【Daily Writing作文特训小组】下垂眼之兔的惨淡作业

下垂眼之兔UID: 3249047

千里之行始于足下。。好吧恶心一晚上。。
我写的很屎，但是我会慢慢努力的。希望大家友好的批评指正
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100821NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? We should never be impolite to another person.  5


My friend Lee is a very clever girl, she is very soft and never be impolite to me or our classmate. Even not point out others mistake face to face. Nowdays, this seems to be a good way to keep up relationship between people. But, does it really us comfortable? The answer is: No, it makes us uncomfortable, for me, I like to hear the truly feeling. In fact , Lee does not have a real friend in deep relationship. So I strongly argue that , sometimes it is necessary to be impolite to others. At the same time ,I also consider that
sometimes being impolite to your friend will not destroy your relationship, besides it can makes you feel the relationship closer.

China-Daily once presented us a thought-provoking fact that we always consider it’s impolite to break one’s talking, but in fact 82% talker prefer to be broke their talking and ask question or point out the mistakes. The talkers think that can make them know that the audience is focusing on their speech, though that is impolite, it will not make them feel comfortable. See, being impolite can be also consider as another way of being candid. There is a lot of similar examples in our lives.

In another aspect , pointing out one’s mistakes face to face may be impolite. But compare to a friend like Lee who never point out others mistakes, majority of my friends choose those interrupt them and point out their mistakes. They said that “yeah, it really makes you feel embrrassed
at first, but that’s the real friend, right?” So sometimes being impolite makes people communication in a more direct way

Why, you may wonder, being impolite to another will makes people feel their relationship close? For me, if my friend being too polite to me, that really makes me feel barriers. So just be true ,never mention it is impolite or not. Then, I will feel closer. Like what I said above, politeness is acceptable.

In conclusion politeness can not be avoid. We need to consider as a Friendship catalyst, and do not always being too polite to your friends ,that really makes them feel barrier.

下垂眼之兔UID: 3249047

为什么我字体都调不好啊，很想让底下字儿大点的

紫梦于UID: 3232379

不晓得。。。

laozhanguotoeflUID: 3246339

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下垂眼之兔UID: 3249047

2、21独立100312NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To make children to well at school, parents should limit the hour that a child spends on watching TV.Use specific reasons to support your answer.(

In the rapid development of new technology today, the life of children become more and more colourful.They are no longer in the decade students go home do homework directly after school and the only entertaiment is to play football with classmates  or share their comic books.Now,thanks to the new technology,he most obivous change is Tv become more important than that in past.Should we limit the hour that a child spends on watching TV?My opinion is abosolutely : yes ,we should limit the time.

Firstly, I strongly doubt the quality of TV program.It's too much advertisement and soap,and children can not tell us the difference between blaclk an white by themselves,how could they choose the right program?In order to proving the rating,some action TV program even add a lot of bloody scence,and even without a "caution" at the beginning.My cousin Lee was frightened by this kind of program when he was only 7 , he just couldn't stop crying that night ,as a consequence he didn't not go to school for 2 days. See, if a child frightened by TV shows how could he get well with his classes?

Secondly,the most famous psychology academic magazine"The Psycologist" recently point out that comparing with text ,the video is easier for children to remember.Instead of memorizing the knowledge which they learn at school,majority of the students memorize more TV pot.And when the students take exam ,they can not focus on their paper.Due to the TV shows,more students remember the history details by mistakes and give more wrong anwser than the children those (这里这么用对么) do not watch TVprograms.As result those who does not watch TV get higher score,and do better in school.

The last but not the least, watching too much TV is bad to their eyes.Healthy is every thing,try to imagine even you can not see the black board clearly ,can you catch up with your classes? At the same time, more time spended on watching  TV made you do not have enough time to communicate with your classmates by taking exercise outside. It is not for you to get well with the class,right?

In conclusion, it is necessary for the parents to limit the time children spending on watching TV in order to let them to do well at school.

我有这么几个问题：空格和符号之间的关系，到底怎么控制空格 搞不清楚
还有就是可能是我词汇量太小吧，到了 结果，以至于，相比 就反复几个，希望大家谁好心 给我举几个词组，
最后就是我不知道怎么链接到当天的作文

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下垂眼之兔UID: 3249047

6# sarahchoo
能问一下空格和符号的关系么？

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Secondly, the most famous psychology academic magazine "The PsycologistPsychologist" recently point out that comparing with text ,the video is easier for children to remember. Instead of memorizing the knowledge which they learn at school, majority of the students memorize more TV pot. And when the students take exam ,they can not focus on their paper. Due to the TV shows, more students remember the history details by mistakes and give more wrong anwseranswer than the children who (这里这么用对么) do not watch TV programs. As result those who does not watch TV get higher score, and do better in school.
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The last but not the least, watching too much TV is bad to their eyes. Healthy is the basis of everything, try to imagine even you can notcannot see the black board clearly ,can you catch up with your classes? At the same time, more time spended spent on watching TV made you do not have enough time to communicate with your classmates by taking exercise outside. It is not for you to get well with the class, right?
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In conclusion, it is necessary for the parents to limit the time children spend on watching TV in order to let them
do well at school.

laozhanguotoeflUID: 3246339

符号后面加一个空格就ok了

laozhanguotoeflUID: 3246339

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下垂眼之兔UID: 3249047

悲催了 越写越嗨  写完发现自己好像写跑题了。。。。。。。
应该是社会地位和金钱。。我好像写成金钱的重要性了好像

money 到底是单数还是负数谁来解答一下？？？

by900125UID: 3016651

2.25 已改

by900125UID: 3016651

亲，我的寄托ID是by900125，能很好找到的，以后我要坚持每天都写了，多多交流。。。
这个是我作文帖的链接https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1335637-1-1.html

下垂眼之兔UID: 3249047

13# by900125
嗯嗯好的一起努力吧！！！！！！！

下垂眼之兔UID: 3249047

229的作业 独立写作 有点晚了