【Daily Writing作文特训小组】by900125的作业贴

by900125UID: 3016651

3月24日的T，初加入这个活动，希望和大家共同进步。。。。。
感谢每位帮助我改作文的童鞋！！！！！！！！！

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2月18日独立：Agree or disagree: The best way to learn about a foreign country is to read the newspaper and magazines from that country.

With the dramatic development of the information and technology, the world becomes much smaller and smaller, thus we have a lot of opportunities to learn a country, and the issue what is the best way to learn about a foreign country occurs at the same time. Most people believes that reading the newspapers and magazines form that country is the best way, on the contrary, I do not totally agree with it, because a lot of methods are effective for us to gain useful knowledge about a foreign a country.

First of all, the best way to learn about a foreign country I think is visiting the museums which can represent and reflect the outlooks of that country and values that residents most cherish. In the museums, a lot of elements that can help you know a country by the interpretation of the tour guides. For example, if we want to know the tradition of a country, a historical museum is a good choice. From the objects exhibited in the hall, such as tools, clothes, weapons and books, a past life are well represented. Tools teach us that how they live, clothes tell us what is value of beauty, and weapons describe what degree the technology of that country develops.

What is more, visiting a country and living with residents also is a best way to learn about a foreign country. Visiting a country, the real characteristics of geography are known by the journey of tour, and true weather is experienced at the same time. Besides, if we can live with the native people together, it will be a nice experience. We can learn the personality, outlooks of life and types of living throughly during the process of talking and living with them.

At last, maybe we should acknowledge that magazines and newspapers can help us learn about a country to some extent, but it is just effective and not the best. As we all know, essays and pictures in the magazines and newspapers are selected by the editors, and real and native information that can show a foreign country could be neglected own to some political reasons. And most important point is that a country leader is not willing to show all secrets in a foreign newspapers or magazines that all the word can see.

In summary, although magazines and newspapers are effective when we learn about a foreign country, it is not the best. Because there are many useful ways that we can use to learn about a country, so I do not totally agree with that statement that the best way to learn about a foreign country is to read the newspaper and magazines from that country.

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已改

紫梦于UID: 3232379

楼主为神马要自己随便写个题目。。。囧。。。

奔跑蜗牛UID: 2579189

第一段太长了，一看就想看哪句是中心 我要知道说什么才好啊
还有主体段的三段 都是the best way....  那么到底哪个才是best....
自相矛盾了啊

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2.19独立 agree or disagree: It is better to relax by a movie or reading a book that doing physical exercise.
As we can see, we live in such a society that everything is in a high pace, so we can easily get tired. It is significant to find a good way to relax, and some people suggest that reading a book or watching a movie in a quiet room is a good choice, while I do not agree with it. I prefer to do physical exercise outdoors. There are some reasons as following.

First of all, doing physical exercise outdoors can make us fresh and relaxed truly. Fresh air is an important element that makes us pleasant, sunshine is indispensable element that makes us much healthier, and the most meaningful point is that physical exercise also makes us more strong at the same time. After a day's heavy work, when you take a run along a river where trees and grasses are green and birds are flying around you, what a pleasant scene, I believe you will be more relaxed in that situation.

What is more, doing physical exercise also can release our emotional pressure easily, which make us more relaxed. As for me, when I feel tired or worried, playing basketball or football with my friends is my first choice, because I can talk with my friends at the same time, I will tell them what I am worried or what makes me exhausted, then they will gives me many useful advices that truly make me relaxed.

At last, although we should acknowledge that reading or watching a movie is also useful, the story that books or movies describe can bring us to that story, then we could forget what we are worrying about. But when we come back to our world, worries still exist. And one awful point that should be mentioned is that we still sit in a chair when we are reading or watching a movie, it is a bad option for someone who has sat for a whole day, so I do not select reading or watching a movie as a way to relax.

In summary, as far as I am concerned, way to relax is different for different people, one should select one that suits himself, so I do not agree that it is better to relax by a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise.

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刚加入这个活动，不知道哪里可以找到统一的题目，还请指教。。。。

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2.20  Agree or Disagree: People who go out from their village will be more successful and happier than people who stay in their village.

What can truly make people be happy and successful? From my respective, it is an abstract question, different people need different elements to be happy and successful. As to the issue whether people go out from their village will be more successful and happier, it is needed to be considered thoroughly. As for me, I would rather to say people in their village will be more successful and happier.

First and foremost, a number of friends are ready to help them when they are encountering difficulty in their village, which plays an important role in their way to success. Besides when you are out of your village and in an unfamiliar city, you will feel so lonely that you put most you attention in the period of missing your family. As for me, who is studying in a city that is thousands of miles away my little village, I always in an mood of recalling the happiness in the hometown, thus I cannot concentrate more on my study and I am not happy at all. So I believe one can be more successful and happier in their village.

What is more, village where you live in can provides you aggressive incentive that is indispensable for one's success. From my parents hopeful eyes, we can be encouraged and have enough confidence to move on. Besides in the village, we are always captured by the beautiful scene. When you awake, birds warble is around you, flowers florale are full in your bedroom and air is fresh and pleasant, what an amazing picture. I think you could in a good mood and have a good time all days, so one can be more successful and happier in their village due to the wonderful scene.

Admittedly, we should acknowledge that when someone go out from their village, they also can gain much that cannot obtain in their village, such as advanced knowledge, latest information, and so on, which all can contribute to one's success, but they lost more after they go out from their village. So one can succeed more easily and be happier in their village.

In summary, from what have been talked above, we can get the conclusion that people in their village will be more successful and happier, so I do not agree with the statement.

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第一页上有写每天的活动和分组的~

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谢谢你的修改和建议，我会吸取的。。。。

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改好咯

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2月21日 agree or disagree：  To make children to well at school, parents should limit the hour that a child spends on watching TV.

With the dramatical development of technology, television has become an indispensable part in every family, thus the issue that whether parents should limit the time children spend on watching on television gives arise, from my perspective, I agree that children's time spending on watching television should be limited in order to do well at schools. There are my reasons as following.

First and foremost, it is a waste of time when children sit in front of television, which cost a lot of time that should be spent in schoolings in essence. Assume a scene, there are two children, one spend all of his leisure in schoolings and the other spend all leisure time on watching television, how can the latter can catch up with the former who study all days at school? So in order to make progresses in schoolings, as to a student, more time should spent in the schooling, thus the time spent on watching television should be limited. Besides, according to an authority survey, researchers have interview and investigate more than 3000 samples, finding that a person who spend more than two hours a day in wedsite or television cannot reach a high summit easily.

In addition, television also can influence children's mental health that plays an important role in the schoolings. As we all know, there are too many unsuitable programs for children's development in television, such as violence, crime and bloody scene, which all can make children's mental health negative, thus children may lose aggressive incentive in the schoolings and they could do bad in schoolings gradually, so parents should limit the hour that a child spends on watching television.

What is more, we should acknowledge admittedly that some positive programs also can contribute to development of a child, but children are all too naive to select the significant programs to watch, they would go wrong at most time, so they should watch television with the supervision of parents and cannot watch more television as they want.

In summary, from what have been analysed above, watching television not only cost time, but also influence children's mental development, so I agree that parents should limit the hour that children spend on watching television in order they can do well at school.

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With the dramatical(dramstical) development of technology, television has become an indispensable part in every family, thus the issue that whether parents should limit the time children spend on watching on television gives arise, from my perspective, I agree that children's time spending on watching television should be limited in order to do well at schools. There are my reasons as following。

First and foremost, it is a waste of time when children sit in front of television, which cost a lot of time that should be spent in schoolings in essence. Assume a scene, there are two children, one spend all of his leisure in schoolings and the other spend all leisure time on watching television, how can the latter can catch up with the former who study all days at school? So in order to make progresses in schoolings, as to a student, more time should spent in the schooling, thus the time spent on watching television should be limited. Besides, according to an authority survey, researchers have interview(interviewed) and investigate(investigated) more than 3000 samples, finding that a person who spend more than two hours a day in wedsite(website) or television cannot reach a high summit easily.

In addition, television also can influence children's mental health that plays an important role in the schoolings. As we all know, there are too many unsuitable programs for children's development in television, such as violence, crime and bloody scene, which all can make children's mental health negative, thus children may lose aggressive incentive in the schoolings and they could do bad in schoolings gradually, so parents should limit the hour that a child spends on watching television.(我个人觉得这一段论证得不是很充分。比如暴力为什么会让孩子们失去进取心呢？为什么会do bad in schoolings呢？我认为这中间还需要一些东西，比如太暴力了 孩子们容易学电视里的打架逃课，从而对学习不好。)

What is more, we should acknowledge admittedly that some positive programs also can contribute to development of a child, but children are all too naive to select the significant programs to watch, they would go wrong at most time, so they should watch television with the supervision of parents and cannot watch more television as they want.

In summary, from what have been analysed(analyzed) above, watching television not only cost time, but also influence children's mental development, so I agree that parents should limit the hour that children spend on watching television in order they can do well at school.

LZ用的是让步式的结构哈。我还没有试过诶~我觉得LZ的文笔不错哈~比我好。学习学习。