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[活动] 2009 进军美利坚作文组 wondersmiths2第二十五次作业 9.15 [复制链接]

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现在这个年代,一个人想一辈子呆在一个单位工作是不可能的,是不现实的。你是否同意这个观点?
Nowadays, people mostly have done different jobs or worked for different companies for some reasons. It is hard for us to keep one job for your whole life in this competitive and rapidly developed society. Hence, in my opinion, I strongly agree that it is impossible for people to stay their work the same for a life-long time.

To begin with, we cannot guarantee that the place you work for can survive that you can work there for so long time. As far as we all know, a lot of companies in the modern time could be replaced by some more creative and competitive companies. In that way, the employees in the old companies will lose their jobs and thus they have to find other jobs. So, working in modern time, people have less sense of security than people several decades before, and also changing jobs gradually becomes a normal phenomenon for people. Sometimes, when people have seen each other for a long time, the first question they probably raise up is that: have you found a new job? or are you still in the old company? Therefore, it is not a big deal for people to change jobs any more.

Moreover, working for different places can expand your horizon and improve your competition in workforce market. At the same time, people can find out what job they like to do in their limited lifetime. For example, suppose that you have done a lot of different jobs, such as accountant, programmer and teacher. This is not surprising that a lot of people do not know which job should be their perfect job at the first place. After graduation, they just found jobs which can provide fundamental financial supports for their lives. But later they got to know the job was not suitable for them at all and thus they changed their jobs for their interests.

Of course, it should be admitted that old people always keep their job and never change. However, the development of society is beyond the imagination of people and jobs cannot be like a life partner for people any longer. People, especially young people, like to experience a variety of jobs in their life in order to look for the job they love indeed.

In conclusion, although someone may hope to be faithful to work on one place for the whole life, the places they work for may do not last for a long time. Meanwhile, changing jobs can offer a lot of benefits for people, such as accumulating more experience and making friends with different kinds of people. Therefore, people should keep changing their jobs until they find the right place for them.
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RE: 2009 进军美利坚作文组 wondersmiths2第二十五次作业 9.15

Nowadays, people mostly have done different jobs or worked for different companies for some reasons(感觉用现在时好点,两个for放在一起有点重复). It is hard for us to keep one job for your (our) whole life in this competitive and rapidly developed society. Hence, in my opinion, I strongly agree that it is impossible for people to stay (stay)their work the same for a life-long time. * J. c1 P9 A$ E% q) X

To begin with, we cannot guarantee that the place you work for can survive that you can work there for so long timesurvive后面的句子读的不顺can always survive when you work there. As far as we all know, a lot of companies in the modern time could be replaced by some more creative and competitive companies. In that way, the employees in the old companies will lose their jobs and thus they have to find other jobs. So, working in modern time考虑用别的词组来替换modern time,上面出现过一次, people have less sense of security than people several decades before, and also changing jobs gradually becomes a normal phenomenon for people. Sometimes, when people have notseen each other for a long time, the first question they probably raise up is that: have you found a new job? or (Or)are you still in the old company? Therefore, it is not a big deal for people to change jobs any more.

Moreover, working for different places can expand your horizon and improve your competition (competency) in workforce market. At the same time, people can find out what job they like to do in their limited lifetime. (For example, suppose that you have done a lot of different jobs, such as accountant, programmer and teacher. This is not surprising that a lot of people do not know which job should be their perfect job at the first place. After graduation, they just found jobs which can provide fundamental financial supports for their lives. But later they got to know the job was not suitable for them at all and thus they changed their jobs for their interests.)这小段我觉得可以再组织组织,可以更清晰
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Of course, it should be admitted that old people always keep their job and never change. However, the development of society is beyond the imagination of people and jobs cannot be like a life partner for people any longer. People, especially young people, like to experience a variety of jobs in their life in order to look for the job they love indeed.
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In conclusion, although someone may hope to be faithful to work on one place for the whole life, the places they work for may do not last for (such) a long time. Meanwhile, changing jobs can offer a lot of benefits for (to) people, such as accumulating more experience and making friends with different background. (kinds of people delete). Therefore, people should keep changing their jobs until they find the right place for them.


编辑起来来挺麻烦的,有什么好办法吗?我复制出来的时候还有乱码,不知道怎么回事。

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