花拉子密的作文

hualazimiUID：2707120

11.25

Have you ever been shacked in Titanic that Jack giving up his right to life for his beloved girl? Have you ever been moved to banker Andy in The Shaw Shank Redemption's pursuit of freedom and hope? He once said:" Some birds are not caged, their feathers are just too bright." The television gives us a window to the world. It brings our life a great impact.
With the development of media, the world has become smaller and smaller. We can get to know all the events taken place only staying at home. TV media offers a large amount of programs for us to choose. The televison let us always keep updating their knowledge, learn the latest information and knowledge. What's more, television news with abundant images, sound records and pictures can better deliverthe truth about the event.
As Television comes into our daily life, it exhibits some excellent film can allow us to learn a lot of knowledge and truth, the priciple of survival, moral norms and human thinking view of the world, even experience in different life. All these are benefit for us. When we watch "Harry Potter and the sorcerer's Stone", we know how friendship and love overcome evil and greed. We also understand even without parents we can still be optimistic and happy. The lines in The pursuit of Happiness:"There is no "why" in happiness", there is an "I". That make us believe our happiness depends on our efforts. "Just as if both had passed through the grave, and we stood at God's feet, equal as we are!" Jane Eyre said. She was a poor and even not a beautiful girl, but she had a noble soul, survival with her own wisdom. From her, we know that women should have their own ideas, minds, rather than relying on a man. All these above are brought by television.
However, the telephone has its own contribution to society, we can tell to friends whenever we want instead of writting letters. We can hear their sounds and even know their feelings. While,television can carry images and sounds so the information appeared to us is vividly to understand. In this point of view, I think the televison has a great effect in our life.

soarer0474UID：2665789

Have you ever been shacked in Titanic that Jack giving up his right to life for his beloved girl? Have you ever been moved to banker Andy in The Shaw Shank Redemption's pursuit of freedom and hope? （moved by the banker, Andy 's pursuit of freedom and hope in The Shaw Shank Redemption?） He once said:" Some birds are not caged, their feathers are just too bright." (原句是这个You know some birds are not meant to be caged, their feathers are just too bright. ，如果你不太肯定的话应该用that从句) The television gives us a window to the world. It brings our life a great impact." v( R7 g0 X$ |, k2 T
With the development of media, the world has become smaller and smaller. We can get to know all the events taken place only staying at home. TV media offers a large amount of(只能修饰可数名词的：a large/ great/ good number of, a good/ great many, dozens of, scores of, quite a few

只能修饰不可数名词的：a great deal of, a large amount of, quite a little, a large sum of

既可修饰可数也可修饰不可数名词的：plenty of, a lot of, lots of, a large quantity of, a good supply of) programs for us to choose. The televison let us always keep updating their knowledge, learn the latest information and knowledge. What's more, television news with abundant images, sound records and pictures can better deliverthe truth about the event.' e; [$ x' G* K7 S5 U3 K: ^: W
As Television comes into our daily life, it exhibits some excellent film can allow us to learn a lot of knowledge and truth, the priciple of survival, moral norms and human thinking view of the world, even experienceS in different life. All these are benefit beneficial
for us. When we watch "Harry Potter and the sorcerer's Stone", we know how friendship and love overcome evil and greed. We also understand even without parents we can still be optimistic and happy 什么意思没有看明白. The lines in The pursuit of Happiness:" There is no "why" in happiness", there is an "I". That make us believe our happiness depends on our efforts. "Just as if both had passed through the grave, and we stood at God's feet, equal as we are!" Jane Eyre said. She was a poor and even not a beautiful girl, but she had a noble soul, survival with her own wisdom. From her, we know that women should have their own ideas, minds, rather than relying on a man.(rather than 用法：
He loves her rather than likes her.

他不是喜欢她,而是爱她
) All these above are brought by television.
However, the telephone has its own contribution to society, we can tell to friends whenever we want instead of writting letters. We can hear their sounds and even know their feelings. While,television can carry images and sounds so the information appeared to us is vividly to understand. In this point of view, I think the televison has a great effect in our life.

优点：词汇和材料很多，这两点值得我学习
开头的引入也很不错。
缺点：
1 某些词词性掌握有误
2 逻辑结构有问题：首先是整体中间两段论证并不是平行的分论点，当然如果你是故意将第三个段作为详细展开说明的话，也不算太大问题，主要是最后一段中，说了电话的好处，然后突然总结出电视更重要感觉有点突兀

hualazimiUID：2707120

11.26作文
As the development of society, computer comes into being. It brings us a lot of benefits and let our daily life more convenient and comfortable. However, it is a double-sided sword due to it's negative effects for our youngsters.

More and more teenagers like playing computer games because they can get something they couldn't obtain in the real world, like to be a king in a kindom which will brings their sense of successful, and they can also be excited in the fantastic internet game instead of a insipid life. While, if students take a lot of time to play computer games, it will do harm to both their body and spirit. It's a waste of time for us spending on this meanless activities. College students when they are still freshmen they usually have a lot of work to do, homework to hand in and experience to report. Since our energy is limited, if our after-class time took up much by computer games, thus we have little time to review our class and there will be some difficulties catching up with professor's lecture. If such stuation contiunes, it will bring some bad effects on our further development. One of the graduate students in our department was addicted in playing computer games and didn't pass the exam several times, because of this he got three times of warns from school, after the fourth time, he was forced to leave our university. What a pity! Such a talented person didn't get a master degree in mathematics.

Moreover, it is unwise to spend so much time playing computer games, we can go for a trip with our friends or even stay at home with our families in our leisure time. Futhermore, we can also choose to do some outdoor excise to breath the fresh air and get close to nature.

While, before we prohibit our children playing computer games for a long time. We should identify which kinds of games they play. Some software designed for study like "I love recite words", this kind of game can rouse the interest in study. In this way, parents should encourage their kids playing this type of game.

In my opinion, whether the children should spend a lot of time on playing computer games based on what kind of games. Most of time, we students should study hard first and limit our time for playing.

hualazimiUID：2707120

11.27作文
I disagree that good looks and dresses are important for success. Although, for some extent, people's wearing can reflect their characters. Take a extreme case for example, a well-dressed man seldom spits at random, a woman in glorious dresses is more likely to talk in a gentle tone, and a clean dressed child seems quiet than others. However, good idea is a necessary condition of success.

Many celebrities don't care their wearing even some details in the daily life. Antoni Gaudi, Catalan architect, one of the most creative practitioners of his art in modern times. His famous design Bishop's Palace and Park Guell let people know how architect can emulate nature vividly. However, Gaudi had a simple life, and even wearing in rags. When he was injured in a car crash, people thought he was a beggar, and then sent him to the hospital and a old woman recognized that it was Gaudi, the famous architect and the outstanding citizen in Spain.  The same thing happened to Einstein, once he was obsessed in the problem he thought, he didn't know he was still wearing pajamas and wrapped in the blanket when walking on the street.

Everyone desires to realize his/her own values; people with different occupation have its own creative and good ideas maybe approach to success. For example, a good leader should have a vision that he can inspire and lift individuals and groups to new heights, a successful teacher should have a capability to change her communicating techniques to be sure students can grasp instructional concepts and know which student need extra assistance, a helpful psychotherapist should have his own way to solve people's emotional problems, recover from mental illnesses and regain people's self-confidence. All these above require people's good ideas in their own job rather than a simple good looking.

In my point of view, we should accumulate knowledge and have our unique innovative ideas in our own field. Only in this way, we can get closer to success and have our own achievements.

line126UID：2556583

As the development of society,(As the society develops 或者 with the development of ...) computer comes into being. It brings us a lot of benefits and let our daily life more convenient and comfortable. However, it is a double-sided sword due to it's(its) negative effects for our youngsters.
More and more teenagers like playing computer games because they can get something they couldn't obtain in the real world, like to be a king in a kindom which will brings their(them the) sense of successful(success), and they can also be excited in the fantastic internet game(s) instead of a（删） insipid life(lives). While,(And) if students take a lot of time to play computer games, it will do harm to both their body(bodies) and spirit. It's a waste of time for us(children) spending (time) on this meanless activities. College students , especially when they are still freshmen, they usually have a lot of work to do, for example, homework to hand in and experience to report（报告经历？感觉很奇怪，大学好像没这项任务）. Since our(chilren's) energy is limited, if our after-class time  is took up much by computer games, thus(前面有since后面就不能有thus) we(children) have little time to review our(their) classes and there will be some difficulties in catching up with professor's lectures. If such stuation contiunes（拼写错误）, it will bring some bad effects on our(chilren's)  further development. One of the graduate students in our department was addicted in playing computer games and didn't pass the exam several times, because of this(which) he got three times of warns from school, (.And) after the fourth time, he was forced to leave our university. What a pity! Such a talented person didn't get a master degree in mathematics.7 a4 m. A8 U5 g; ~* {3 r% k3 a
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Moreover, it is unwise to spend so much time playing computer games, we can go for a trip with our friends or even stay at home with our families in our leisure time. Futhermore, we can also choose to do some outdoor excise to breath the fresh air and get close to nature.
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While, before we prohibit our children playing computer games for a long time. We should identify which kinds of games they play.（这句放在这里不知道什么意思） Some softwares designed for study like "I love recite(reciting) words", this kind of game 删掉can rouse the interest in study. In this way, parents should encourage their kids playing this type of game（softwares）.. E: S4 n. \  E
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In my opinion, whether the children should spend a lot of time on playing computer games based on what kind of games(the kind of the games 或者 what kind of games they are playing). Most of time, we students should study hard first and limit our time for playing.

1.注意下语法
2.题目其实问的是children 我个人觉得大学生和研究生不能算children 而且不应该出现那么多our we……

asandylauUID：2649369

As(with) the development of society, computer comes into being. It brings us a lot of benefits and let our daily life more convenient and comfortable. However, it is a double-sided sword due to it's （its）negative effects for（to） our youngsters.

More and more teenagers like playing computer games because they can get something they couldn't obtain in the real world, like to be a king in a kindom which will brings their sense of successful, and they can also be excited in the fantastic internet game instead of a insipid life. While（Yet）, if students take a lot of time to play computer games, it will do harm to both their body and spirit. It's a waste of time for us spending （time） on this meanless activities. College students when they are still freshmen they usually have a lot of work to do, homework to hand in and experience to report. Since our energy is limited, if our after-class time （is） took（taken） up much by computer games, thus we have little time to review our class and there will be some difficulties catching up with professor's lecture. If such stuation contiunes, it will bring some bad effects on our further development. One of the graduate students in our department was addicted in playing computer games and didn't pass the exam several times, because of this he got three times of warns from school, （改一个句子After）after the fourth time, he was forced to leave our university. What a pity! Such a talented person didn't get a master degree in mathematics.+ U% ]  ^) X: }

Moreover, it is unwise to spend so much time playing computer games, we can go for a trip with our friends or even stay at home with our families in our leisure time. Futhermore, we can also choose to do some outdoor excise to breath the fresh air and get close to nature.3 W& L1 x9 `! B4 ^

While, before we prohibit our children playing computer games for a long time. We should identify which kinds of games they play. Some software designed for study like "I love recite words", this kind of game can rouse the interest in study. In this way, parents should encourage their kids playing this type of game.
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In my opinion, whether the children should spend a lot of time on playing computer games based on what kind of games. Most of time, we students should study hard first and limit our time for playing.

作者的水平有待提高，很多语意有问题，第2个观点严重不足，结尾没有能总结全文，而只是提了一个建议，字数好像也不够，需要好好练习。

hualazimiUID：2707120

11.30独立写作

As our society becoming more and more competitive, we should teach children the sense of competition and spirit of cooperation. What's more children can communicate with others with different culture backgrounds. So playing sports in contests seems to be a better choice.

In competition games, children can recognize their own deficiencies in the competition and learn how to get along well with other team workers. Moreover, it can help children develop a sense of group honor. For example, baseball is one of the most popular games in the United States. Many universities have baseball teams made up of its own student players. They usually play against other teams in their athletic conference during the spring. According to this event, different groups of students against each other, it will improve their skills at the same time they know the aspects of others' strength and their weakness. This competition will also enrich the students' after-school life, build up the cohesion of people, and enhance capability of teamwork and competitive power.

The more important thing is that some league matches can promote the communication in the students from different states. It is not only the promotion of the physical skill but also the enhancement of friendship. What is more, the competitions will help to shape the characters of students. In the contests, the athletes should not be arrogant and disappointment whether they win or lose.

However, I think it is not a contradiction play sports in competition or for fun. Sometime, when are in a competition, striving for win itself is a kind of fun. I clearly remember the first time we organize our girl-basketball team in our class to against another class's team. In the contest, what we thought is how to find competitor's deficiency and make ourselves vulnerable. We didn't even feel tired through this whole process. When we won this game, all our classmates cheered and congratulate for victory. I still think it is my happiest experience in my high school life.

So in my point of view, playing sports in competition and contests is benefit for children and students. And they can also find their interests through the process.

happyfaith2008UID：2709856

先占个楼，一会儿就改。嘿嘿！

hualazimiUID：2707120

12.1 独立写作
Some scientists are responsible for the negative impacts that made by their discoveries, what do you think?

Since the Industry Revolution, so many new technologies and innovations come into our daily life. Our living is more convenient and comfortable than any other period of time in the past.
However, when we are enjoying the benefits of these inventions, have we seen the negative effects for us? Are the scientists responsible for the bad impacts that made by their discoveries? In my opinion, it is unfair for them to responsible for these terrible consequences.

Some inventions we cannot imagine before become true today. With the refrigerator, we can store food for a long time and take it out whenever we want. With the air conditioner, we need not to suffer the scorching weather in summer and chill wind in winter. But the raw materials they used can make a serious threat to our atomsphere. This is found after a long period of time, the scientists might not know the bad impacts of those inventions, if they knew early, things will not be so bad today.

We all know that DDT, the colorless chemical pesticide, it's inventor won the Nobel Price because DDT can kill almost all kinds of insects in the crop, for some extent, it protected the plants and incresed the productivity. However, with the publication of the American marine biologist Rachel Carson's Silent Spring in 1962, suspicion grew that DDT, by entering the food chain and eventually concentrating in higher animals, caused reproductive dysfunctions, such as thin eggshells in some birds. Some insect pests also gradually developed DDT-resistant strains whose populations grew unchecked while their natural predators, such as wasps, were being eradicated by spraying. From this point of view, DDT brings us more disasters than benefits. While, the inventor's primary idea was to save more crops and plants which can feed more people. And he didn't know what will be going on.Thus, we have no reasons to blame the scientists or the inventors.

As the society getting complicated increasingly, some people may develop these inventions toward bad directions. It doesn't matter with the original scientists. Thus, in my point of view, I think the scientists and inventors should not be responsible for the negative effects laterly.

soarer0474UID：2665789

11.30独立写作
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As our society is becoming more and more competitive, we should teach children the sense of competition and the spirit of cooperation. What's more children can communicate with others with different culture backgrounds. So playing sports in contests seems to be a better choice.(前面就没有选择，怎么会有better 呢，而且第二句的逻辑性也不强)
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In competition games（competition games选一个）, children can recognize their own deficiencies in the competition and learn how to get along well with other team workers. Moreover, it can help children develop a sense of group honor. For example, baseball is one of the most popular games in the United States. Many universities have baseball teams made up of its（their） own student players. They usually play against other teams in their athletic conference during the spring. According to this event, different groups of students against each other, it will improve their skills at the same time they know the aspects of others' strength and their weakness. This competition will also enrich the students' after-school life, build up the cohesion of people, and enhance capability of teamwork and competitive power.) [  X4 R% v: U4
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The more important thing is that some league matches can promote the communication in the students from different states. It is not only the promotion of the physical skill but also the enhancement of friendship. What is more, the competitions will help to shape the characters of students. In the contests, the athletes should not be arrogant and disappointment whether they win or lose.


However, I think it is not a contradiction play sports in competition or for fun（）？）. Sometime, when （主语）are in a competition, striving for win itself is a kind of fun. I clearly remember the first time we organize our girl-basketball team in our class to against another class's team. In the contest, what we thought is how to find competitor's deficiency and make ourselves vulnerable（用反了吧）. We didn't even feel tired through this whole process. When we won this game, all our classmates cheered and congratulate for victory. I still think it is my happiest experience in my high school life.

So in my point of view, playing sports in competition and contests(重复) is benefit for children and students (重复). And they can also find their interests through the process.

整体来说结构还不错
最大的问题是第一段就没有开好，
似乎很急的样子，首先把第一段写好嘛。
还有就是最后一段感觉总结不太有力，比较单薄的感觉，
另外中间第二段中例子分析的应该更细一点，引申的不够具体
不过用词还可以，语法部分需要注意。

shiwei83UID：2680950

Since the Industry Revolution, so many new technologies and innovations come into our daily life. Our living is more convenient and comfortable than any other period (of time in the past删去).
However, when we are enjoying the benefits of these inventions, have we seen the negative effects for us? Are the scientists responsible for the bad（似乎用adverse更好） impacts that made by their discoveries? In my opinion, it is unfair for them to responsible for these terrible consequences.

Some inventions we cannot imagine before become true today. With the refrigerator, we can store food for a long time and take it out whenever we want. With the air conditioner, we need not to suffer the scorching weather in summer and chill wind in winter. But the raw materials they used can make a serious threat to our atomsphere.（atmosphere） This（these） is found（had been founded）after a long period of time, the scientists might not know the bad(adverse) impacts of those inventions, if they knew early, things will not be so bad today.

We all know that DDT, the colorless chemical pesticide, it's inventor won the Nobel Price because DDT can kill almost all kinds of insects（pests） in the crop（field）, for some extent, it protected the plants and incresed the productivity. However, with the publication of the American marine biologist Rachel Carson's Silent Spring in 1962（例子举得非常好）, suspicion grew that DDT, by entering the food chain and eventually concentrating in higher animals, caused reproductive dysfunctions, such as thin eggshells in some birds. Some （insect删除） pests also gradually developed DDT-resistant strains whose populations grew unchecked while their natural predators, such as wasps, were being eradicated by spraying. From this point of view, DDT brings us more disasters than benefits. While, the inventor's primary idea was to save more crops and plants which can feed more people. And he didn't know what will be going on.Thus, we have no reasons to blame the scientists or the inventors.
As the society getting complicated increasingly, some people may develop these inventions toward bad directions. It doesn't matter with the original （ideas of）scientists. Thus, in my point of view, I think the scientists and inventors should not be responsible for the negative effects laterly.

文章的例子举得很好，值得我学习。但是部分用词和语法部分需要注意。
结构方面，似乎段与段之间的过渡看得不是很清楚，最好能把每段的中心观点放在第一句，然后结合事例具体论证。

SilentScorpiusUID：2686998

Since the Industry Revolution, so many new technologies and innovationscome into our daily life. Our living is more convenient and comfortable thanany other period of time in the past.
    However,when we are enjoying the benefits of these inventions, have we seen thenegative effects for us? Are the scientists responsible for the bad（最好换词）impacts that made by their discoveries?（连续设问，这个很有意思） In my opinion, it isunfair for them to responsible for these terrible consequences.+   
    Some inventions we cannot imagine before become true today. With therefrigerator, we can store food for a long time and take it out whenever wewant. With the air conditioner, we need not to suffer the scorching weather insummer and chill wind in winter. But the raw materials they used can make aserious threat to our atomsphere. This is found after a long period of time,the scientists might not know the bad impacts of those inventions, if they knewearly, things will not be so bad today.

    We all know that DDT, the colorless chemical pesticide, it's inventor won theNobel Price because DDT can kill almost all kinds of insects in the crop（farm）, for some extent, itprotected the plants and incresed the productivity. However, with thepublication of the American marine biologist Rachel Carson's Silent Spring in1962, suspicion grew that DDT, by entering the food chain and eventuallyconcentrating in higher animals, caused reproductive dysfunctions, such as thineggshells in some birds. (这个例子很强大)Some insect pests alsogradually developed DDT-resistant strains whose populations grew uncheckedwhile their natural predators, such as wasps, were being eradicated by spraying.From this point of view, DDT brings us more disasters than benefits. While, theinventor's primary idea was to save more crops and plants which can feed morepeople. And he didn't know what will be going on. Thus, we have no reasons toblame the scientists or the inventors.2 S1 m%x2 l# h4 P' z# R% E
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As the society getting complicated increasingly, some people may develop theseinventions toward bad directions. It doesn't matter with the originalscientists. （感觉还能加一句，比如要鼓励原创思想，不受束缚之类的）Thus, in my point of view,I think the scientists and inventors should not be responsible for the negativeeffects laterly.

词汇很丰富，所选的例子也很不错，但主要论点只是从科学家的出发点是无害的，论点还可以更多一些。

hualazimiUID：2707120

12.2作文
When I have some leisure time, I would like to choose to see a movie at home with my families and friends. It will make me comfortable and relax after a day of hard work or study. What's more, it can enhance the relationship between us.

I clearly remember when I was in high school, I went to my classmate's home, she invented me to see Titanic together. When we saw the scene that Jack giving up his right to life for his beloved girl, both of us moved and had tears in our eyes. It is the time we knew we have the same interests and we can share our feelings with each other. Finally, she became my best friends. Nowadays, we still usually see movies together and discuss the roles in the play. We are surprised that we have much in common.

There is another advantage of seeing moving at home is that we can get more time communicating with my families and have a happy time during the movie. When I was a little kid, my grandmother usually took me in her arms and saw TV programs and children movies in the sofa, she often help  me explain some plots in the movie and told me the truth of life. Although my grandmother passed away many years ago, I think this is the happiest period of time in my life. When I was a university student, everytime I go home for holidays, we families will get together in the living see the TV programs and talk the current situation to each other. Our parents and I regard it as a family members' reunion.

Seeing movie with other people in the theater is become expensive increasingly, especially some directed by famous directors. Since we students have no source of income, we prefer to choose staying at home and see the movies on the computer or video player. And in this way, we can  
select the one we like and also playback anytime we want.

So in my perspective, I would like to see movies at home with my relatives and friends. They will make me happy and I really cherish every minute spent with them.

shirley072UID：2712200

When I have some leisure time, I would like to choose to see a movie at home with my families and friends. It will make me comfortable and relax after a day of hard work or study. What's more, it can enhance the relationship between us (our relationships).+ I. s# {% c1 @

I clearly remember when I was in high school, I went to my classmate's home, she invented (invited) me to see Titanic together (两个简单句重复啦，并在一起好了my classmate invited me to see Titanic at her home). When we saw the scene that Jack giving (gave) up his right to life for his beloved girl, both of us moved and had tears in our eyes. It is (was) the time we knew we have (had) the same interests and we can share our feelings with each other. Finally, she became my best friends. Nowadays, we still usually see movies together and discuss the roles in the play. We are surprised that we have much in common.

There is another advantage of seeing moving at home, is that (that is) we can get more time communicating with my families and have a happy time during the movie (we和my前后不一致). When I was a little kid, my grandmother usually took me in her arms and saw TV programs and children movies in the sofa, she often help me explain some plots (explain some plots to me) in the movie and told me the truth of life. Although my grandmother passed away many years ago, I think this (those old days) is the happiest period of time in my life. When I was (Then I became) a university student, everytime I go (时态跟前面一致还是跟后面？要统一) home for holidays, we families will get together in the living (room to) see the TV programs and talk the current situation to each other. Our parents and I regard it as a family members' reunion. (题目说的是电影，最好不要说电视节目吧)

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Seeing movie with other people in the theater is become expensive increasingly, especially some directed (produced) by famous directors. Since we students have no source of income, we prefer to choose staying at home and see the movies on the computer or video player. And(去掉) in this way, we can select the one we like and also playback anytime we want. 2 f; }% b. F9 {6 x0 q/ K$ o
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So in my perspective, I would like to see movies at home with my relatives and friends. They will make me happy and I really cherish every minute spent with them.


第三段开始说There is another advantage of… 但是偶没有看到第二段里面有哪个advantage哦，总的来说我觉得写得不错哦，除了第二段，我觉得还是在写增进感情关系，跟第三段主要阐述得内容差别不大呢，可以再想想，其实我觉得把倒数第二段再加点内容也就可以了呵呵

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When I have some leisure time, I would like to choose to see a movie at home with my families and friends. It will make me comfortable and relax after a day of hard work or study. What's more, it can enhance the relationship between us.

I clearly remember when I was in high school, I went to my classmate's home, she invented（invited） me to see Titanic together. When we saw the scene that Jack giving up his right to life for his beloved girl, both of us moved and had tears in our eyes（moved into tears）. It is the time we knew we have the same interests and we can share our feelings with each other. Finally, she became my best friends. Nowadays, we still usually see movies together and discuss the roles in the play. We are surprised that we have much in common..

There is another advantage of seeing moving（movie） at home is that we can get more time communicating with my families and have a happy time during the movie. When I was a little kid, my grandmother usually took me in her arms and saw TV programs and children movies in the sofa, she often help  me explain some plots in the movie and told me the truth of life. Although my grandmother passed away many years ago, I think this is the happiest period of time in my life. When I was a university student, everytime I go home for holidays, we families will get together in the living see the TV programs and talk the current situation to each other. Our parents and I regard it as a family members' reunion. （最好不要提电视节目，有离题之嫌）

Seeing movie with other people in the theater is become expensive increasingly, especially some directed by famous directors（Big shot大片). Since we students have no source of income（删去no source）, we prefer to choose staying at home and see the movies on the computer or video player. And in this way, we can select the one we like and also playback anytime we want. (这一点可以再展开论证）

So in my perspective, I would like to see movies at home with my relatives and friends. They will make me happy and I really cherish every minute spent with them.

最好能再想一个理由，因为文章中与朋友在一起也好，与家人在一起也好，都是在谈增进感情这个理由。另外，注意时态和语态的前后一致。