not know about the gravity. But this situation were not happened not only because Newton had the curiosity to this phenomenon but also because he made good use of his intelligence, not everyone have this ability to make the relationship between the fact that an apple fell from tree and the gravity. Thus, children entitle to make choices by themselves.


Another critical merit of making choices by children is that during the process of making decision by themselves they could learn how to do something independently. It is hardly deny that parents always draw the blueprint for their children, hoping they could make less mistakes and get succeed in the future. Nevertheless, this may do harm for children because they do not know how to deal with emergency. Only after children learn from the failure could they know how to avoid it
next time.


Hence, after understanding the reasoning above, it is quite important that let children make choices by themselves. No matter how beneficial could children get from the choice is made by their parents. Parents should not help determined the future of their children in that children have rights to choose what their future will be like.

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9.9

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In modern society, movie, as a method of entertaining in one's spare time, could affect people's behaviors when those person（删去） after seeing movies. The debate of only the movies could teach us something about real life are worth watching has been discussed drastically.（最好不要抄题目） As far as I concerned, I agree with this statement. The following reasoning will account for this.

First and foremost, only can（删去） the movie presents some values which are meaningful for citizens are worth watching. For example, the movie Titanic which showed on the screen last century created many recorded in the movie field. Why was this movie so popular in that time and even could not be replaced till now? The reason is the theme it teach, the eternal love, which is spreaded through the whole society.  
Jack supported the Lucy in the chill water until he died. This episode may have been remembered in most people's heart bottom. (删去吧) Has the same influence is the movie Forrest Gump, when I saw it many years ago, the sentence "life was like a box of chocolates, you just never know what you are gonna get" be my motto. The spirit persistence which is reflected from the movie has motivated me to go forward whatever I confront the difficulties.（这段的例子写的太过于详细，可以把最经典的内容写出来，就可以了）

Another reason is that some movies could remind us what we should do in the real life. When I looked the disastrous movies like The Day After Tomorrow and 2012, I felt human beings have(删除) the responsibility to protect our own planet. Otherwise, may be hundreds years later, human will no longer exist in this beautiful planet. Therefore, by watching these movies could we reduce the pollution to the environment, such as not use the disposable items. Furthermore, the movie Spiderman tells us that we should inhibit the crime to make our society peaceful. And the phrase "With great power comes great responsibility" impresses me a lot. Thus those movies which teach us about real life is worth watching

Finally, not all movies have good themes, maybe some adverse points exist in the movie which do harm for the society after someone watching, especially the children. Nowadays the rate about adolescent crimes has increased quickly and the violence possesses the large part. According to a survey, about seventy percent of adolescents said they would imitate the scenery from the movie. Thus, I believe the negative movies have a lot to do with these cases in community. Considering the bad effect some movies creat, without any doubt, they are not worthy to watch
Taking all these causes into consideration, it goes without saying that it is only worth watching movie that can teach us something about real life.

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9.16 作业by kimi0428

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9.30 by kimi0428
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It is not exaggerated to say that travel, as a method（methods是方法，要说娱乐的方式就way吧） of entertainment, has played a important role in human's life,（语法我看不懂叻） people get accustomed to relaxing through taking a trip in their vacation. Recently, a fashionable trend of traveling to a foreign country has widespread in our country, （句法在哪）attractive landscape, mysterious history and delicious food are main reasons appealing to so many people travel abroad. Most of them think they get many benefits from the trip. As far as I am concerned, nonetheless, hardly can I go with this opinion, I reckon traveling in my own country rather than foreign country benefit me a lot. The following reasoning will account for this.（有深厚的词汇量，但是句法还不是很好，先练简单句嘛）

First and foremost, the benefits of traveling outsider, such as（to） get the opportunity to look the beautiful scenery and appreciate the history, pales in comparison to travel in own country. Nowadays, as the government invests so many funds in constructing transportation infrastructure, people could get any places quickly and directly. Also, people could decide to visit their favorite cities regardless of considering how much time they can stay there. Thus, attributing(attribute sth to , or sth is attributed to) to the convenient transportation and much more free time, people traveling in own country could get more opportunities to watch the famous scenery and to share unique tradition in other places in their country. However, those chances are so scarce in traveling to foreign country. Taking myself for(an) example, last winter I traveled with my sister to British about seven days, within those days I traveled about eight cities, maybe you would consider I had experienced a exciting journey, nevertheless, I thought this trip was so boring because most of time I just sat in the bus and told with my sister, and only a few of time I could get to look the native scenery and appreciate the culture. Therefore, traveling in own country people could decide to visit any places they want, however, traveling in a foreign country people have to follow the schedule which could make them get less opportunity to acquaint a foreign country.

Moreover, traveling in own country have more chances to eat(of eating) special food from places to places. There are so many regional cuisines in our country, but only you travel there you can get a chance to share the delicious food. As a gourmet, if I can not take care about my stomach, anything will lose meaning. Still take the trip I visited British for instance, at the beginning of the trip I thought the food was very special due to the curiosity, but a few days later I found the recipe was so simple and every day we just ate the some kind of food. Thus, from my perspective, traveling in my own country could fulfill my demand for food.

Finally, I should admit that traveling in a foreign country could bring some benefits to people. For example, people traveling abroad can get a lot of opportunities to communicate with native people, this kind of experience was very worthwhile. What's more, travel abroad can provide numerous knowledge and experiences which are useful for one's life.

To sum up, traveling in a foreign or at own country has advantages respectively. In my point of view, I still recommend people travel in their own country.
你的论点还是蛮新颖的，但句法确实有问题，还有啦，托福文章怎么可以这么长？大于300词就够了，30mins！！~~