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还没开始写作文，有罪恶感了
下周开始写，希望大家监督

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是telephone 还是television对人类的有more effects2 a8 j& G8 F. o

这个题目写300多字还真的很难。。。。
第一次写作文，不限时的，板油多指教~~

Televisions and telephones,two of the 20th century’s greatest inventations,are necessary in most families.People use both of them in various aspects,range from entertainments to working.It seems that their importances are coordinative,but in my point of view, it’s televisions that change people’s life in a way out of the common.

As can be seen from the following data:in China,the rate of families that  possess a telephone had increased from 35% to 93% in 1990’s.With the appearance of the telephone,people get rid of endless waiting for letters f.We share our happinesses or worries with family and friends through telephones,we seek help in the emergency by calling 911…Faster and easier ,speak of communications,are the everlasting targets of human beings.Although we benefit form telephones so much,the development of new communication technologies has drew our attentions to Internet and cellphones.

While telephones are still fighting against new media, televisions are gaining more subscriptions from audiences successfully. In the final quarter of 2009 the average American spent almost 37 hours a week watching television. This year 116 millions of them saw the Super Bowl,a record for a single programme. In China，television is colonizing people’s entertainments. TV Shows like “China Idol” and “Total Soccer” draw huge audiences partly. Nothing can beat the enjoyments that watching television and talking with family or friends.
Why do people love televisions? It is obviously that it not only makes influences on entertainments but also provides a approach to education-at –home.Many chinese students learn English by watching CNN students’ news and some other programes from countries where English is a native tongue.What’s more,many topics derive from televisions that people are constantly messaging and talking about them, and discussing them on the Intern,new digital televisions can even communicate with the users to help their study. If there is one media business with a chance of completing the journey to the digital future looking when it set off, it is television.
From what have been discussed above ,we could draw a conclusion that with the forward steps of scient technology,telephone might fade out from our daily life while television would become more and more significant.

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[U2]both of them are of great importance



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kimi海纳UID: 2855420

Do you agree or disagree: Playing sports give you more lessons about the life.

这次还是不限时~~我这水平实在编不出来 两小时四十分
I firmly believe that playing sports,both mentally and physically, is the fundamental of a positive life.There’s not doubt that healthy people must have sports habits. Generally speaking, sports benefits us human in many aspects, by doing sports people will gain teamwork spirits, survival ability and toughnesses of character.


First,it is well known that most sports call for teamwork spirits. In a basketball match,there are 5 players in each team,although everyone has his or her own responsibility,cooperation is the key to wining.Because only when all the team mumbers perform as a whole can the team play excellently.Thus，teamwork spirit is one of the most vital factors in people’s work.Wherever you work,from big enterprises to farms, you should always keep in mind that you can not get successed all by yourself.

Also,doing sports features something that can save our life in emergency.Though danger would not happen everywhere,we still have to be ready for its arrival all the time.As the global climate is getting worse and worse increasingly,floods,
hurricane and bizzard come one by one without mercy.If you can master several survival ability,for example,swimming,climbing,running and so on,the possibililty of your survival will increase.In the other hand,even in civilised cities,criminals can not be repressed, we do not have to be armed to the teeth,learning kongfu and taekwondo are useful and fashionable now.In China,millions of children swarm into the gym every summer vacation,parents wish that learning kongfu or taekwondo will enable their children of defensive ability.

Last but not least,a man’s character would be strengthen in the process of constant exercise.To prove that I give a true story of myself:early this
year I participated in the XiaMen International Marathon in 10 kilometers event ,in order to prepare for the marathon I started training since august last year. Even in the severe winter and the hot summer ,I run several kilometers every day. Finally I finished the marathon in my best record,the joy of fulfillment encouraged me keep on chasing the faster and stronger.Moreover I find myself have became tough and patient in face of difficulties, as the training has changed my indulgent personality.

In summary,I am in favor of the viewpoint that playing sports gives me more lessons about life.As the
wisdom put it,”Life depend on sports” With the companion of sports,people would enjoy their life healthily and brightly.

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5# missmumuxi 谢谢啦~~

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悲剧啊~没人给我改.....

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为什么还是没人理啊？

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people should try several different jobs before they take a long term career.
第三次写作文了，还是不限时的。。。2小时
Most parents  want their children get a steady job as soon as they graduate.However,there is an increasing tendency in today’s  society that young people would like to try several different jobs before they take a long term carrer.As a young girl, I tatoly approve that we should
firstly come through some jobs,then decide which is the suitable one for us.
Many reasons contribute to explaining this standpoint.
Firstly,as the wisdom put it,“The truth originates from practise”,how can young people know that what is the best work for him or her without experiencing different jobs? This experience gives youth a sight into the real world,that they can gain capability which will help them get approach to their future carrer.For example,Warren Buffettthe, the famous investor,start working since 11 years old,he has try a great deal of jobs which range from selling ice-cream to stock marketing,finally he  has bacome a magnate in investing as well as the richest person all over the world.
Secondly,young people will benefit from their working experience in a wide  extent. In different jobs ,we can play diverse roles in the society and meet all kinds of people that will not only extend our field of vision, but also bring challenges to us. Everytime  people come to a new workplace ,they must force themselves to adapt to the job as soon as possible in spite of many difficulties.As a result ,people gain more knowledge when they face more hardnesses than others.That ‘s why more and more companies request the recruits be possessed of working experience in this competitive society.

Finally,young people are not afrid of failure and full of curiousity,thus youth is the best period for attempting.I firmly believe that we should fufill our adventurous dreams in this moment ,or we will be regret in our old age. Trying different jobs is a way to real the fantasy ,which implies that you can set the greedy boss aside and put your innovation in the work,or you can found your own business with a few money borrowed from parents.As we are young,we always have the chance to begin anew and learn lecture from former mistakes.For instance,my cousin ,who has tried 5 jobs in different fields since she graduated from a famous university,she is not worried at all because she believes that there is not a short cut to pursuing her dream.
Therefore, I applause that young people should try several different jobs before they take a long term career.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people should try several different jobs before they take a long term career.
第三次写作文了，还是不限时的。。。2小时
Most parents want their children get a steady job as soon as they graduate. However, there is an increasing tendency in today’s society that young people would like to try several different jobs before they take a long term carrer(career). As a young girl, I tatoly (totally) approve that we should firstly come through some jobs, then decide which is the suitable one for us.
Many reasons contribute to explaining this standpoint.
Firstly, as the wisdom put it, “The truth originates from practice”, (尽量不要说名人名言，XDF老师说的)how can young people know that what is the best work for him or her without experiencing different jobs? This experience gives youth a sight into the real world, that they can gain capability which will help them get approach to their future carrer（career）. For example,Warren Buffettthe, the famous investor, start working since 11 years old,he has try a great deal of jobs which range from selling ice-cream to stock marketing,finally he
has bacome（become） a magnate in investing as well as the richest person all over the world.
Secondly,young people will benefit from their working experience in a wide
extent. In different jobs ,we can play diverse roles in the society and meet all kinds of people that will not only extend our field of vision, but also bring challenges to us. Everytime
people come to a new workplace ,they must force themselves to adapt to the job as soon as possible in spite of many difficulties.As a result ,people gain more knowledge when they face more harnesses than others.That ‘s why more and more companies request the recruits be possessed of working experience in this competitive society.

Finally,young people are not afraid of failure and full of curiousity（curiosity）, thus youth is the best period for attempting. I firmly believe that we should fulfill our adventurous dreams in this moment ,or we will be regret in our old age. Trying different jobs is a way to real the fantasy ,which implies that you can set the greedy boss aside and put your innovation in the work, or you can found your own business with a few money borrowed from parents. As we are young, we always have the chance to begin anew and learn lecture from former mistakes. For instance, my cousin ,who has tried 5 jobs in different fields since she graduated from a famous university, she is not worried at all because she believes that there is not a short cut to pursuing her dream.

Therefore, I applause that young people should try several different jobs before they take a long term career.
尽量不要照抄原题、、、

你用什么软件写的这个啊，尽量注意写作的格式，一般来说、、一句话结束了，应该是先写标点，再空格，在写下一句话。。。还有注意单词、、

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