TOEFL 2009上半年-Dark_Tournament写作组 网兜妮妮第三十二次作业

网兜妮妮UID: 2612538

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Observation or studying animals can help us to human nature. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer (其实这个题目超级不会写，有没有高人建议呀？....)

I have a dog in my home for almost a year, whose name is TATA, and I can feel I was different from a year ago when I had no pets. Actually, now TATA is treated as a family member, and I believe living with him, I learnt more not only about animals but also human beings. So，as to me, I do think observation and studying animals can help us to human nature, my pet told me a lot about these.

First, animals can show things directly than we do, so, observation through animals may be easily to find the cause and effect, which is always the same to human. Take my dog as an example, last month my dog was ill, I can find that he was unhappy all day and showed no interested in anything, including his favorite food. The only exception was he likes being stroked by my hands as before. From this little thing, I just find that every one needs care, although some one apparently shows he/she do not need us stay with him/her when he/she was in blue, he/she indeed needs us. But for other reasons, maybe he/she thought we are busy as well, he/she speaks out the untruth words. After that, every time when my friends meet difficulties, I was there with them, no matter how busy I was, I know they need me, this is a human nature.

Secondly, when we study animals, like doing researches about how they organized, we will learn lessons as well. I can think of a research as an example, which was sited in my paper and it is about how ants working together to let the community out of danger. It says when the ant hole was in fire, the ants hugged with each other to consist a big ball, and then they were rolling out of the fire. The result was that the outside ants were fired and dead but which in the center were alive. The out circle ants save others in a way by sacrificing themselves. It is great indeed. And the study provides a good way to reexamine the human nature. When a community or even a country was in danger, some humans did as the out circle ants which sacrificed their life for other’s safety. The examples are numerous like in earthquakes or during a war. They are heroes and it is showing the human nature.

In short, as the reasons showed above, I do agree that observation or studying animals can help us a lot to human nature, through which we will know ourselves deeper and do better in the future.

奔跑蜗牛UID: 2579189

First, animals can show things directly than we do 比较下 比如人们的那些行为不容易观察 而动物比较容易观察
Secondly, when we study animals, like doing researches about how they organized, we will learn lessons as well. 我们可以学到什么 举例子啥的 然后分析 比如合作啊  动物要躲避天敌 他们不得不合作

奔跑蜗牛UID: 2579189

观点都有了 还是很好扩展的了

网兜妮妮UID: 2612538

恩恩，谢谢蜗牛啦，这两点其实是我硬挤出来的，不过可以根据你说的再扩展下，谢谢~~

gundammoleUID: 2300958

1# 网兜妮妮
I have a dog in my home for almost a year, whose name is TATA, and I can feel I was different from a year ago when I had no pets. Actually, now TATA is treated as a family member, and I believe living with him, I learnt more not only about animals but also human beings. So，as to me, I do think observation and studying animals can help us to human nature, my pet told me a lot about these.

First, animals can show things directly than we do, so, observation through animals may be easily(easy) to find the cause and effect, which is always the same to human. Take my dog as an example, last month my dog was ill, I can find that he was unhappy all day and showed no interested in anything, including his favorite food. The only exception was he likes being stroked by my hands as before. From this little thing, I just find that every one needs care, although some one apparently shows he/she do not need us stay with him/her when he/she was in blue, he/she indeed needs us. But for other reasons, maybe he/she thought we are busy as well, he/she speaks out the untruth words. After that, every time when my friends meet difficulties, I was there with them, no matter how busy I was, I know they need me, this is a human nature.

Secondly, when we study animals, like doing researches about how they organized, we will learn lessons as well. I can think of a research as an example, which was sited in my paper and it is about how ants working together to let the community out of danger. It says when the ant hole was in fire, the ants hugged with each other to consist (form) a big ball, and then they were rolling out of the fire. The result was that the outside ants were fired and dead but which in the center were alive. The out circle ants save others in a way by sacrificing themselves. It is great indeed. And the study provides a good way to reexamine the human nature. When a community or even a country was in danger, some humans did as the out circle ants which sacrificed their life for other’s safety. The examples are numerous like in earthquakes or during a war. They are heroes and it is showing the human nature.

In short, as the reasons showed above, I do agree that observation or studying animals can help us a lot to human nature, through which we will know ourselves deeper and do better in the future.
写的不错,论点很清楚,特别喜欢TATA的例子.语句貌似没什么好改的.
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